Aura Rift

Hmm.. yeah.. But I want the uninfected to win againist Deoxys, even though I'll do whatever I can as Alistar to prevent that!

We could create an interesting relationship between the two. Alistar will be looking for revenge for his scarred face and HE will get it :P

You know, I had a bit of a chat with Equi earlier, that started with talking about Four not posting a reply, but it ended up in, what I think was her admitting that she'd think that Flight and Axel would make a cute couple XD

You're completely and utterly right. Still, I do say you're one of the better RP'ers I've come across in a good while. Alot of people on this forum is like that, which makes me happy ^^

Also, NOOOO, Flight! D: You monster ;_;

Sweet :3 I don't mean to seem like I'm pushing you to posting against your will or anything! I just really like your posts. You're a great RP'er, and Sho is a pretty awesome character!

Hey man! Was just wondering what everyone from DD was up to, and wanted to let you know that the thread could probably do with a post from you :3 Lots of stuff is going on all of a sudden!

... Though still no word from Four about Deoxys and Benny. So Axel is still stuck. Sadface.

Well, the reason I suggested the change in personality was because in order to enter the Gold Tribe, it doesn't just mean to be a very strong Pokemon. You have to have the determination and commitment to go along with it. Very few Pokemon would die to protect something (not including family or loved ones). It's an honorable road, but also a self-sacrificial one.

Anywaays, on to your SU. Ah, Allen. An interesting choice, but I guess I'll roll with it. I would like to point out, however, that the next time you meet him (or any Sentinel), it won't be easy as in the SU to defeat them. Some may call it godmodding, but I'm the GM, deal with it. xD

Although quite a bit of your history is dialogue, I'm willing to go with that. Still, your length is good enough, but I'm not sure enough detail was put into what you've been doing all this time and such. Like, more about your background, and such. Bah, alright, I guess I'll just make you do it in your first post. You're basically accepted.

Please don't post yet, as I have to figure out where I'm going to put you in the story, as I hate it when new RPers just waltz in out of nowhere right in the middle of the action. (always hated that in other RPs).

When I figure something out, I'll send you a PM telling you where you'll come in. If you've actually been following the storyline and reading the posts, you can give me a suggestion via PM if you have one. If you haven't read through the posts I encourage you to. If you don't want to (I know, its quite a bit), I'll summarize via PM when I figure out where you'll be coming in from.

Haha, yes you :3 and I think you're the only one left xD I don't really have anyone else here to talk to that I can think of. :3

Lol, you should have said something man. I would have taken a look at it right away.

Ok, so I took a look at your SU, and I have found some problems with it. The first is the History. There is no other members in the 'Silver Tribe' other than the 8 Sentinels. I scrapped the original idea. The Silver Tribe= Ancient Army, 8 Sentinels, and Auron. Nobody else, so unfortunately, "Rodrick" doesn't exist. Of course, this will probably change your SU quite a bit.

This would also mean there is no Dragonite he would be fighting in Gold City. The Silver Tribe force is made up of the "Ancients", which is an army of fossil Pokemon (Kabutops, Rampardos, Aerodactyl, etc.)

One thing I can suggest for you to do is to make this fried Rodrick one of the other Sentinels, and then you wouldn't have to change as much. The Sentinels are listed in the first post of the OOC under Important NPCs.

Also, one more thing, although this is more of a suggestion than a demand. You may want to revise the personality a bit to match that to one of a Gold Tribe member. Most Gold Tribe members have a sense of duty and honor instilled in them when they join the Gold Tribe. This is optional, but you might wanna consider it to be better adapted to what the Gold Tribe means.

Make these changes, and then I'll check on your SU again.

Hey :) What's up? Reply when you can on DD, we need to get moving and I'm waiting for a reaction XD

Haha, I don't find this place too attractive anymore. Not many people for me to talk to. :3

Well, he is xD Which is probably why SV chose him. lol

Good :) I doubt you will see me angry anytime soon

lol no the golden part was his idea xD I told him to be a Bisharp, after he asked me which Pokemon in 5th gen were cool xD

That is silly. When have you ever seen me mad eh? :P

I know silly :)

I HELPED SV MAKE THAT BISHARP YOU KNOW

Not my fault.

Dude, I have a Golden Bisharp as my character, you honestly think I'll have any problems with your appearance? xD Don't worry, I have no objections.

Although that gold pendant you wear, you should consider making that your Gold Tribe emblem. Every member wears one, either as a necklace, bracelet, or armband. You should make this your emblem, if you want.

(Hehe, my favorite thing to say!!) Well bleh! too long! :3 How has you been?

How was I supposed to know? :P

Too long for my liking.