I think you might wanna make a new post that doesn't have all the edit lines in them, it reads a bit messy tbh
also
''the team of the region, Team Fable, several hundred years ago, after the events of legands arceus in the kanto region, made experiments on every pokemon in the region, be it wild or a trainer's pokemon. By using their specially designed signal ray, they made the Pokemon change their typings & overall appearance."
The bold part reads weird to me, as if the events of legends arceus took place in Kanto instead of Hisui? Dunno if the comma that comes after it is in the wrong place? So like:
''the team of the region, Team Fable, several hundred years ago, after the events of legends arceus, in the kanto region made experiments on every pokemon in the region, be it wild or a trainer's pokemon. By using their specially designed signal ray, they made the Pokemon change their typings & overall appearance."
Also, it's just in the Kanto region now then, not Johto too?