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The Riolu

How's the comic?

  • Awesome!

    Votes: 23 69.7%

  • Good.

    Votes: 8 24.2%

  • Bad. :(

    Votes: 2 6.1%
  • Total voters
    33

*Riolu Master*

The Aura Within
151
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    • Seen Jul 13, 2016




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    Characters:
    Riolu
    Spoiler:

    Absol
    Spoiler:

    Jynx
    Spoiler:

    Darkrai
    Spoiler:
    Houndoom
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    Introduction

    Hello there! I'm gonna be making a sprite comic for all to see!
    If you want to be a fan of my comic just say "fan me"!

    He was just a Riolu. But he gets in these bad guy's business and now he has to find out what
    their planning.. But he can't do it alone.




    The R Awards:
    The R Awards pt 1
    The R Awards pt 2









    Goals

    1 Issue
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    10 Issues
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    20 Issues
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    30 Issues
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    40 Issues
    50 Issues
    60 Issues
    And more..
    1 fan
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    5 fans
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    10 fans
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    15 fans
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    And more..




    Fan's

    joeyhugg
    PhoenixWright77
    Chuckleslucifer
    Foxrally
    AlexOzzyCake
    xMikasax
    Rizon
    *Hoenn*
    Logiedan
    Silversnk
    L96
    pinta77
    Dragon_Trainer_
    Blueredemption
    PJBottomz
    azadenz
    ArceusIsPower
    lucariokul
    qOptic
    XpokeX



    CSS by Iloveeevee



    All Sprites and Backgrounds on the comic are from Spriters-Resource.com
     
    Last edited:

    Keizaal

    but innocence is gone
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    • If you want to make the Issue name a link, put this in the spoiler

    [*url=LINK TO THE ISSUE]ISSUE NAME[/url]

    Take out the asterisk, put in the needed things and it should look like this:
    [*url=pokecommunity.com]PokeCommunity[/url]

    Would be...
    PokeCommunity
     

    joeyhugg

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    • Seen Oct 18, 2017
    Well, I'll be the first! Fan me!

    I look forward to this, looks good as of now.
     
    Squirrel

    Squirrel

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    • Age 29
    • Seen May 11, 2023
    These comics are great so far, I can't wait to see what happens in them next! I'm loving Goldeen's character. Only one line spoken to date and yet I'm already loving its tone haha. The use of sprites has been great but I'm curious as to why you chose each Pokémon that you did? At any rate, keep up the good work - can't wait to see the rest!

    (Fan me ;D)
     
    Foxrally

    Foxrally

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    • WOOHOO GOLDEEN CAN FINALLY MOVE

    This is an epic series. Can't wait for more. Hopefully we'll get to see her again in a later issue. :D
     
    Squirrel

    Squirrel

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    • Seen May 11, 2023
    NOO, GOLDEEN, I'LL MISS YOU :( She was just getting into her personality, she could've been such a help to the group. I really hope she comes back in a future issue </3
     
    Squirrel

    Squirrel

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    • Seen May 11, 2023
    OH GOD, IT'S DARKRAI, WE'RE DOOMED :(

    I much prefer the old style of comic, it was so much cleaner and flowed much better. This new style leaves too much padding and cuts off some of the text in the captions. Also Pinsir has an 'i', not an 'e' :D

    I'm loving them so far though, and I'm definitely curious as to who Darkrai is and what the evil team want. Did you plan this story out before or do you make it up as you go out of interest?
     

    *Riolu Master*

    The Aura Within
    151
    Posts
    10
    Years
    • Seen Jul 13, 2016
    AlexOzzyCake said:
    OH GOD, IT'S DARKRAI, WE'RE DOOMED :(

    I much prefer the old style of comic, it was so much cleaner and flowed much better. This new style leaves too much padding and cuts off some of the text in the captions. Also Pinsir has an 'i', not an 'e' :D

    I'm loving them so far though, and I'm definitely curious as to who Darkrai is and what the evil team want. Did you plan this story out before or do you make it up as you go out of interest?
    Click to expand...

    I agree with you. It's just that the old template had lines that were slightly moved.
    And I just make the story as I go and I try to make the endings of each issue suspenseful to make you want to know what happens next.
     
    Foxrally

    Foxrally

    [img]http://i.imgur.com/omi0jS3.gif[/img]
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    • OMG DARKRAI WILL KILL ALL THE THINGS

    I agree with Ozzy too, the old style was much more easy to read with and was more smooth. You might want to edit the current one into being thinner and another color (blue, maybe?).

    You seem to enjoy making these, and I enjoy reading them, so good luck with more! :D
     
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