Yeah, but at first I didn't make things slow, I just went with what I was feeling at the moment and put it into the story, which wasn't good on my part but I felt better after that, lol. I think I have something that you may like, it's the first chapter to Pikachu's Beginning.
Here:
Gary watched the hyper active baby Pikachu and felt the air in his lungs staid there. Nadia had this look about her, this emotion running everywhere around her but some how she did not see or feel it. Her strands of hair tickle the tip of Pichu's ears, making him shake his head with laughter.
'She looks like a mother.' Gary thought to himself.
And thanks for the quick message on fixing my error on my post, I didn't even thought of the rule of bumping it, went to bed since I was so tired. and I will not be on later on today, after I get home from school, my mom and I will be over at her friends so yeah.... I hoped you like that part Blue Angel.