Pokemon Hoenn XDA

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Flaming Quilava

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    Hey heres my comic! I hope you like it! btw this is my first comic. I hope you have a fun time reading it!
    ~Rules~
    1. Dont spam.
    2.Follow the main rules.

    There are 8 opened spots on this comic! If you have any ideas pm me!

    Ok and here are the eposodes. I will fix the grammer in the first one later. Plz rate it!

    Intruduction:https://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c326/Dragon_man_/Polt.png

    Sesion 1:The biggining

    Comic1 https://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c326/Dragon_man_/X_Comic_X_1.png
    Comic2 https://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c326/Dragon_man_/Pokemon_Hoenn_XDA.png
    Comic3 https://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c326/Dragon_man_/Pokemon_Hoenn_XDA3.png
    Comic4 https://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c326/Dragon_man_/Pokemon_Hoenn_XDA4.png
    Comic5 https://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c326/Dragon_man_/Pokemon_Hoenn_XDA5.png
    Comic6 https://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c326/Dragon_man_/Pokemon_Hoenn_XDA6.png
    Comic7 https://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c326/Dragon_man_/Pokemon_Hoenn_XDA7.png
    Comic8 https://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c326/Dragon_man_/Pokemon_Hoenn_XDA8.png
    Comic9 https://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c326/Dragon_man_/Pokemon_Hoenn_XDA9.png
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    Bois
    [PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon Hoenn XDA

    Name: Philip Speed
    Genger:Male
    Age:12-13
    Hometown: A private island
    Nature:Brave
    Bio: Philip is a kid who would give up being inside somewhere for a chance to go outside. He went on a journey to get some fresh air and adventure.
    Trainer Card: https://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c326/Dragon_man_/TCXD1.png
    [PokeCommunity.com] Pokemon Hoenn XDA

    Name: David Casprin
    Genger:Male
    Age:13
    Hometown:Littleroot town
    Nature: Timed
    Bio: David was born in a rich family. He went on a journey to prove to his family that he doesnt need money to be sucsesful kid.
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    Cradits:
    Rad hair guy:kenada morspeed.
    Island place {biggining}:[ DarkDragon ]
    Most of the overworlds: Avatar
    Template for tc's: Bhreg
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    Umm... Did I say you could use my Overworld in that way? NO! I demand an explanation, and that you take out those episodes, or at least find another Overworld.
     
    No, I meant that you change the name from that back to the original.
     
    Please remember to give credit to people you borrow any kind of sprite from, otherwise it's considered stealing. Some spriters would prefer it if you PM them for their permission to use their sprites in your comic, in which I'd recommend doing. Always give credit to the spriters whom you borrow their sprites from. Remember that before you use a sprite from somewhere else in the future~ :)

    Also, kindly please give credit to Avatar for most of those overworld sprites, as he was the person who made them~ :)

    Well, keep at it with your comic! ;)
     
    Where's the credit for the sprites? o.o

    Also, i don't understand the history, try adding a plot, then Bios, that would make it understand.
     
    Ok, its a good comic but you need to work on it a bit.

    1. I can barely understand what's going on. Its kind of rushing
    2. A lot of spelling and grammar errors
    3. Where the plot of the story
    4. Where are the bios and introducing the characters
    5. Try to put each screen closer together and then crop it.
    6. If you are going to use speech bubbles you need to work on them a bit try using a box at the bottom just until you can make better Speech Bubbles.

    I'm sure this'll be a great comic if yuo can tidy it up more a bit.
     
    The comic's ok, but there's alot of spelling errors and you should try to do battle scenes like in the games.
     
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