Recent content by The black Vulpix

Ok, so after being away from the site after a few months I asked Astinus to lock my other story threads. I decided wanted to start over on this site from scratch. So for those who remember my previous story, Suishou Neo Johto, here's chapter 1 again. :nervous: Suishou Neo Johto Chapter 1...

Save them Pearl!!!! I feel so bad for Damion nad I never thought that was possible! Update soon.

Dude I feel bad for Pearl. I would have slapped both those guys. Damion for saying he'd beat me. And Diamond for yelling at me. I like and hope their friendship works out, but I agree that sh should not have bragged.

Chapter 3 Angelina was up bright and early the next morning, dressed in a black short-sleeved shirt with a flaming heart on front, a blue jean skirt above knees with a chain dangling from one of the belt loops, her black sneakers with blue socks, and topped the look with her hair up in pigtails...

weird every time I have a dream about my fics its always about what happens in the next chapter. My dreams are like a tv they actually play out how it will look. I believe that is a good thing beacause then you have a better idea how it will turn out. ;)

Chapter 2: After School “Ha! There’s no way out of this one, Murakami Senpai!” The sun shone down on the white walls of a grand school building. New Bark Technical stood out like a sore thumb in the town of New Bark. The large school reflected the light of the sun brightly onto the tops of the...

i like your story it is really good. Don't worry about making people mad cause its bound to happen. :) I made a moderator on another site mad once. He turned out to be my best friend Travis. So we got in this whole argument about how I was being disrespectful of him and yea. But we got over...

Chapter 1: Prologue The sun shown down brightly on the beautiful planet, allowing its inhabitants the warmth of a new day. The vast, salty ocean reflected the rich blue image of the cloudless sky. A gentle breeze blew across the lush blades of green and yellow grass and stopped occasionally by...

Chapter One: Vs Corsola! “Kuro.” The long-haired boy raised an eyebrow as Umi entered the house, closely followed by her husband and son. Mizu quickly lowered his wife into one of the kitchen chairs, and then the old woman turned to her grandson again. “Is your sister home?” she said...

Prologue: Vs Sneasel! Gin Shinu hastily burst into her bathroom, pulling her long gray hair out of her face. She lightly touched her swollen eye as she looked in her mirror. Her third fight that week… In a city as nice as Goldenrod, one could be surprised how often scuffles happened. “You got...

wow. Damion had a real attitude in this chapter. Poor Pearl.....YAY! No spelling mistakes! Good job. ^_^

YAY!Chimchar's back! WAHOO! I didn't catch any spelling errors this time so good job.Can't wait for the next chapter! ^_^

Chapter 4: Clefairy rescue "I...can't...take...another...step..." Rina said quietly while gasping for breath. She was lying on the ground outside Mount Moon, pinned underneath her own backpack with Bulbasaur, Ashley, and Pippi looking down at her. "-Rina! You...you're not going to die...

I corrected the misspelled words.They are the ones that are bolded. Like I said it wasn't anything major. Jut=st small slip ups here and there.Make sure when done writing you go look over your chapter before you submit it.

Chapter 3: Changing directions. Ashley and Rina arrived in Pewter City near the middle of the afternoon. Their first stop, like for any trainer, was the city's pokémon center. Ashley handed over her pokémon to be healed, and Rina handed over her newly caught Pichu for a checkup as well...