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[SU & OCC] Pokemon Ultimate Trainers Academy

for him.

I'm trash.
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    I have edited my SU and even added a little bit more to make it four instead of three.
     
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  • It's better but the requirements states a minimum of two paragraphs for the personality and three for the history. Could you extend? I'm sure you can delve into your character a bit more.

    It did meet requirement in microsoft word i guess it must have shorten itself when i brought it over.
     

    chef30

    Great Scott!!!
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  • Name: Alice Violet Maples
    Age: 14
    Gender: Female
    Type: Student.
    Hometown: Cerulean City, Kanto.

    Appearance: She is a white girl with long curly red/orange hair, and she has brown sunglassed always sitting on top of her head. She wears white shorts, and a pink shirt with white, purple, light blue, and red flowers on it, with a pearl beaded necklace and a mint green small headband. She has pink eyes and pink buckle shoes. She has a brown belt and a tan, leather tote bag to carry her things. She has a flower charm anklet, and pearl earings. She also has a bracelet made of pink pearls,and a nice gold ring on her fourth finger. She is also five foot four.

    Personality: She is very kind to anyone she meets. She is optimistic very often, but can sometimes worry. She loves to make friends and meet new people. The only time she gets mad and worried is when something that is threatening to her friends happens. She loves to take care of and play with pokemon and children and she loves to encourage people. Sometimes she is shy, but most of the time she greets new people nicely. She likes to help people in need and surprise people with things they've been wanting. She is somewhat emotional, but not all the time. Whenever she sees someone poorer than her, she goes and gives them a special present. She is never the one to be mad. Whenever she sees somebody mad or sad, she goes to help them. She is always calm when something goes wrong and she tries to look on the good side of everything.

    History: When Alice was ten, her grandfather died. She was very disapointed after that happened. But she would comfort her grandmother every time Alice vistited her grandmother. Sometimes her younger brother, Thomas, and older sister, Bethany, would come along with Alice. Then her grandmother gave her a special pearl necklace which she still treasures today. Then her, and her family, moved along with Alice's grandmother and Alice's friend. They moved from Twinleaf town in Sinnoh to Cerulean City in Kanto.

    After a few years, when she was twelve, her parents got a divorce when she was an avarage pokemon trainer. She still remained kind, but very disapointed. She was torn about how her mother and father didn't live together anymore so she had to always make trips to visit one of them. She didn't ever want to show favorites between her mom and dad. Then her grandmother would encourage Alice to not be disapointed, but to be thankful that she had a mom and dad at the least. Then Alice's grandmother would tell Alice stories about when Alice was little. Her grandmother was also telling Alice stories about when her grandmother and her grandfather were together.

    Alice, during the time her parents were divorced, was a pokemon trainer travaling through the Kanto region earning badges with her two pokemon, Dean the ditto, and Bailey the Chikorita which she got from Pallet Town. She had been taking breaks from her journey and was viting her family and that's why she never earned all the badges she needed to get to the pokemon league. But she did beat the first gym leaders of Kanto and Sinnoh while she was still living in the Sinnoh region.

    After two more years, she decieded to enrole at The Ultimate Pokemon Trainer Acadamy. She waited and waited to see if she would make it in. She had been wanting to go there so badly. Then she found out she could go, and her family and friends were so excited for her and they were also disapointed that she was leaving them. After she said good bye to her family and her dear friend, Elizabeth, she set out on a new journey to become a better trainer and maybe even a better person. Maybe she can even figure out how to get her parents back together through the experiences she has at the acadamy.

    Pokémon (Up to 3 Maximum):
    Species: Ditto.
    Nickname(Optional): Dean
    Personality: He is very kind and playful. He likes to play tricks on pokemon and people by copying their appearence.
    Level: 14
    Moveset: Transform.

    Species: Chikorita
    Nickname(Optional): Bailey
    Personality: She is very kind and determoned. She also likes to help other pokemon and people.
    Level: 15
    Moveset: Vine Whip, Razor Leaf, Tackle, Leech seed.


    Okay, I ust edited it and added more to the personality. If there's anything else, let me know because i RLY wana join this Rp ^_^
     
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    finished. :D id have to say the hardest part was deciding on a team and their moveset. im not really good with that stuff. :s if anybody has any opinions on how to improve it, ill gladly take them into account.

    btw, sorry if the personality is a little lackluster. lol. :/

    Spoiler:
     
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  • Ducklighter, I'm not so sure about continuity but my next post for Jack was going to be about five hours into the day at the end of his first shift of working at the Crown City Stadium, though people haven't RPed that far into the day yet. Will it disrupt the story too much if I post into the future?
     

    Ducklighter

    Throw caution to the wind.
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  • Ducklighter, I'm not so sure about continuity but my next post for Jack was going to be about five hours into the day at the end of his first shift of working at the Crown City Stadium, though people haven't RPed that far into the day yet. Will it disrupt the story too much if I post into the future?

    Nah, go for it! We need a bit of a time jump since things are going a bit slow :/
     
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    I'm sorry Ducklighter, but I'm going to have to withdraw from this RP. I'm currently preparing for a music history exam, in an accelerated class, and I have become too busy to really have any time to stay active in this RP, and keep up with everything. So you can remove Lira and Cole from the members list and leave another student and Civilian spot open.
     
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    just thought id throw a post up since nobody else has. lmao. and i know. wasnt it so original of me to introduce my character while hes in the middle of a battle? :b

    so basically, Sawyer and Rose (some random NPC i made lol) are on their way to CyBeastSabers cafe, but are now sidetracked and in a pokemon battle. in my next post, im just gonna end it with Sawyer losing. lol.
     

    CyBeastSaber

    I'M BACK!
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  • i guess nobody can help me with movesets. lol. and why is nobody posting? :((((((((((

    I dunno.... Cause everyone is dead gone?!

    Movesets.... Depends... I can try? Oh... and Garen is out of the shop at the moment but he has his in-training employee watching over the shop with a few others. I'm trying to finish her SU among other things.
     
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    should we contact the gm? or maybe just message everyone seeing if they are still interested? i dont know. :////
     

    Fuyu

    The answer is at the top...
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    I still am but I'm kinda stuck doing nothing too. I'm tempted to have my character wander off or something.
     

    for him.

    I'm trash.
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    I am very sorry. I am the poster that is slowing the RP down. I am still working on my post, but I am almost finished with it. My post should come in about a day or two.
     

    for him.

    I'm trash.
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    Real life sucks, but I managed to get it up today! Yahoo! A day later than what I promised, but I did manage to get it up today. I could not find a way to end my post though. I spent a long time contemplating on how to end it and I only manged to come up with something that ended up being really bad.
     
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