Call me Archie!

Seen December 25th, 2018
Posted November 26th, 2018
2,146 posts
10.9 Years
Okay. Thanks for telling me what was wrong, I'll re-write it. You have my word that the next posts will all be better, and have more thought into them. Sorry.

Oh, by the way, the "Main Thread" link doesn't work.

One question, it pertains to number five of my errors:
You move from each sentence extremely quickly, and the transition is awkward. You're not building fluid sentences, and it's not enjoyable to read your posts right now.
Could you please explain this? Because I have a feeling I might do it again if I have not really had it explained.