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    Thesis's OT fic guide: "What not to include", Part One

    Whoa, I really do not know what to say. This is great, I really learned a lot. Many would, but still. Wow. This definitely is one of the most informative things I have ever read. Maybe a section on romance stories would be good. I haven't read any here, but I have seen some really bad ones...
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    Pokemon: The Untouched World

    Please, do not use bold in your writing.It is a cheap way of making things look longer. I corrected this, but please keep that in mind for the future. Bold=fixed. Also, the multiple usages of '...' is rather annoying, it would be better to leave them out and use actual words to create suspense...
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    When the light comes.

    I would just like to clear a few things up. One, I meant for the pokemon to be in a human house, even though there are no humans in this world. I'll just say that this is quite a distance in the future (like thousands of years) and the rest will be explained as the story goes on. Also, I don't...
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    When the light comes.

    Prologue: When the light comes. "We are waiting. Waiting and watching. For when the light comes. It will come. We will all rejoice. We will bask in its glory, living in peace. Never will we worry. Never will we know of them. The horrors. The horrors waiting outside of the...
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    If the person above was a pokemon, which pokemon would they be?

    You are a Geodude, I guess.
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    Shadow's Graphix Shop!^_^

    I'll credit you, don't worry. Also, it is GREAT!
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    Should I finish this?

    Oh, I understand now Supahfunk, thanks.
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    Should I finish this?

    ~The pokemon Shop!~ "That beeping, why must it happen every day?" Mike mumbled as he hit the deactivate button on his alarm clock. He was always grumpy in the mornings, even though every thing around him would cheer most people up. With the Chatots singing and way the trees looked in the fall...
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    KABOOM! (Oneshot)

    So this is that story you wrote for school last year. It doesn't look like twenty pages anymore, but still good!
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    Antidote

    Hey, nice job Supahfunk, I rather enjoyed it. I could only find the mistake that Rekhyt mentioned, so it is currently on my 'bug you about it for an hour' list. I'll probably harrass you about it at school
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    Hi peoples (and monkeys)!

    Hi, I am new here (obviously). I was asked to join by my friend, SupahFunk, so I did! OBEY THE MONKEY!
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