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Old January 14th, 2008 (4:39 PM).
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    I actually enjoyed the intensity this fic has.
    I enjoy bringing out the horror Pokemon was truly made for, yes.

    LOL, you definitely describe the killing of Oak very violently, what with the shattering and splitting of the bone, blood bursting everywhere. It was very entertaining and violent.
    Yes, Let me just type random words in bold and red like this. It wasn't meant to be Entertaining, It was meant to show you what's at stake in the story.

    Only problem I have is with this:

    Who is the hero? If not, there must be some sort of anti-hero? Then again, there has only been one chapter. But like I said, I enjoyed the violence.
    The hero has a name, and shall be revealed in chapter two... These are the antagonists, obviously.

    More violence.

    There shall be plenty, my friend.
    'It's been a prevalent notion. Fallen sparks. Fragments of vessels broken at the Creation. And someday, somehow, before the end, a gathering back to home. A messenger from the Kingdom, arriving at the last moment. But I tell you there is no such message, no such home -- only the millions of last moments . . . nothing more. Our history is an aggregate of last moments.'
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