Citrinin

I think at this point, its one of the reasons I am using the anime, its a bit like cheating, but its still fun to write about, and its legit in this case XD

However I do have two stories in the back of my head (not related to Pokemon), that are somewhat original, but when I look at them, I find that (for example) one is a cross over from Armageddon and 2001: Space Odyssey; I think that assement might be off though (sans romance), while the other is a conglomerate of movies/stories involving evil children. I may be just criticizing myself though.

However I haven't given much detail on each XD

Actually, it's 152.

TTFN!

Limits? There are no limits! Dun-duh-duuun!

Yeah, I've probably had soooo much medium influence, I only wonder if my ideas are ever original. XD

The good thing is, is that one of the earliest stories (the Bible) is in some parts of it, involves good vs. evil.

Yeah I think I was supposed to have said "Umph", and "Ough" reminds me of "Agh"

The funny thing is, is that my fic (even in my head) seems to almost be a combination of Harry Potter, Pokemon and Star Wars, despite the fact I intended it not to be so.

I suppose it doesn't help much, when the idea of "Aura" is lousily based off the Jedi stuff (which are also based off of Japanese martial artists or however that history worked).

However once I begin to kick off with the initial incident, it will be a bit more independent.

Yes, that's good. I'm happy. my fic will be bigger than ur fic teehee We'll see. I'll keep reviewing yours, and writing both fics that I have on the go.

:D It would certainly add to the air of fear. Like that a human would be capable of such things.

I did want to add it in for extra "oumph" to a major baddie (spoilers!). But I also like the idea of presenting a situation, even if it doesn't 100% continue the plot, it at least gives a face to the antagonist.

There's that too. :t155:

*character limit*

I think I might have the past be apart of the first half of the fic, then the major plot happenings will take place, of which I don't think the past would need to be dweleved on, until a later point, if anything.

There's Hamilton Boys' High School, Hamilton Girls' High School, Hamilton Diocesan School for Girls, St John's College (boys), Sacred Heart (girls), and a couple of others. Am I one of those, or an 'other'? You'll have to wait and see.

Responded too :)

Yeah the past isn't too hard to write either, it is just I'm not to sure at which point would be the best. As currently, the past I had presented so far was in the prologue and more or less a sum up. In the next past portion, I want to provide a concurrent happening... hmmm Perhaps I can follow suite with the real time story. That is to say, perhaps I can have the bad guy starting out on his journey, or something like that.

Besides, the name of my school gives away my gender.

For the gender thing, it's mostly just to confuse and annoy people. I mean, I behave like a little bit of both at times. As for my age, I like to see people guess and under/overestimate me. So really, it's just the school thing. I mean, if I told you I went to XXXX, and you had the right contacts, you could easily piece together who I am from what I've told you and other people combined with other people who know what a PokeNut I am.

I'm a little paranoid myself, actually. Notice that I haven't actually put my age, gender, or school anywhere.

I think I'll try and start it tomorrow after work or something :S I know what I want to do for the Ash and co part, it is just deciding what I want to do with the past.

Managed it. A bit of a tougher review, hope you don't mind. But you're definitely really good with character development and the air of mystery.

Man... I really gotta start writing chapter two of mine.

They think Pokemon is the dumbest thing ever invented by mankind. And Mum is internet-paranoid, and is constantly complaining about all the social networking sites - Facebook, Myspace etc. I agree with her so that she's sure I'm not up to anything. It's not fun, but it's necessary.

The other problem is that you can access the specs and see how much gig has been uploaded and downloaded in the last month. I apparently don't upload anything, but I have a feeling that even this VM counts as uploading. I just tell them I edit Wikipedia, lol.

Same. We've been on shared broadband since I got my computer last year, and we've never passed the 10gig mark as far as I know. I use an awful lot in the holidays, though.