Claire*

Hahawkward. :DDD

Half of the stuff I was thinking of would suffice :P

Oh? Anything?

I wonder what that means... ;D

You're just jealous because you don't have my awesome button-pushing skills. :D

yes, pushing buttons is what I do best. That's how I type right now, after all!

Hoho, that was brilliant.

I'm just kidding...

It'll be a magnificent piece of writing that will be ravished by generations!

Yes, it will definitely turn out better. :P

It might actually turn out better...

Yes, I know you are not a fan, but... well never mind, I'll just do them however I like, and you'll have to put up with it. xD

I don't even remember... xD hmm... what would you like to see in an action scene?

Oh, pardon me, I did not phrase that correctly. In what way you think the action should be improved, as to be as enjoyable as dialogue? You know, I'm quite a bit afraid of expanding the action part of the fic, as I have the paranoid fear that it gets boring or messy and confusing after a few lines... ):

That would be okay :D

Hmm... but why is that? I need to pinpoint the reason, so I can improve further upon it... is it content-wise, or context-wise? As for the action, did it lack anything in particular?

Claire, you didn't tell me what you thought of the latest chapter? Why have you stopped commenting, did you get so bored of repeating they're perfect? :D

I see, I see, thank you, kind lady. (:

Because I'm back into planning its spin off, and I'd like to synchronize with it again. Can you give me a summary of what happened and tell me what I have to keep in mind, please?

I'm returning in Odyssey. :P

Well, I still have the earliest concept of it... So don't expect awesomeness yet.

It's about these dudes that have some sort of mental disease and end up in a place referred to as just there, which changes of form and even backstory depending on who enters it. For example, a small forest path could turn into freezing tundra with ice dragons, and then into a small pond with lots of goldfishes. But there seems to be something that slowly destroys the land. Long story short, the players have to interact with their worst fears as they materialize in orders to save a land that may or may not exist...

It was a horrible pun, but awesomeness excuses mistakes... :D