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((Hi! Thanks for all the comments. I apologize for the 2 week hiatus... I've been... busy.)) Chapter Two (Live-Action Addendum): An Honest Confusion "Welcome to the 200th meeting of AMASS!" a voice barked. As I saw Flower and Charcoal standing at the head of the room, I eyed the room and...

I enjoyed the read, but... To be honest, it's got lots of poor grammar and it kind of takes a toll on a reader's eyes. You might want to work on that.

((Oh yeah, thanks, ACC. I guess I lapsed there... introducing the word a few chapters too early. :( Ah well. Um... heh, I never expected such positive reviews...)) Chapter Two: Allied Axis Midnight, turning to the third morning Journal, you wouldn't judge me, right? I mean, sure I'm...

((Patience, reader. All in due time)) Chapter 1.5: Reaction Button Afternoon Two Oh, Journal, what have I done? My birthday has been one big muddle after another. I should have known better than to ask for a surprise party. I think it was half-past 8 when I got up from my snuggly makeshift...

Um... is it Camerupt? Next: Krnk Hint: You might want to know some of their Japanese names for this one!

((Thanks, everyone! Sorry I'm a little slow on the second chapter. Between a sad new stage of writers' block, FFR, and SM, I've been busy. Y'all missed my 19th birthday last Friday, too! It's okay, though; I wasn't even on that day. :))) Chapter One: Chain Reaction Night One Hi again...

*Okay, I'm trying again. I did this story a LONG time ago, updated grammar and spelling, and... well, I hope it's okay with you! Prologue: Magma Plasma Shock Day One Dear Journal, Let me introduce myself. I am Lance Alaite, but currently I'm better known as Plasma. That's because I'm...

Verse 1 Flowers, sleep at ease Protected from winter's breeze Blossom with the trees Verse 2 In vernal's soft glow, The moon keeps us safe below, From what we don't know. Verse 3 Summer, bring your sun It's heat battle, everyone Sprinklers are so fun. Verse 4 Autmnal, bring bliss, And with...

I snarled at the Rockets, hearing the call for back-up. As I braced myself for an attack, I grimaced at Amanda, who was being held hostage by a Kadabra. "Hold on, Amanda," I said with a half-smile. "Flambé-kaze!" I yelled, expelling a massive wall of fire from my mouth directly at the...

I glared at Solice, passionate flames dancing in my eyes. {What!?} I yelled to her, in disbelief. {Why am I like this?} Solice shook her head softly. {Oh, Avi,} she replied with care, {I have no idea. Granted, this... Quilava... taur... thing might not be so bad for you.} {Not so bad?} I...

{Kyr... I...} I whispered in my slumber. As I sleep-spoke, I felt a paw whip across my face. I opened my eyes in terror, hunching my head slightly to my left. I saw a Houndoom's muzzle hovering right between my eyes, yet then saw a tinge of pink where a Houndoom is usually red-orange in fur...

Don't worry, C_M, I'm going to the RP straight after. AJ, I'm a little upset with your novelization. Two reasons: 1. You just go straight into Avi's dialogue without even noting that he is the Quilava hybrid. 2. Some capitalization and grammatical problems kind of threw me off course...

{Tired... I'm so tired right now,} I told Solice softly. {I don't remember a thing...} I lay down on all fours, relaxed my hind legs, and let my eyes flutter to the closed position. As I lay asleep on the grass, Solice slowly padded toward me and curled up at my left side, rubbing her head...

Don't worry about it, AE. Reading that simply told me that I needed to get my story better before I brought it out to the public. ((Hint, hint, O.J. Simpson.))

I'd like help. I really enjoy writing fanfics and stories, except I seem to keep falling into the traps of abusing cliches and overly ambiguous wording... I would appreciate some advice on how to avoid these pitfalls to better my fanfic writing skills...