"your strong! See you again!" she said.
"registering you in my pokegear!" she said, as she recorded Ethan into her pokegear.
First of all, fixing the spelling mistakes gives you this:
"You're strong! See you again!" she said.
"Registering you in my PokéGear!" she said, as she recorded Ethan into her PokéGear.
You used 'she said' twice. You could change to order of the sentences and remove one of them :)