Listen, I'm sorry, but your piece in the Serial Game breaks two rules. First of all, you're not allowed to mess with the font (it's a general rule in the Fanfiction section), so if you could change that to the default font, I'd appreciate it.
Also, it's not allowed to do plot twists like that. We're trying to create something original and imaginitive there, so you really shouldn't turn it all into an OT fic. Also, plot twists like that are prohibited, it's in the rules. So, if by any change you could rewrite your piece, it wouldn't have to be deleted.
If you rather delete the whole piece, you can post a whole new piece later on.
I'm sorry, but I can't allow you to break the rules. I wouldn't be much of a game master then, right?