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Tea party itt.

Oh nice, very nice. :D

At first I was like, lolwut, then I was like, "oh, this is supposed to be funny," then I lol'd. xD

At a glance, your art isn't anything spectacular or anything, I mean, you've got a bit of a way to go in regards to drawing in space, what with the dimensions being a bit off with some of the more dynamic poses you've got there. Then again, since this is supposed to be funny, who cares if the dynamics are a bit exaggerated because that's some hilarious stuff you've got there. Caricature-wise, at least. Hey, I enjoy puns as much as the next guy, but your puns plus pics really know how to make me chuckle. Not laugh loudly, but chuckle at least. Seriously, I thought you were going to make a gay Ekans joke or something. On the other hand, on some of them, I even daww'd a bit because of the way you make them look cute with the poses and the curves. It's not the best art style, you could, for instance shade it a bit better (Murkow), make the dimensions a bit neater (Lopunny), and give better proportions to your characters (Rayquaza). Still, I don't know whether or not this is your actual style or not since it's meant to be funny, but what the hell.

Individual comments as follows:

https://i399.photobucket.com/albums/pp78/otaku-dono/Doodles/Whiscash.png
This one isn't pimpin. More gentlemanly, really, but not pimpin. Needs MOAR gold chains and tattoos. xD

https://i399.photobucket.com/albums/pp78/otaku-dono/Doodles/Kyogre.png
https://i399.photobucket.com/albums/pp78/otaku-dono/Doodles/Groudon.png
These two are awesomely cute. They both need better proportions. but still. :3

https://i399.photobucket.com/albums/pp78/otaku-dono/Doodles/Surskit.png
Yes, yes it is. :D
This one, great job incorporating a kind of Aussi-Maori feel to it. I especially like the dolphin with the Maori-like tattoos.
Oh, you NZers and your sheep. xD

And that's about it really.
 
It's not supposed to be serious at all. For example, the Groudon+Kyogre were specifically made to be simplified. I tend to try to avoid detail as much as I can since I end up taking it far too seriously and erasing and re-erasing details since it doesn't look right.
 
Hence why I assumed it's supposed to be funny. Well, some of them anyway.
 
Very nice stuff, I like the shading you've got, thats pretty much there.
It's all slightly odd and quirky, which is nice, it's always good to see a more original take on things rather than the usual recycled poop.
I think you need to work on your line art. It's very wobbly a lot of the time, work on smoothing it out, first. Don't be afraid to pick up a sharpie or something and go over your sketches with it, none of that wobbly 'little lines' strokes I can see you're doing. One smooth line. Try to draw the whole thing without taking the pen off the paper, once you get the hang of this technique I promise you'll improve bucketloads.
Good luck and keep up the great stuff!
 
I'm just afraid of screwing up and therefore completely ruining it.
 
NZ dex stuff this time.

https://i399.photobucket.com/albums/pp78/otaku-dono/Doodles/nzdexkumaramon.png

A kumara that's Maorified, nothing much to see here. Grass -> Grass/Fighting. This is the last Maorified fakemon too (probably).

https://i399.photobucket.com/albums/pp78/otaku-dono/Doodles/nzdexmoafossil.png

What kind of NZ dex would this be without a moa for a fossil? Idk if it's too boring or whatever, but there's not a lot I thought of doing with a moa. Both stages are Rock/Grass.

https://i399.photobucket.com/albums/pp78/otaku-dono/Doodles/nzdexpseudolegendpt1.png+https://i399.photobucket.com/albums/pp78/otaku-dono/Doodles/nzdexpseudolegendpt2.png

This is my pseudo-legend, and I was aiming for something more along the lines of Dragonite (ie slightly comical). It's based off a taniwha, which is a Maori myth which has something to do with water, idr exactly but it'll be on wiki. Water/Dragon for the lot probably.

Tell me what you think. :3 Also I may think up stats/abilities for them sometime.
 
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