Recent content by Blue Angel

Thanks Drew, (and if all else fails I can try it Censored's way ^^) I can always run it through WORD for spelling, etc. and then make the changes in the Notepad document. That'll do (^^,)

Sorry, that is all gibberish to me. :/ Can you dumb it down for me? EDIT to your edit: Oh okay, I guess I'll just have to format it once I paste it here to something different. As long as it looks okay, I guess it's fine. Thanks for answering so quickly. Sad that the formatting won't make it...

Every time I try to copy and paste a fanfiction I wrote in a WORD document into a thread or a PM, it changes to a different, smaller font, and loses the spaces and the indents. It looks horrible and small. I don't know how to fix it.

I loved it! ^^ But it does anger me that it is so short XD I enjoy your writing so much and then you disappoint me with only a little. JK - Any amount is worth the time =D Only found one error and it was quite minor: Keep up the good work!

I always enjoy reading your work (which is also obvious by the fact that I was the last to comment before this new chapter). I am glad to say that inspiration hit me while reading your story(surprisingly, my story idea was nothing like your story). I did like the part about the red eyes; at...

AWWW! I loved it! Although in Ruby's part, where he first said "Christmas"(toward the very end) you spelled "Christmas" wrong. I'm sorry I took so long to get around to reading your work. It didn't take that long to read at all! Excellent work, as always! ^^

Wohoo! Update! It is always fun to read your chapters. ^^ I saw a few spelling errors but chances are, since I'm not reading a refreshed version and that you posted this a while ago that those errors where already caught. What can I say? Another great chapter to another great story. I hope...

I've read the first chapter so far but I plan on continuing soon. It's fun to read your work. I thought bolding the font made it a little harder to read but that's just me :p Other people said it was harder to read when it was in smaller font so maybe it is best to leave it alone and let me...

Obviously, Hikari's love is supposed to be meant as brotherly/sisterly, but who knows if she meant more than just that. I didn't see any errors. I really don't have time for a "scanning" inspection, but if it wasn't obvious simply by reading it then it won't be obvious to many others. Good...

I have only one error to report in chapter 7 and it is a simple one. Everything else seemed perfect. And why shouldn't it? A story with Jun, Hikari, and Kouki is enough for me :P The first part is in past tense, but the next two parts in in present. Most of your chapter is written in past...

I loved it. Probably because I like the relationship between the Trio, so any story including them is hard for me to put down or find fault with. Agreeing with the above statement, I did not see any spelling or grammatical errors ( or I was to enthralled into reading it) It's sad the Jun is...

I can't say I've ever seen a Kirlia as I starter. Although, Psychic starters would be strong and highly useful without game limitations (like random "Use Psychic to throw ____ into a wall!" or "Use Psychic to toss the boulder at ____.") I think Pokemon that eventually evolve into something rare...

In the area of modern non-Pokemon technology, I would say not so far as flying cars or freakishly tall skyscrapers, but maybe greater modifications to things that already exist. Pokemon Technology is a bit different. There are new items to use in every game (PokeNav, Poketch...) for everyday...

*Blink, blink* My post disappeared. Oh well, back to the drawing board... I finished read both of your new chapters. I am glad to say I saw no errors - grammatical, spelling, or otherwise. It took me a couple seconds to fully understand the name "Phillar Caractor" but I was glad when I did...

You might not want to make Larvitar warm up to Vera so quickly. It takes time for a Pokemon to grow to its trainer. A week isn't quite enough. They haven't had time to bond, or done anything to bond. Battling is one of those things that bring the Pokemon and Trainer together. Just slow...