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Old September 4th, 2009 (10:32 AM). Edited September 8th, 2009 by M4CK_M4YN3.
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    STORY:
    You are a male/female who recently moved to the land of GINTO. your best friend has joined you in search of a life of adventure.. you will discover new things while embarking on a vigorous journey through the amazing land of GINTO. you will find friendship compainionship and hardship.you are aware this will not be an easy journey but your mentor Prof. Mack the main scientist at the MACK POKEMON RESEARCH LAB is asking you to do a favor for him he has been conducting research on creatures called pokemon...little do you know that this favor will bring the protagonist into a world they never knew exist. THE WORLD OF POKEMON

    FEATURES:
    NEW REGION (GINTO REGION)
    NEW CHARACTERS(BRIAN OR ASHLEY)
    NEW MAPS vv
    NEW ENIMIES (TEAM CHAOS)
    COSTUM TILES
    BOX ART
    NEW GYMS AND GYM LEADERS
    NEW ELITE FOUR SYTEM

    +MORE


    SCREENS:
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    vIM CHANGING THAT SCRIPT TRUST MEv

    STARTER POKEMON MIGHT CHANGE! (SUGGESTIONS?)










    NEWBURRY TOWN D/P TILESET

    NEWBURRY F/L TILESET

    THERE IS A ROCK SMACH ROCK INFRONT OF BOTH THE CAVE AND THE GRASS

    and grass in starter town was my idea and i like it XD

    MT.RIDGE TOWN F/L TILESET


    *i will add more screens soon*


    BANNER:



    DOWNLOADS:
    downloads will be up soon once i finish scripting






    CREDITS:
    i need to credit alot of people but first ill say whackahack.com the pokecommunity.com
    POKEMON hackers online, green charizard, X-Buster, hack mew, Mewthree inc. LU-HO Poké and more... if i missed you please inform and ill edit


    *reminder*
    this is my first hack there are still alot of problems it is not finished i hope to have it finished by the end of ths year (2009)




    *please only constructive critizism this is my first hack and so far its better than some*
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    Old September 4th, 2009 (8:27 PM).
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      Can't really say anything the description and features are very vague.
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      Old September 4th, 2009 (8:40 PM).
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        That...Is one red Bulbasaur. O_o
        I'll wait till you work on this more.
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        Old September 4th, 2009 (8:44 PM).
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        well i think this hack can be average from what I see, you need to put more thought into the story and then this hack could get some followers. Add more features that make the game unique
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        Old September 4th, 2009 (9:06 PM).
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          That...Is one red Bulbasaur. O_o
          I'll wait till you work on this more.
          It's mother had an affair with a ditto that had the DNA of a Gowlith on it. that is the only explanation. XD
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          Old September 4th, 2009 (10:40 PM).
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          Interesting... it's really average but I gotta say it's nice for your first hack.
          But the... um Growlithe doesn't look very good with Bulbasaur's name
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          Old September 5th, 2009 (12:11 AM).
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            First of all, erase the Oak Script in the beginning! Secondly, edit the friggin' normal FR Text! This Hack is very unoriginal because the storyline isn't interestng and the Hero OW is just some plain edited Color stuff. You should add a new Script on how you get your First Pokemon instead of this.
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            Old September 5th, 2009 (12:17 PM). Edited September 5th, 2009 by Logan.
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              i havent started scripting two much and the starter bulbasuar thing is just what i did so i can test my game i will be changing the starter pokemon and the script. but i pretty much just finished mapping so give it time please

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              First of all, erase the Oak Script in the beginning! Secondly, edit the friggin' normal FR Text! This Hack is very unoriginal because the storyline isn't interestng and the Hero OW is just some plain edited Color stuff. You should add a new Script on how you get your First Pokemon instead of this.
              like i said this hack is no where near being completed i just wanted to get it all down organized somewhere but i will be changing the script aot i will change the stroy but i need a script first so i will be editing this post like every day and i will change my spirt this is all just a rough draft
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              Old September 5th, 2009 (4:23 PM).
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                Can I sprite please? (Please not that I am just a rookie spriter. If your sprites look screwed up, just ask me to do them again.)
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                Old September 5th, 2009 (4:32 PM).
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                  wow its ok but i can work on the sprite a bit.. if you want?
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                  Old September 5th, 2009 (8:21 PM).
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                    This hack is looking good, I especially like the title screen. This hack is progressing pretty good, hope to see more updates.
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                    Old September 5th, 2009 (8:29 PM).
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                      From those screen shots, the hack looks pretty fun to play. (:
                      I wouldn't mind playing it after its completion.
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                      Old September 5th, 2009 (8:46 PM).
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                        This hack is looking good, I especially like the title screen. This hack is progressing pretty good, hope to see more updates.
                        He didn't make the titlescreen.

                        Anyways, the maps are bad. They could be worked on much more. There are tile errors and grass in a town is a no-no.
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                        Old September 5th, 2009 (8:52 PM).
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                          He didn't make the titlescreen.

                          Anyways, the maps are bad. They could be worked on much more. There are tile errors and grass in a town is a no-no.
                          Thanks for pointing that out, and I was kinda trying not to discourage someone where its their first hack.
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                          Old September 5th, 2009 (10:22 PM).
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                          This was your first hack?
                          Well, by looking at it I'll say this one is an average hack.
                          Good luck with this.

                          Bulbasaur has a new form?
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                          Old September 6th, 2009 (1:31 AM).
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                            I think the Storyline is too small .
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                            Old September 6th, 2009 (12:28 PM).
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                              well anyone looking to help me sprite more power to you and i didnt make the gengar backround but i made the title and the"MACK MAYNE" but im getting rid of the bulbasuar thing im sorry people but ill also have who ever said my maps are bad to know that with the DP tiles it makes mapping harder but the maps are good enough and will work well with the game and everone know I HAVENT MADE A STORY LINE YET
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                              Old September 6th, 2009 (12:36 PM).
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                                ]ill also have who ever said my maps are bad to know that with the DP tiles it makes mapping harder but the maps are good enough


                                I saw said maps, tiles do not affect how good a map is basically. They do not make a map harder to make, unless you are... Well, a bad workman blames his tools. And also, they aren't DP tiles at all, from what is visible. Learn how to map more naturally (tuts are your friend.)

                                The Lab isn't made like that (looks kinda bad), there is a random hedge in a tree...The mountain is square-ish...
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                                Old September 6th, 2009 (1:31 PM).
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                                  I saw said maps, tiles do not affect how good a map is basically. They do not make a map harder to make, unless you are... Well, a bad workman blames his tools. And also, they aren't DP tiles at all, from what is visible. Learn how to map more naturally (tuts are your friend.)

                                  The Lab isn't made like that (looks kinda bad), there is a random hedge in a tree...The mountain is square-ish...


                                  i understand your point of view these screens where taken at all different times in the progress of the game i tried to give it my own tutch if you dont like it doesnt matter you dont have to like i care more about game quality and enjoyment of playin then grafics tiles or said maps .i dont work at game freak im not a hacking genious but i just enjo hacking so im going to keep doing it. and about the bush in the tree thank you for pointing that out i fixed it my bad and ive only been hacking for a month and im advancing in my skills not becuase of my tools witch are great but becuase i have dedication so my hack will be done soon and it will be fine weather or not you critisize
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                                  Old September 7th, 2009 (12:17 AM).
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                                    NEW UPDATES ON MAPPING AND SPRITES (ILL POST THEM SOON)
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                                    Old September 7th, 2009 (12:24 AM).
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                                      Liking the new updates, although there are the few people doubting this hack, I am behind this one. Also I see a few spelling mistakes in screenies, people thing that they are a turn-off to hacks.
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                                      Old September 7th, 2009 (12:29 AM).
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                                        i understand your point of view these screens where taken at all different times in the progress of the game i tried to give it my own tutch if you dont like it doesnt matter you dont have to like i care more about game quality and enjoyment of playin then grafics tiles or said maps .i dont work at game freak im not a hacking genious but i just enjo hacking so im going to keep doing it. and about the bush in the tree thank you for pointing that out i fixed it my bad and ive only been hacking for a month and im advancing in my skills not becuase of my tools witch are great but becuase i have dedication so my hack will be done soon and it will be fine weather or not you critisize


                                        There is a reason why people criticise, you know. To make you improve. I said all of that, because I want you to improve, and become better. If you think I said it because I can, you are deeply wrong. If you want to improve quality, first of all, fix your grammar, and 2nd of all, take all constructive criticism to heart. I said it to make you better, and to improve quality. Your own touch may be good, but needs improving. By then taking all this in, and making maps more natural looking, more people will enjoy it.

                                        Also, criticism is what points out errors, mistakes, or poor things. So, criticism helps you way more than you think.
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                                        Old September 7th, 2009 (12:38 AM).
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                                        i understand your point of view these screens where taken at all different times in the progress of the game i tried to give it my own tutch if you dont like it doesnt matter you dont have to like i care more about game quality and enjoyment of playin then grafics tiles or said maps .i dont work at game freak im not a hacking genious but i just enjo hacking so im going to keep doing it. and about the bush in the tree thank you for pointing that out i fixed it my bad and ive only been hacking for a month and im advancing in my skills not becuase of my tools witch are great but becuase i have dedication so my hack will be done soon and it will be fine weather or not you critisize
                                        Excuse me? He was trying to help, giving out constructive critism. And he was totally right, but if you are being childish and won't accept it, its not his fault.
                                        And learn how full stops and kommas work.
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                                        Old September 7th, 2009 (2:45 AM).
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                                          thanks. i do like the support but im not it expecting this hack to even get into show case but ill try. but if anyone knows how to change the back sprite of my player in battle...help!
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                                            thanks. i do like the support but im not it expecting this hack to even get into show case but ill try. but if anyone knows how to change the back sprite of my player in battle...help!
                                            This is just... What? If you are making a hack, you will want it to be good, right? By saying "I don't expect it to be in Showcase", you are being negative. Think positive. Don't "try" to get it in the Showcase, "aim" to get it in the Showcase!

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