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I don't understand what you meant there sorry dude xD

Hello! I noticed you sign up for our RP, Hyrus. I just wanted to inform you of a problem Raikiri and I found with your sign up. It's clear to us that you've had some experience RPing perhaps on a different forum, but here on PC, we generally require a much more descriptive section for a character's personality. I must insist that you build on your personality a bit and describe Ladamer a bit more thoroughly (examples can be found in the thread of others RPer's characters). Your appearance and history is more than adequate however.

Another problem is that you have listed that you wish to be a sort of bodyguard of Raelus, which is fine, but you should still be on the side of the knights, perhaps sent to Ekilore as a representative of the Raelusian King. Since your character is nobility and an advisory aide to the King, it would fit.

Also, it would be great if you could provide an RP sample with your SU as well, perhaps from a post you just recently made on PC, or make one up if you haven't gotten a chance to make one yet.

Other than that, the SU is fine. Make the necessary changes and we can fully review your SU. Good luck!

Ahahah, we all have the urge at some point don't worry. xD

Okay, will do. c: If you want to wait till I reply to the PM before you write your next IC post then that'd probably a good idea since you can see where you need to end it and stuff :3

Paha, I like number 2 most. x] Good luck dude ;D

I noticed your conversation with Starsprite so I included the basement/key pass thing at the start of the joint post in the PM I'm writing now. c: If you end your next IC post saying we'll battle then I'll post the first half of the joint post where we arrive and the start of the battle, then you post the second half of the battle and what happens after - that sound okay to you? :D

Okay. Well that's okay then. So are you happier with the flow of posting today? I know I am. A lot of people have arrive, or are planning to by the end of today.

Oh, and one thing, there should probably be guards at the stadium entrance. Just make sure you mention that. Show them your room key or something.

If you Google the Garbodor thing it will ruin any innocence you had left. Trust me.

Alright, I'll do that then. :D I'll make it so that the Waterfall crashes Bronzong into the ground so it has to pick itself back up with Psychic (since it doesn't have arms or legs to pick itself up :p) and then whilst its using Psychic its defenses will be lower, so then you'll be able to get in some powerful attacks. Then I'll probably get it to use Iron Defense after you've attacked it a bit and we'll be near to the end of the battle? :D

This PM might take a little while to write though so bare with me. x]

So now you need to write an introduction post in the IC thread and end it with something like "Let's battle.", then we'll split the joint one and post half each. :D

(I edited the last VM after you started replying so yeah, check back please x])

Oo sounds Zelda-y, sounds good :D

Yeah, it learns it by breeding. c: And it's pretty much essential for a Garbodor to function well :3

I've posted there. :D How about you end your next post by saying we should battle, then we'll joint-post the battle we've been writing when it's done? We can split it in half and post half each since it's getting pretty long haha.

Btw would you rather I kept with what you wrote or change it to the inexperienced thing? I'm not sure which to write xD Although I've gotta say your Twister/Waterfall combo was really exciting to read, we should definitely keep it. How about I'll add a couple turns in before that happens and bunny Dragonair in those turns, then the combo you did will be the turning point of the whole battle? Tbh I wouldn't even mind if Dragonair won the battle if it has moves like that. xD

Oh and the reply I wrote out to your last VM:

That's true haha. The anime does have some ridiculous moments like that :x That's why I made sure Bronzong had Toxic so Garbodor could get some type coverage with Rock Blast x]

People have posted in the RP so I'll have Ryudo wake up now and meet you :D I'll make a post where Ryudo wakes up and introduces himself, then your's can end with them going to the battle arena? :3

Internet's back up so I'll post it now :D

What sign-up are you working on? ^^

Well I missed a lot. I guess that's what I get for getting up late. xP

So as long as you guys have this all planned out I'm fine with it. Though it might be nice if you would actually show me how you transition from one scene to another before you actually post it. (from the room to the arena) You don't have to, but it would be nice to see.

hey dude my house's internet is down atm so posting this from my phone but just saying i do have my next rp post ready in notepad so ill post it as soon as the internet is back up. ill also reply to the vm then too :3

Hmm...my characters are kind of based a bit far from the cafeteria or within the halls. I think there was someone else in the cafeteria, but I don't recall who it was >.<

I agree; we'll have some hugely damaging explosiony attacks, then it'll be a case of whoever she decides rises from the rubble I guess x] Tbh there's no reason it can't end in a draw if that'd be more effective; plus I can see you're worried about the type match-up so I don't mind it being a draw if you want. Although type matches really don't mean a win or loss in RPing; any Pokemon stands a great chance if its used properly. c:

And yeah, really going to sleep this time, peace. o/

Well you know that type advantages don;t mean the world when you're RPing. They help, but you can always use strategy over brute force. You two should probably predetermine the results of the battle anyways. xP

Well I'm always willing to RP something random, if you need help with writers block. (RPing with someone is my cure for it. I don't know about you. xD)

Ah. Sorry. I haven't checked back since I last posted.

Oh, how come? Something wrong?

Check my latest VM from Starsprite about who wins the battle and how to do it. c: I reckon we should do the battle up till the last move and let her decide, since I can't see either of us backing down. xD Whatcha think?

Plus I'm gonna go sleep now so peace o/

Yes. It is so.

And I will, definitely.

So did you edit your SU yet, or are you starting your battle with Ozzy now?

Steel/Psychic. :3

Starsprite xD

Mind if I swap to Bronzong? I'm kinda itching to try using it in battle :3