Okie doke rate..
Cool banner, I really like this actually. The smudging of the girl is really nice, it looks a bit choppy, but it does the trick. The clipping masks look great in the background and give some nice effects to the tag.
The text it really hard to read. Maybe just put like a small white font or a colour from the render instead of the clipping mask.
Depth with this render would look awesome, so sharpen up the gun and her hand and use the dodge tool to make it lighter as well. Then blur and darken the rest of her body just a fraction to add some awesome depth.
If you would, can I have a link to the image?