thank you, i noticed your update! i see you wrote a bit more, but i actually didn't see a lot more depth to your character... could you just change it up a little to talk about different aspects of his personality? he is shy and doesn't like talking to people much is what we know, but what more? is he mischievous or obedient, caring or aloof, cheerful or brooding? what motivates him to do what he does? i'm sorry to ask this of you, but i'd just like you to put a little more thought into it!