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The flow of happiness~

Kishijoten

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    • The forgotton past that had flowed like a rushing river from day to day. I use to remember that i was held by your strong arms as we strolled down the peaceful river. But, as time had ticked we were no longer together and yet i had left when i was only six.
     
    22sa

    22sa

    ロミオとシンデレ? ?? �� �� �� �� �� �� �� ��
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    • I see the happy theme but when you said "we're no longer together" it seemed to turn into a sad ending theme instead o.o
     

    aurevesque

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    • the first part of the poem was great! but then i read teh ending "but we were no longer to gether, i left when i was six' i ddn't get taht part, what did age have to do with leaving?
    well, like i said liked it!
     

    Angela

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    • ~Momo Uchiha~ said:


    The forgotten past that had flowed like a rushing river from day to day.
    I use to remember that i was held by your strong arms as we strolled down the peaceful river.
    But, as time had ticked we were no longer together and yet i had left when i was only six.
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    I wonder who the poem is about.. It's obvious that it's about someone you lost when you were 6.. I sense happiness and sadness, and is that a hint of nostalgia?
     

    Samme!

    Haterz gonna hate
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    • Age 28
    • Seen Oct 3, 2011
    I really like this Momo! The way you wove happy and sad together was really great!

    It really displayed your emotions well. (im guessing)
     
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