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Old June 1st, 2006 (3:16 AM). Edited June 5th, 2006 by limy85.
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    The Story:
    After being escaping a near death experience against the leviathan, our hero Max finds himself filled with revenge. And won't stop until his traitor freind Hunter and the leviathan are dead.

    Left to Right
    Character:Rale Bio: One of hunters devoted servents. Not much is known about him.
    Age: 35
    Pokemon: Shadow Groudon, Cosmain
    Bio: Hunters most trusted servent. He has a very special freindship with Rale.
    Age: 17
    Pokemon: Shadow Groudon, Cosmain
    Character: Max (centre)
    Bio: The main character. He was betrayed by hunter. Little more is known.
    Pokemon: Thydoun, Kingler, Ultimate Latios
    Character: Hunter (far right)
    Bio: He is the conrtols the power leviathan, a powerful legendary pokemon which is described in ancient scripters as 'The god of darkness'.
    Pokemon: S.Lugia
    Character: Ryan
    Bio: Once was Hunter's minions. Little is known about him accept he is after Hunter.
    Age: Unkown
    Pokemon: Shadowfox, sheldon, Leviathan
    Character: Amy
    Bio: Amy is one of max's closest freinds. And she is in love with water pokemon.
    Age: 15
    Pokemon: Blastoise, Tentacrule
    CHaracter: Adam
    Bio: This mysterious character is Hunter's most skilled assasin. Little us known about him.
    Age: Unknown
    Pokemon: Shadow Mew

    SEASON 1
    PART 1
    Comic 1
    Comic 2
    Comic 3
    Comic 4
    Comic 5
    Comic 6
    Comic 7
    Comic 8
    Comic 9
    Comic 10
    Comic 11
    Comic 12
    Comic 13
    Comic 14 (meanwhile)
    Comic 15
    Comic 16
    Comic 17

    PART 2 (New Layout)
    Comic 1
    Comic 2
    Comic 3
    Comic 4
    Season Finale

    SEASON 2
    PART 1
    Comic 1
    Comic 2

    Thanks to ~Dragon~Master~

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    Old June 1st, 2006 (5:10 AM).
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      It's not bad I enjoyed reading it. Though you should add to the Bios which color text each character is so it's not to confusing.

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      Old June 1st, 2006 (7:16 AM).
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        Originally Posted by Houndoom1
        It's not bad I enjoyed reading it. Though you should add to the Bios which color text each character is so it's not to confusing.
        Yes,that would help the other people,but a good comic.
        Thanks Haunter Master

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        Old June 1st, 2006 (7:56 AM).
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          Good comic! I like the recolours! I have a shadow lugia recolour with someone sitting on it if you'ld ever need it =D Looks good keep it up
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          Old June 2nd, 2006 (7:04 AM).
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            nice comic make more i like the pokemon sprite
            Old June 2nd, 2006 (1:11 PM).
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              WHAT HAPPEND TO COMIC 13!?!?!?!?
              Otherwise it was a good cimic
              I claim:
              <-- thx MiSsKoN thx maneachicken for the sprite
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              Elektron the level 76 Elekiburu!

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              Old June 3rd, 2006 (4:21 AM).
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                Soz bout that, comic 15 was supposed to be comic 13.

                Thanks to ~Dragon~Master~
                Old June 6th, 2006 (11:48 PM).
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                  I Didn't Give You Permission To Use My Ultimate Latios Sprite... So Don't Use It In This Comic, Or I Must Report You...
                  Old February 26th, 2008 (1:11 PM).
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                    You killed it omega i hate you.......(No joke) Enemy N00B
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                    It was Faded Past. Expect A Final Hack from me soon..
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                    Old February 26th, 2008 (4:21 PM).
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                    And the rest went riding on.
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                      Lots of confusing and useless dialog, unused panels many confusing scenes, stolen sprites, and the main characters an 00ber.

                      Nice thought, but it wasn't carried out very well. Your characters also aren't very realistic. You need to think about their reactions to things. Don't use TuP, and work on your grammar. A lot.

                      The entire HQ scene was way too confusing, you need tails or specific colorations. Three shades of red is almost as confusing as reusing the same shade three times.

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                      But dun worry.
                      It will most likely stay like this FOREVAH.
                      Because I'm nowhere near as active as I used to be.
                      Old February 26th, 2008 (5:21 PM).
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                        hehe, this thread is older than 30 days - it should never have been posted in.

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