Thanks! That works! That's so simple and elegant, why didn't I think of that?! >:(
I'm also worried that if I show Giovanni having an emotion that isn't anger, depression, or malicious intention, he will look too feminine. I'm already afraid that I've made him sound like a girl. Does he not sound like a man, the way I write him?
I'm also worried that if I show Giovanni having an emotion that isn't anger, depression, or malicious intention, he will look too feminine. I'm already afraid that I've made him sound like a girl. Does he not sound like a man, the way I write him?