There are rules in the Fanfiction and Writing section that you must follow. One of them is to post constructive reviews on stories. There's even a guide linked in our "Writing Resources" thread that fully explains what a constructive review is.
Your first post in the thread was deleted for not being a constructive review. After you posted, a member explained in her own post what the type of review we're looking for in F&W is. And yet you still didn't follow the rules and guidelines after they were explained to you, yet the post with the explanation was right above yours.
In F&W, you're expected to point out specifics of what you liked/didn't like in someone's story. Saying something general doesn't fit in with the rules of the section, therefore, an explanation first to help you along, and so on.