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I tend to write stories which don't use canonical characters, so you could say I gravitate more towards original fiction in some ways. But I think my point is moot because most of my stories are character-based rather than plot-based, so they focus more on how people relate to people (or...
Glad to be of inspiration! Feel free to shoot me a PM about whatever. Sorry in advance if I take a while to respond. I've only been on PC intermittently this past two weeks because I just got swamped with a large amount of work suddenly.
Ugh, I meant to respond to this sooner, but I've had a hell of a week. It's still ongoing, but I feel like it'd be impolite to keep putting this off.
Anti-climax actually wasn't a theme I was aiming for, haha, but I can definitely see where you're coming from. It was completely unintentional I...
Hahaha, I love this! I think my favourite part was the Meowstic being questioned for buying eggs. That was the best written part because the humour worked well written out--the character voices were also spot on.
Another part I really liked was the jump from "The look on your face when you get...
Maybe it's my inherent bias towards hikkikomori stories, but I think this has loads of potential to be something really interesting. For one thing, I quite like the mystery behind HomuraHotaru suddenly turning up out of the blue like that and the contrast between her middle-school and...
Maybe they're referring to leaving more easygoing comments on fics? It occurs to me that a lot of reviews/comments on this section seem to lean more towards elaborate constructive criticism as opposed to simple "I really liked this" comments. Not that I think there's anything bad about either...
Though I think for this route microbial life would be better than intelligent life because it feels like aliens would be a bit of a distraction to the survival aspect of the RP. I'm actually leaning more towards the settlement backstory because then the Jupiter would already have some equipment...
Among these I think Eclipse is my favourite, but I'm going to have to agree with Ice on this one that it's not much of a horror story in that it's not scary—if that's what you were going for that is. A lot of Ice's critique is spot on. Horror requires a sense of immediacy and pacing that your...
Glad to be of help! ^^ Believe you me, I've had more than my fair share of doubt when it comes to writing, so the feeling is completely understandable.
Oh, this reminds me a lot of Tharsis! Definitely registering my interest in this.
One thing I'd like to know is what the actual mission was before the failure? I feel like a bit of backstory wouldn't go amiss. Survival is definitely important, but since this is a free roam type RP I get the...
Sorry if the review feels a bit impersonal and or exaggerated. I have a bit of trouble turning off my "reviewer voice" when doing a review. I was definitely not exaggerating though. I did genuinely enjoy the story.
It's nice to see you too, person for which time has not dulled a love for the Latis! Yeah, I definitely don't mind doing critiques. Be the change you want to see and all that jazz. hahaha
Haha, yes, it's way more engaging now that Dane's the one actually moving the plot forward!
That said, I'm going to move away from plot now because I don't feel like talking about that right this moment, and I think most of my qualms to do with that have been covered by the recent rewrite. I...
Lol, I have no idea what kind of schedule you must have, but that is taxing even for the best of us. I mean, if it works for you then by all means, but be careful not to burn yourself out. It's been known to happen. /friendlyadvice