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About 2 years ago, I was very stupid. I thought I was a great writer, and so decided I would write a fic about N X Hilda, and the result was a very shoddy, poorly written mess. I decided that, two years later I would pick it up and rewrite it, only keeping the basic idea, and so here it is:
Ferris Wheel: Chapter I
"Hilda!" The shouting voice of a worried mother came swiftly down Route 1, and into the ears of the intended recipient. A young girl was skipping away in a world of her own as she caught the faint call. The voice came again. She paused, mid-skip and turned on the spot. The wind breezed through her flowing brown hair. The voice was extremely familiar to her, being that of her mother's. Immediately, she darted toward the voice. She reached her mother, who was waving a white cap around, emblazoned with a crimson pokéball.
"Hilda, my darling you've forgotten your cap! My, it's such a bright day you must need it, surely!"
"Of course mother, you know how forgetful I am!" Hilda laughed.
"Well, take care! I'll be thinking about you!"
Hilda took her cap, placed it on her head, and with that, she was off. Bolting up the long and grassy route, passing the trees dotted here and there. Other people were there too, most likely other Pokémon trainers. Her thoughts began to surround her - so many questions floating around: Would she meet new friends? How many Pokémon would she catch? The daydreams had piled up so much, it wasn't until she tripped over a small creature she awakened to reality. Dusting her clothes off, Hilda picked herself off the ground, only to find she had been entered into conflict. The small creature she had tripped over turned out to be a wild Lillipup. Jumping at her first chance to use her Pokémon, she leapt into the air with delight.
"Snivy, go!"
The pokéball span from her hand and crashed into the floor, splitting open to reveal a small green Pokémon. Quickly, she whipped out her pokédex to properly identify the Pokémon she had encountered. The pokédex explained the puppy Pokémon's features and traits. Lillipup charged at Snivy, knocking him straight back to his trainer's feet. Hilda shouted the command for Snivy to tackle back - and he did just that. Nimbly dashing toward Lillipup, then delivering a deadly blow to his face. Lillipup let out a wail as he retorted with a tackle of his own. Snivy was knocked off his feet and now seemed very weak. He stood up carefully, and with the last of his strength, sprinted towards Lillipup.
"Snivy!" came the cry as the two collided heads.
Lillipup fell to the ground, unable to move as Hilda was jumping for joy. Her first ever Pokémon battle was over. She was ecstatic! She continued on her journey through the route, trying her best to avoid the grassy patches. A while later she reached Accumula Town and Professor Juniper was waiting for her.
"Ah! Hello Hilda!"
Juniper smiled as she saw the first of her apprentices arrive. The pair went inside of the Pokémon Center, which was overridden with many like Hilda, young trainers taking their first steps into the world of Pokémon. The professor proceeded to give Hilda a tour.
"Aaaand finally, here we have the main desk where you can heal your pokemon. Try it!"
Hilda shyly introduced herself and handed over Snivy. Seconds later, the pokeball was returned to her!
"Thank you, please come back any time!"
Hilda exited the building. She looked over to the plaza, as she saw there was some sort of commotion. A man stood up and began to talk.
"Ahem. My name is Ghetsis. I am here representing Team Plasma. Today, ladies and gentlemen, I
would like to talk to you about Pokémon liberation."
Hilda was curious. Pokemon liberation? She pushed her way into the crowd to see the presentation.
"I'm sure most of you believe that we humans and Pokémon are partners that have come to live together because we want and need each other. However... Is that really the truth? Have you ever considered that perhaps we humans... only assume that this is the truth? Pokémon are subject to the selfish commands of Trainers... They get pushed around when they are our 'partners' at work... Can anyone say with confidence that there is no truth in what I'm saying?"
Hilda was starting to wonder. Was this true? Mid-way through the man's speech, Hilda noticed a strange looking boy with long green hair wearing a cap similar to hers. She looked away and back to the man, who continued to talk.
"That's right! We must liberate the Pokémon! Then, and only then, will humans and Pokémon truly be equals. Everyone, I end my words here today by imploring you to consider the relationship between people and Pokémon... and the correct way to proceed. We sincerely appreciate your attention." The man and all his minions walked off.
Some of the crowd began questioning each other and chatting. Just as Hilda began to think about the topic presented to her, she was interrupted by the strange boy she had noticed previously.
"Can't you hear it?" The boy questioned, sounding almost desperate.
"The sound of your Pokémon? It's speaking you know! And what's that in your hand? A pokédex? You're prepared to trap hundreds for that? Whatever, let me battle you, I must hear more of your Pokémon!"
A smirk came from beneath the cap...
Ferris Wheel: Chapter I
"Hilda!" The shouting voice of a worried mother came swiftly down Route 1, and into the ears of the intended recipient. A young girl was skipping away in a world of her own as she caught the faint call. The voice came again. She paused, mid-skip and turned on the spot. The wind breezed through her flowing brown hair. The voice was extremely familiar to her, being that of her mother's. Immediately, she darted toward the voice. She reached her mother, who was waving a white cap around, emblazoned with a crimson pokéball.
"Hilda, my darling you've forgotten your cap! My, it's such a bright day you must need it, surely!"
"Of course mother, you know how forgetful I am!" Hilda laughed.
"Well, take care! I'll be thinking about you!"
Hilda took her cap, placed it on her head, and with that, she was off. Bolting up the long and grassy route, passing the trees dotted here and there. Other people were there too, most likely other Pokémon trainers. Her thoughts began to surround her - so many questions floating around: Would she meet new friends? How many Pokémon would she catch? The daydreams had piled up so much, it wasn't until she tripped over a small creature she awakened to reality. Dusting her clothes off, Hilda picked herself off the ground, only to find she had been entered into conflict. The small creature she had tripped over turned out to be a wild Lillipup. Jumping at her first chance to use her Pokémon, she leapt into the air with delight.
"Snivy, go!"
The pokéball span from her hand and crashed into the floor, splitting open to reveal a small green Pokémon. Quickly, she whipped out her pokédex to properly identify the Pokémon she had encountered. The pokédex explained the puppy Pokémon's features and traits. Lillipup charged at Snivy, knocking him straight back to his trainer's feet. Hilda shouted the command for Snivy to tackle back - and he did just that. Nimbly dashing toward Lillipup, then delivering a deadly blow to his face. Lillipup let out a wail as he retorted with a tackle of his own. Snivy was knocked off his feet and now seemed very weak. He stood up carefully, and with the last of his strength, sprinted towards Lillipup.
"Snivy!" came the cry as the two collided heads.
Lillipup fell to the ground, unable to move as Hilda was jumping for joy. Her first ever Pokémon battle was over. She was ecstatic! She continued on her journey through the route, trying her best to avoid the grassy patches. A while later she reached Accumula Town and Professor Juniper was waiting for her.
"Ah! Hello Hilda!"
Juniper smiled as she saw the first of her apprentices arrive. The pair went inside of the Pokémon Center, which was overridden with many like Hilda, young trainers taking their first steps into the world of Pokémon. The professor proceeded to give Hilda a tour.
"Aaaand finally, here we have the main desk where you can heal your pokemon. Try it!"
Hilda shyly introduced herself and handed over Snivy. Seconds later, the pokeball was returned to her!
"Thank you, please come back any time!"
Hilda exited the building. She looked over to the plaza, as she saw there was some sort of commotion. A man stood up and began to talk.
"Ahem. My name is Ghetsis. I am here representing Team Plasma. Today, ladies and gentlemen, I
would like to talk to you about Pokémon liberation."
Hilda was curious. Pokemon liberation? She pushed her way into the crowd to see the presentation.
"I'm sure most of you believe that we humans and Pokémon are partners that have come to live together because we want and need each other. However... Is that really the truth? Have you ever considered that perhaps we humans... only assume that this is the truth? Pokémon are subject to the selfish commands of Trainers... They get pushed around when they are our 'partners' at work... Can anyone say with confidence that there is no truth in what I'm saying?"
Hilda was starting to wonder. Was this true? Mid-way through the man's speech, Hilda noticed a strange looking boy with long green hair wearing a cap similar to hers. She looked away and back to the man, who continued to talk.
"That's right! We must liberate the Pokémon! Then, and only then, will humans and Pokémon truly be equals. Everyone, I end my words here today by imploring you to consider the relationship between people and Pokémon... and the correct way to proceed. We sincerely appreciate your attention." The man and all his minions walked off.
Some of the crowd began questioning each other and chatting. Just as Hilda began to think about the topic presented to her, she was interrupted by the strange boy she had noticed previously.
"Can't you hear it?" The boy questioned, sounding almost desperate.
"The sound of your Pokémon? It's speaking you know! And what's that in your hand? A pokédex? You're prepared to trap hundreds for that? Whatever, let me battle you, I must hear more of your Pokémon!"
A smirk came from beneath the cap...
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