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Old August 23rd, 2012 (2:31 AM).
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    i said a starter never said what the starter was team right, or close?
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    Old August 28th, 2012 (3:45 AM).
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      Old September 1st, 2012 (1:09 PM).
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        Old September 2nd, 2012 (1:57 PM).
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          Dark Fox Starter. Needs name.
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          Old September 3rd, 2012 (1:02 AM).
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            once you add fakemon many people are going to be unhappy but ill critique it needs more fur and defining look at the fox vs Poochyena

            its just a critique in no way is it meant to offend you
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            Old September 3rd, 2012 (4:25 AM).
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              Thank you, I shall try add more detail soon <3
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              Old September 5th, 2012 (4:43 PM).
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                Old September 7th, 2012 (4:15 PM).
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                  First of all can I just say, you are amazing with the trainer sprites. They all look really good, keep doing what you're doing.
                  But I do have some criticism for these two.
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                  First of all, the arm looks a little floppy. It should be a bit straighter, less rounded. Second, the hair looks a little off. You need a bit more outline shading, especially near the face and around the eyes. Also the eyebrows aren't thick enough imo, but that's more up to you.


                  Okay, now for this one. The thing that looks REALLY odd for me right away is the arm holding the Pokeball. She's in a position that's practically impossible for a normal person, and it should be reversed horizontally and moved to the other side of her body. Second, it looks a bit weird having the hair in front of the clothes, I think it would look better if it were behind her. Of course, if you like it that way, that's fine too. The final thing I would like to point out is the lack of shading on the coat she's wearing. Its a solid color from what I can see, and it should have at least some shading.

                  I hope I wasn't too rough. Aside from those two, I LOVE everything. Like I said, keep it up and good luck on your hack!
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                  Old September 7th, 2012 (5:28 PM).
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                    Thanks for the critism. I shall try improve shortly.


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                    Old September 7th, 2012 (8:29 PM).
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                      guinea pig looks good the fox still needs a little improvment
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                      Old September 7th, 2012 (10:47 PM). Edited September 8th, 2012 by kid1513.
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                        For criticism, I will say that the idea is nice. However, I would like to see some slight separator for head and body so that it will look more like a guinea pig and aesthetically better.

                        I can see a slight resemblance with Arcanine and Shaymin or Zigzagoon, in my opinion. A little bit of custom pose can make it better
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                        Old September 13th, 2012 (5:24 AM). Edited September 13th, 2012 by Lord Varion.
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                          The heroes of my fan game.

                          Water Starter, made with the help of NikNaks

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                          Old September 17th, 2012 (11:10 PM).
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                            Some of these are quite cool. Though I would recommend adding an outline to the houses, I'm not sure if you're wanting them to fit in with the same style as the rest of your sprites, but if you are, I think adding some outlines would make them look even better. Just my opinion though. They're cool though.
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                            Old September 20th, 2012 (4:38 PM).
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                              Some of these are quite cool. Though I would recommend adding an outline to the houses, I'm not sure if you're wanting them to fit in with the same style as the rest of your sprites, but if you are, I think adding some outlines would make them look even better. Just my opinion though. They're cool though.
                              I left outlines out, to make D/P/Pt/HG/SS/B/W/B2/W2 style.
                              Not to make the trainers.


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                              Old September 21st, 2012 (6:18 AM). Edited September 22nd, 2012 by Razoof.
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                                I liked your houses and most of your trainers though your pokemon need to be more rounded.
                                Like the Bulbsaur revamp,besides that it is too small.




                                well I sort of revamped a little.Honestly in the image above I didn't really like the watery starter revampe.
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                                Old October 22nd, 2012 (11:07 AM).
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                                  Errhem.. I decided to try GSC trainer, thoughts?
                                  The sprite is zoomed x2.

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                                  I liked your houses and most of your trainers though your pokemon need to be more rounded.
                                  Like the Bulbsaur revamp,besides that it is too small.




                                  well I sort of revamped a little.Honestly in the image above I didn't really like the watery starter revampe.
                                  Would of appreciated it if you asked before doing anything with my sprites...
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                                  Old October 22nd, 2012 (10:07 PM).
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                                    If I may make a suggestion with the bird sprite in particular...

                                    The way the feet are positioned, it looks like the poor thing would fall over backwards. I would position them a bit further back to make it look more balanced.
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                                    Old October 23rd, 2012 (8:50 AM).
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                                      The ones I did look totally fine.
                                      The other guys I can see what you mean.
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