Recent content by Midnight Jasper

OOC: Okay...I'll keep that in mind. Thanks. Lakel heard the soft pad of approaching footsteps. She turned her head automatically to look; another morph, one who she had never seen before, entered on a trolley. It was an Armaldo morph - but not in the best of health. He had a huge, bloody gash...

"Watch over him till you get there. No protests, I'm not leaving until the rest of the team gets out alive. You'll be safe at the nearby town. If you need anything don't hesitate to contact me." So now I was stuck. In a truck. Great. My eyes flickered over to Aisha, the Arcanine morph. She...

<<OOC: Namora, what exactly is your character called? You used both 'Jake' and 'Jack' in your last post.>> "JACK! This is an order! Tell everyone now. Start retreating to the rendezvous. That's an order!" My eyes flickered up. I was, frankly, amazed that I could even move. Sabrina leered at the...

Oh, no...oh no, oh no, oh no... I tried to assess the situation as quickly as I could, but all I could feel was a dark, sudden, blind panic. Another morph fallen...Really, what chance did we have? Okay...we needed to defend those who were unconscious, in the vague hope that they wouldn't die...

Sabrina has Clove? What? Clove was...our leader. So it follows, naturally, that he was the strongest. The alpha male, as my Lapras half puts it so eloquently. And if he fell...what do we have? I felt fire burning darkly under my skin. Jade's words were muted in my ears, but at least I did...

230 Face it, we WILL overcome you.

Just as soon as I had made my dramatic return, the ground started to rumble. I flinched; this, surely, was not a good sign. I stumbled backwards and hugged the wall, seeing Jack do the same. Our enemies rose almost comically twenty feet into the air before crashing down to the floor again. A...

This way. I was in a dark cave. Some sticky, transparent substance covered every stalactite and dripped off them unappetizingly. It was pitch-black, but somehow I knew exactly where to go and exactly where to turn. It was like something was calling to me, beckoning me, showing me a map so I...

After we kill him, we'll finish the girl off, too. The girl's dead. I was just hiding her body so you guys wouldn't mess with it. The girl's dead. I don't know why it hurts so much, but I guess it's one of those really irrational things. I just...have never, ever been a burden in my entire...

Can you see that, Lakel? It's an Espeon. Graceful creatures, aren't they? Pretty, too. I always liked the graceful creatures. It's chasing us! Do something! Why? What can I do? Your body's failed you, Lakel. I knew it would happen sometime, with you throwing out a Sing like that. Dramatic...

Was it working? Anxious, I opened my eyes. Amongst the swarming crowd, it seemed to me that a few were asleep. Or maybe that was just my mind playing tricks on me. I had hoped - somehow - that the effect would be amazing, that everyone would suddenly fall into a deep slumber. Now, I realized...

I was absolutely furious with myself. How stupid can you get? And being lectured...this was so humiliating. I didn't know what to blame - the mud, the truck, the rain, the rubbish in-land air...but most of all I had to blame myself. "I don't tolerate tardiness. We're trying to save the world...

That is a good idea. And don't worry, nothing can be too 'Farfetch'd' in the Pokemon world. (I'll leave it like that, because I don't want to launch into a giant 'realism' rant.) As for a plot, don't use people you don't know that much about. How about making up your own stuff? A team whose...

I can't disagree with bobandbill, but just a few pointers - - Skip the intro part up to 'this is the story of my final journey' and start with you climbing out of the cave with your Dragonair. This makes it seem more like a story and less like an autobiography. - Split up your paragraphs! Every...

This is doubly annoying when somebody who can write perfectly well does it, completely knowingly but just in this I-Can't-Be-Bothered way. Paired up with endless dialogue and no description/visible plot, it's enough to make me want to scream. Here is a passage explaining exactly what I mean...