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I graduated two years ago with a BS in chemistry and am currently working as a pharmacy assistant at a retail store. Upon graduation I realized that working in a lab for the rest of my life wasn't appealing; the practical applications of chemicals interested me more than research. This...

I’m not sure how I missed the first part, as it looks like it was published back in 2010. Anyways, when I started reading I was confused. This wasn’t due to the story going in reverse (though that definitely didn’t help). It was because it was told as a collection of fragments with a minimal...

CHAPTER 5: Retrieval “This is Elena Sorenson. Leave a message, and I’ll get back to you.” “Hey sis, it’s me. Something unexpected popped up on my end, and it looks like I’ll be up north for another month. Don’t worry, I’ll visit you once this is done. Call me when you get this. Bye.”...

I'm a VGC player, so I play the rated doubles ladder regularly. In my experience, teams on Battle Spot are similar to the ones found at live tournaments, so the ladder is great practice. Both (If we're talking doubles; I have no experience with singles). I'm currently running an adamant...

I thought the three-on-one battle was really great. I found it hilarious when the beedrill swatted the makuhita, as it mirrored my own confusion when Sam announced the battle. And with the second chance coming up, I'm thinking that Luna will evolve soon. I have a hunch as to which eeveelution...

CHAPTER 4: The New Deal “I am you,” the shadow whispered. Aden took a step backward, but his feet found only open air. He found himself back in the void, floating before the creature. “You’re not,” Aden shot back. “Like I said yesterday, this is only a temporary deal. Once Elena’s...

Hello there. I think I've lurked for long enough. I was first drawn to this story because the premise - betting on Pokemon battles - reminded me of a series of Pokemon video game tournaments I played in at bars up in Vancouver. Though there was nothing illegal about them, the small number of...

CHAPTER 3: Old Centrium After thirty minutes of silence from the PAD, Aden pulled off of the road and hovered into a paved parking lot in front of a building of corrugated steel. The two vehicles were already there. The one Aden recognized instantly as the Guy’s black limousine. Despite the...

CHAPTER 2: Combat Coffee “You do not seem to understand. That Mightyena attempted to kill my associate. I was obligated to terminate the entity. There was absolutely no way around it,” a voice droned. “I know, I know! I just want another one! You think you can do that?” “My associate’s...

Hey, nice hearing from you as well! And this did come on kind of suddenly. I stayed up until 2 last night finishing the second to last chapter, woke up today, and figured that I’ve been waiting way too long to publish this. I understand stuff can get busy (I just caught a break myself), so...

I started this in 2008 and quickly shelved it because though I had a beginning and end in mind, I couldn’t come up with the substance linking the two together. In 2014, I picked it up again and found that with a few more years of life behind me, I had a whole lot more to write about. I would...

I am somewhat excited, but somewhat nervous too. Next year will be my first year of college, and even though my current residence is thirty minutes away, I'm going to live on campus for the first year. I'm thinking of going into Pre-Pharmacy, and maybe Chemistry as well. I know the first week...

Ah, so it is French. I guess Spanish and French are close-enough related that some words are simmilar. Sorry about that. And the Arabic thing. I'll take your word for it, being I'm not yet aware how it'll be used in later chapters.

First, some minor corrections: This is a fragment. Something like "No Umbreons were present, leading one to wonder where they went." would be a sentence. I don't know if this is technically incorrect, but the change from the present to past tense with the comma is a bit jarring. You may...

I don't get it. It seems like you're trying to make this funny, but I fail to see how a story centered around drug abuse and random killing is funny. I like stories that have something that I can take from them, like a theme. I don't see anything here other than pointless violence.