Recent content by Blue Screen of Death

Well, I'm back from more than a years absence. I may not be on to frequently, but I do not intend to be gone for more than a week. I first signed up when I was thirteen. Posted some crappy fanfiction, got in a few roleplays, nothing much. It feels weird to think that I was thirteen when I first...

I'm back from a short break. I was sidetracked by that oh so wonderful thing called life. I still won't be very active, but I am going to try to be online more often. On a side note, I'm just shy, not antisocial!

"He's waking up!" I heard a hushed voice not far from me say. "Yeah right. Just like how he was waking up yesterday, and the day before that?" Another, more distant voice replied. "No, he really is waking up this time! I saw his eyelids twitching!" The first voice argued. "You...

What's your least-favorite genre, and why? Historical fiction. The stuff just seems so boring. I mean, these stories are all about life in the past, normally showing how horrible it was. If I want to learn how life was a hundred years ago, I'll look in my history book.

Sweet, this sounds like lots o' fun! Not to mention the first (and only) prompt. If you can't come up with something good with fire, then you either are having a very slow day, or are not very creative. My only concern is that I might have a slow start because the first three days of this are...

Title: Iron man Link: Here Summary A man, turned into a monster by an evil company, is seeking revenge. But can he cope with being the first iron man? Genre Sci-Fi Degree of Completion In-Progress Chaptered-fic.

"I'm an ex-Grunt!" Ryley heard the kid say "And I was barely even that! The biggest mission I ever got was taking a check to the Veilstone Post Office to mail to Jubilife for our TV commercials. Really!" "Yeah right," Ryley thought, "How do I know he didn't steal pokemon from small children?"...

Wow. Just wow. I wrote this and I want to club the author over the head with an anti-dumb stick. Where would I even find an anti-dumb stick though? That would be cool to have one! Oh, and about that whole chosen one thing, that was actually something I had planned, but never wrote. And it...

There is no way anybody would be normal after having seen the things in here. What do you hate most in fan-fictions? Mostly people who are told multiple times about simple mistakes, yet do nothing to correct them when they write anything else. That and people messing with the formatting...

I'm sorry, but I'm going to have to drop out.

Name: Nathan Amaly Gender: Male Age: 15 Pokemon: Sableye Appearance: Nathan usually wears a pair of worn down jeans with a solid color tee shirt. He has a light tan, due to his farm work, and a few scars on his arms and back from when the pokemon on his farm get angry or scared. This is also...

"A Rattata?" Ryley said, kneeling down to examine to pokemon further. "It is kinda cute." He hesitantly extended his hand to pet the small pokemon, only to receive a hostile hiss. "Okay, so he isn't a friendly pokemon." Ryley observed, standing up. "Back in the pokeball you go."...

The names are fine, you shouldn't worry about whether or not other people will like your characters names. But, there is one thing you should know. Unless you are in an area native to these names, I would recommend using English names. Sadly, so many people have used Oriental names (mainly...

Chapter four: Halen's misdeeds. I awoke early the next day, feeling rather cold. "Perhaps I should have gone to get that firewood back." I thought, standing up. My body still felt stiff from the metal, but that did not impede my stretching. I came to an abrupt stop when I saw a young girl...

What is ADAR? I do not speak acronyms constantly, so I don't know this one. Also, the sequel to an unfinished story... Is it a stand-alone sequel? Even if it is just white, you should tell the readers that. Put a little action in your stories! All the talking is confusing! Lastly, I have two...