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Some notes before the 1st chapter.
One of the main protagonists is named Lance. Please do not confuse him for Lance of the Elite Four from the games and anime.
Pokémon characters from the games and anime will appear in this.
This fanfic is going to be more anime styled as well.
Also, please tell me how I can improve if you do leave a reply. I would appreciate it. Also, this fanfic is on the Ever Grande City website as well.
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Chapter 1: Brothers
Throughout history, and in the present day, people and Pokémon have been interacting with each other. Pokémon trainers can fight each other in battles or they can be a family pet. People and Pokémon live in this world together, often side by side. And there are many Pokémon Trainers out there including the Raider brothers. The older brother, 18 year old Lance Raider, is a seasoned veteran Pokémon trainer. He trains hard very often and has won many competitions but even still, he is still learning and thinking of new battle strategies. The younger brother, 11 year old Travis Raider, is a novice trainer. He still has much to learn about the world of Pokémon. However, he is determined to follow the footsteps of his brother. Both brothers live with their parents in a luxurious part in the metropolis known as San Morano. The city attracts many visitors each year, from trainers wanting to battle in the impressive Blue Crown Stadium to people just wanting to have a relaxing vacation at the beach. For Lance, he not only encourages trainers to travel, he hopes seeing strong trainers from around the world will help his younger brother to get better in hopes of fighting these trainers one day. Not to mention, he gets to fight some of the best trainers in the world. With their mom being a Pokémon Professor and their dad being head of the Raider Financial Group, one of the many groups who sponsor trainers, Pokémon have been a part of the brothers' life for a long time.
……
"Poliwrath, use Ice Punch!", a trainer shouts towards his Pokémon. Standing across from this trainer and his Poliwrath is another trainer with a Hawlucha. Poliwrath forms a fist with its right hand and charges towards Hawlucha
.
"Double Team!", the opposing trainer yells. Copies of Hawlucha appear and surround Poliwrath. Poliwrath looks around, back and forth, side to side, confused as to where Hawlucha went. "Hawlucha, Aerial Ace! A white orb of energy surrounds Hawlucha and it charges in as the copies fade away. Poliwrath is hit and it stumbles back a little bit, reeling from the damage. "Not bad," Hawlucha's trainer says. "But, I'm gonna win this." Also in the stadium is a large crowd of spectators. They cheer on as the battle rages.
…..
Watching the battle from home is none other than the Raider brothers. The younger brother, Travis, is literally at the edge of the leather sofa watching this battle. Lance, on the other hand, has his arms crossed and is watching this battle. Also present in the room is Lance's Salamence.
"Hey, bro," Travis says as he turns to look at his brother. "Why didn't you enter? You could have kicked all their butts!"
Lance smiles at the comment. "Well, yeah but the problem is….it's an exclusive for Fighting-type Pokémon"
"But you have Machamp! He'd wreck everybody! That's it! I'm getting me a Machamp and entering that tournament!"
"Sorry little bro, even if you could, these guys are way out of your league. I lost in the semi-finals in the last one."
Travis's smile turns into a pouting face. "Tch, I STILL am not ready for the state or national league either, right?"
"What do you think?" Lance teasingly replies. He then points to the T.V. "Let's continue watching this"
Suddenly, a phone on a wooden table next to the sofa begins to ring
"Or not." Lance replies. He reaches for the phone and picks it up. While answering the phone, he walks into another room. "Talk to me," Lance replies as he closes the door to the other room. Travis and Salamence looks on in curiosity.
"Who do you think that was, Salamence?" Salamence emits a somewhat loud roar. Travis smiles. "I know that reaction. You hope you get to fight, don't you?" Salamence lets out a gentler roar this time meaning yes.
Lance appears from the other room, closing the door behind him. "So? What's going on?" Travis asks his older brother to which Lance smirks. "That was Melanie. It seems we got a challenge at the park. You coming?"
Travis immediately presses the power button on the remote control to turn off the T.V. He then jumps up off the sofa. Excited, he yells, "Of course, I'm coming!"
........
Melanie sits on a bench in the nearby park near the parking lot. Her long, black hair is lifted upwards by a slight breeze. A flock of Starly fly above in the hair while behind her, two trainers, one with an Electabuzz and other with a Hitmonchan, are battling. Suddenly, she spots an blue and white exotic sports car pull up into the parking lot. "Well, he's here. And looks like he brought his little brother along." Melanie goes to greet them.
…….
Lance, Travis, and Melanie are walking towards the center of the park.
"So, this punk thinks he all that." Melanie replies angrily. "I think he doesn't even care about his Pokémon. All he cares about is winning."
"Wow, this guy sounds like real bully." Travis replied.
"I'll take care of him." Lance replies. "But, why didn't you…."
"Because I didn't bring any Pokémon with me." Melanie interrupts. "My bad."
"No need to apologize. I like to trash the arrogant type." Lance replies.
"We are here." Melanie says. Her eyes fixated on the area.
"Oh, I see who you called now, Melanie" A brown-haired teenage boy calls out. "Lance Raider, the name's William Malanii. The strongest fighter in this park!"
"(Malani,….sounds familiar…..)", Lance thinks to himself.
"Once I defeat you, It'll prove to you that I am the best trainer around here!" William yells.
Lance smirks at this comment. "Watch what you say. Because you don't stand a chance against me. "
William walks to the opposite end of the area and turns around. He then pulls out a Poke Ball and presses the button to make it larger. "Allow me to introduce my undefeated champion. Go!" William presses the button on the Poke Ball to let the Poke Ball out. "ELLLLECCTIVIRE!" The Pokémon yells.
"Arrogance will not help you." Lance says as he takes a Poke Ball from his belt. He presses the button to make the Poke Ball larger. "Salamence, you're up." Lance presses the button again to let Salamence out. Salamence stares at the ground first with his eyes closed, then opens his eyes with a fierce look and looks up towards the sky and lets out a large and loud roar. At this moment, a crowd begins to form. Melanie notices this "Hmmm….we seemed to have attracted attention. Heh."
"Come on brother, you can beat this guy!" Travis yells.
"William, you can have the first attack." Says Lance.
"Electivire, Thunder!" William yells. Electivire fires a large bolt of lightning at Salamence.
"Flamethrower." Lance says calmly.
Salamence fires a powerful stream of fire from its mouth. The lightning bolt and the stream of fire collide and cancel each other out.
"Now use Dragon Pulse!" says Lance.
A bluish green ball forms in Salamence's mouth and Salamence fires it at Electivire. Electivire is hit directly but is still standing. "(Hmmm…this one might be tough.)," Lance thinks to himself.
"Not bad." William remarks. "Electivire, use Thunderpunch.
Electivire forms a fist with its right hand and the fist glows yellow with sparks surrounding it. Electivire charges at Salamence. However, Lance does not order a dodge. He just stands there.
"Ha. Given up already?" William tauntingly remarks as Electivire hits Salamence with the Thunderpunch. Salamence closes his eyes, reeling from the damage, but opens his eyes and lets out another large roar.
"NOW SALAMENCE!!!" Lance yells. Another ball of energy forms in Salamence's mouth. As Electivire prepares for another attack, it gets hit by another Dragon Pulse from Salamence. "Now use Flamethrower again!" Salamence fires a stream of fire from his mouth at Electivire who is still reeling from the Dragon Pulse. Electivire takes a second direct hit.
"Salamence can handle as many Thunderpunches as you give him. He won't be fazed or defeated so easily." Lance remarks. He then looks at William with a fierce look in eyes. "You're arrogant. I heard you don't even care for your Pokémon."
"Oh, she told you. Yeah, that Pokémon I used was so stupid and weak; I released it after the battle." William remarks while laughing.
Lance forms a fist with both hands. "SALAMENCE!!! HYPER BEAM!!!!" He yells out loud.
"Electivire, use your Hyper Beam as well!"
A orange ball of energy form in both Pokémon's mouths. Then, both Pokémon fire orange beams of energy at each other. Both attacks collide but Salamence's Hyper Beam proves much more powerful and Electivire is hit. Electivire falls to the ground defeated.
William looks angry as he recalls Electivre.. "Can any of these stupid Pokémon beat that Salamence since Electivire failed?!
"Someone should tell him he's the stupid one." Melanie jokingly remarks.
"You don't even care about your Pokémon. What kind of trainer are you?" Lance angrily asks. "Unless you want to be embarrassed even more, I suggest you beat it."
William still looks angry as the runs off. "I WON'T FORGE T THIS!!!" He yells as he runs. Meanwhile, the crowd is clapping over Lance and Salamence's victory. Salamence sees a Tamato Berry tree nearby proceeds to use his claw to get a berry on the ground for a snack.
However, among the crowd was two mysterious men. Both are wearing silver uniforms with silver helmets on. "What do you think?" One of the men asks the other.
"....He's perfect for a Shadow Pokémon…." The other man replies. "Come on, let's see if we can catch him to him."
"Which one?"
"The one with the Electivire. Not only is he perfect for a Shadow Pokemon, he's perfect for Cipher."
End of Ch 1.
One of the main protagonists is named Lance. Please do not confuse him for Lance of the Elite Four from the games and anime.
Pokémon characters from the games and anime will appear in this.
This fanfic is going to be more anime styled as well.
Also, please tell me how I can improve if you do leave a reply. I would appreciate it. Also, this fanfic is on the Ever Grande City website as well.
…..
Chapter 1: Brothers
Throughout history, and in the present day, people and Pokémon have been interacting with each other. Pokémon trainers can fight each other in battles or they can be a family pet. People and Pokémon live in this world together, often side by side. And there are many Pokémon Trainers out there including the Raider brothers. The older brother, 18 year old Lance Raider, is a seasoned veteran Pokémon trainer. He trains hard very often and has won many competitions but even still, he is still learning and thinking of new battle strategies. The younger brother, 11 year old Travis Raider, is a novice trainer. He still has much to learn about the world of Pokémon. However, he is determined to follow the footsteps of his brother. Both brothers live with their parents in a luxurious part in the metropolis known as San Morano. The city attracts many visitors each year, from trainers wanting to battle in the impressive Blue Crown Stadium to people just wanting to have a relaxing vacation at the beach. For Lance, he not only encourages trainers to travel, he hopes seeing strong trainers from around the world will help his younger brother to get better in hopes of fighting these trainers one day. Not to mention, he gets to fight some of the best trainers in the world. With their mom being a Pokémon Professor and their dad being head of the Raider Financial Group, one of the many groups who sponsor trainers, Pokémon have been a part of the brothers' life for a long time.
……
"Poliwrath, use Ice Punch!", a trainer shouts towards his Pokémon. Standing across from this trainer and his Poliwrath is another trainer with a Hawlucha. Poliwrath forms a fist with its right hand and charges towards Hawlucha
.
"Double Team!", the opposing trainer yells. Copies of Hawlucha appear and surround Poliwrath. Poliwrath looks around, back and forth, side to side, confused as to where Hawlucha went. "Hawlucha, Aerial Ace! A white orb of energy surrounds Hawlucha and it charges in as the copies fade away. Poliwrath is hit and it stumbles back a little bit, reeling from the damage. "Not bad," Hawlucha's trainer says. "But, I'm gonna win this." Also in the stadium is a large crowd of spectators. They cheer on as the battle rages.
…..
Watching the battle from home is none other than the Raider brothers. The younger brother, Travis, is literally at the edge of the leather sofa watching this battle. Lance, on the other hand, has his arms crossed and is watching this battle. Also present in the room is Lance's Salamence.
"Hey, bro," Travis says as he turns to look at his brother. "Why didn't you enter? You could have kicked all their butts!"
Lance smiles at the comment. "Well, yeah but the problem is….it's an exclusive for Fighting-type Pokémon"
"But you have Machamp! He'd wreck everybody! That's it! I'm getting me a Machamp and entering that tournament!"
"Sorry little bro, even if you could, these guys are way out of your league. I lost in the semi-finals in the last one."
Travis's smile turns into a pouting face. "Tch, I STILL am not ready for the state or national league either, right?"
"What do you think?" Lance teasingly replies. He then points to the T.V. "Let's continue watching this"
Suddenly, a phone on a wooden table next to the sofa begins to ring
"Or not." Lance replies. He reaches for the phone and picks it up. While answering the phone, he walks into another room. "Talk to me," Lance replies as he closes the door to the other room. Travis and Salamence looks on in curiosity.
"Who do you think that was, Salamence?" Salamence emits a somewhat loud roar. Travis smiles. "I know that reaction. You hope you get to fight, don't you?" Salamence lets out a gentler roar this time meaning yes.
Lance appears from the other room, closing the door behind him. "So? What's going on?" Travis asks his older brother to which Lance smirks. "That was Melanie. It seems we got a challenge at the park. You coming?"
Travis immediately presses the power button on the remote control to turn off the T.V. He then jumps up off the sofa. Excited, he yells, "Of course, I'm coming!"
........
Melanie sits on a bench in the nearby park near the parking lot. Her long, black hair is lifted upwards by a slight breeze. A flock of Starly fly above in the hair while behind her, two trainers, one with an Electabuzz and other with a Hitmonchan, are battling. Suddenly, she spots an blue and white exotic sports car pull up into the parking lot. "Well, he's here. And looks like he brought his little brother along." Melanie goes to greet them.
…….
Lance, Travis, and Melanie are walking towards the center of the park.
"So, this punk thinks he all that." Melanie replies angrily. "I think he doesn't even care about his Pokémon. All he cares about is winning."
"Wow, this guy sounds like real bully." Travis replied.
"I'll take care of him." Lance replies. "But, why didn't you…."
"Because I didn't bring any Pokémon with me." Melanie interrupts. "My bad."
"No need to apologize. I like to trash the arrogant type." Lance replies.
"We are here." Melanie says. Her eyes fixated on the area.
"Oh, I see who you called now, Melanie" A brown-haired teenage boy calls out. "Lance Raider, the name's William Malanii. The strongest fighter in this park!"
"(Malani,….sounds familiar…..)", Lance thinks to himself.
"Once I defeat you, It'll prove to you that I am the best trainer around here!" William yells.
Lance smirks at this comment. "Watch what you say. Because you don't stand a chance against me. "
William walks to the opposite end of the area and turns around. He then pulls out a Poke Ball and presses the button to make it larger. "Allow me to introduce my undefeated champion. Go!" William presses the button on the Poke Ball to let the Poke Ball out. "ELLLLECCTIVIRE!" The Pokémon yells.
"Arrogance will not help you." Lance says as he takes a Poke Ball from his belt. He presses the button to make the Poke Ball larger. "Salamence, you're up." Lance presses the button again to let Salamence out. Salamence stares at the ground first with his eyes closed, then opens his eyes with a fierce look and looks up towards the sky and lets out a large and loud roar. At this moment, a crowd begins to form. Melanie notices this "Hmmm….we seemed to have attracted attention. Heh."
"Come on brother, you can beat this guy!" Travis yells.
"William, you can have the first attack." Says Lance.
"Electivire, Thunder!" William yells. Electivire fires a large bolt of lightning at Salamence.
"Flamethrower." Lance says calmly.
Salamence fires a powerful stream of fire from its mouth. The lightning bolt and the stream of fire collide and cancel each other out.
"Now use Dragon Pulse!" says Lance.
A bluish green ball forms in Salamence's mouth and Salamence fires it at Electivire. Electivire is hit directly but is still standing. "(Hmmm…this one might be tough.)," Lance thinks to himself.
"Not bad." William remarks. "Electivire, use Thunderpunch.
Electivire forms a fist with its right hand and the fist glows yellow with sparks surrounding it. Electivire charges at Salamence. However, Lance does not order a dodge. He just stands there.
"Ha. Given up already?" William tauntingly remarks as Electivire hits Salamence with the Thunderpunch. Salamence closes his eyes, reeling from the damage, but opens his eyes and lets out another large roar.
"NOW SALAMENCE!!!" Lance yells. Another ball of energy forms in Salamence's mouth. As Electivire prepares for another attack, it gets hit by another Dragon Pulse from Salamence. "Now use Flamethrower again!" Salamence fires a stream of fire from his mouth at Electivire who is still reeling from the Dragon Pulse. Electivire takes a second direct hit.
"Salamence can handle as many Thunderpunches as you give him. He won't be fazed or defeated so easily." Lance remarks. He then looks at William with a fierce look in eyes. "You're arrogant. I heard you don't even care for your Pokémon."
"Oh, she told you. Yeah, that Pokémon I used was so stupid and weak; I released it after the battle." William remarks while laughing.
Lance forms a fist with both hands. "SALAMENCE!!! HYPER BEAM!!!!" He yells out loud.
"Electivire, use your Hyper Beam as well!"
A orange ball of energy form in both Pokémon's mouths. Then, both Pokémon fire orange beams of energy at each other. Both attacks collide but Salamence's Hyper Beam proves much more powerful and Electivire is hit. Electivire falls to the ground defeated.
William looks angry as he recalls Electivre.. "Can any of these stupid Pokémon beat that Salamence since Electivire failed?!
"Someone should tell him he's the stupid one." Melanie jokingly remarks.
"You don't even care about your Pokémon. What kind of trainer are you?" Lance angrily asks. "Unless you want to be embarrassed even more, I suggest you beat it."
William still looks angry as the runs off. "I WON'T FORGE T THIS!!!" He yells as he runs. Meanwhile, the crowd is clapping over Lance and Salamence's victory. Salamence sees a Tamato Berry tree nearby proceeds to use his claw to get a berry on the ground for a snack.
However, among the crowd was two mysterious men. Both are wearing silver uniforms with silver helmets on. "What do you think?" One of the men asks the other.
"....He's perfect for a Shadow Pokémon…." The other man replies. "Come on, let's see if we can catch him to him."
"Which one?"
"The one with the Electivire. Not only is he perfect for a Shadow Pokemon, he's perfect for Cipher."
End of Ch 1.
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