Not much. But I read your first chapter of "A guilty conscience." I liked how you built suspense in it. Even if it wasn't intentional. When he saw the box that had 1 badge in it, a was wondering "Did he lose 7 badges?" "Did he leave them at home?" "Who's he calling?"
I asked a lot of questions and you answered them in due time. I'll get around to reading more later ^^ Maybe I'll find out why he had to move when he was young.
I asked a lot of questions and you answered them in due time. I'll get around to reading more later ^^ Maybe I'll find out why he had to move when he was young.