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Persona: Frequency
Hey guys, this'll be our little OOC thread from now own.
Main Thread
Characters
1. Channing Pitt
2. Hibiki Kohaku
3. Sayuu Etou
4. Midori Hoshiko
5. Arata Nakamura
Post any problems or questions you have here!
Updates
March 7th
Okay guys.
So we have some... issues. :|
Okay. We have a LOT of issues. <_<
I'd like to apologize to everyone for the confusion, and for accepting characters that weren't acceptable.
Let's start with ÄgàmêñÐmØÑ.
First of all, there's a lot of things that just don't work with your character at all, and show that you have a very strong weakness in understanding of Japanese culture. Either that, or your weak understanding in just how much Persona follows your typical Japanese school.
1. If you're not wearing the proper uniform, you are sent home- or perhaps given a spare to change into for the day, if it's a one-time-thing. You would not be allowed to prance around school wearing what Midori is. Please fix this.
2. Her attitude would probably get her expelled in a heartbeat. We do not flick teachers on the forehead at school- whether we are in Japan, or America.
3. I think that you should refrain from bunnying other people's characters for the time being- NPC or anything of the sort, because I don't think you really understand Mr. Shimotsuki's disposition at all. By "straight-to-the-point", I would conjecture that he would immediately throw Midori out of the classroom without arguing with her or saying anything at all. I'd ask you to try to observe a character throughout a few posts before using them to your own disposal.
4. Both Luke and I think that you have huge potential. However, you need to re-read your posts before you post them from now on, and think about them from the perspective of someone who doesn't know what you're imagining, because I frankly had no idea what happened in your post without re-reading it at least three times. xD;
5. Your quantity is perfect, but bring up the quality a notch. You move from each sentence extremely quickly, and the transition is awkward. You're not building fluid sentences, and it's not enjoyable to read your posts right now.
Hopefully these problems can be addressed, hopefully, before your next post.
Next, Gummy. Yeah Gummy you too. D: We really only have one major problem, but when I say major I mean like... major. o_o
1. You're going to have to choose a different character. :|
Like... we were hoping you'd be able to switch to a character from Japanese descent. D: Hoping is kind of understating it, but, yeah, you'll have to switch it up.
2. Um, two things just really puzzled me about your post. Why are there so many Chinese people in a Japanese school? D: Like, what was really enigmatic was Vanessa Tan.
First, Vanessa is an American name. Second, Tan is a Chinese surname.
And then the Chinese math teacher....
As much as I love Chinese people, you need to let them go for this RP.
The first problem will need to be addressed before you post next as well. The Chinese people is just a personal annoyance that I had to throw out there. xD;
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