Its excellent, I even looked at yours and thought that my could be better so I improved it.
keep it like that.
And because this is my first RP I GMing, would you like to co-gm? not to be a full gm, just to be another pair of eyes that will help.
keep it like that.
And because this is my first RP I GMing, would you like to co-gm? not to be a full gm, just to be another pair of eyes that will help.