OMG, Grant has another team for rating!

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    Okay, I've got a team that seems to have an even record of wins and losses. I want to make the wins higher, and so I decided to have you guys check out what I could be doing wrong... Here's my team.

    Swampert (M) @ Chesto Berry ** Neptune
    Trait: Torrent
    EVs: 85 Atk / 208 Spd / 85 SAtk / 132 SDef
    Mild Nature (+SAtk, -Def)
    - Earthquake
    - Ice Beam
    - Surf
    - Toxic

    Heracross (M) @ Salac Berry ** Horny
    Trait: Guts
    EVs: 85 HP / 85 Atk / 85 Def / 255 Spd
    Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
    - Megahorn
    - Reversal
    - Substitute
    - Swords Dance

    Ludicolo (F) @ Miracle Seed ** Lilly
    Trait: Swift Swim
    EVs: 84 HP / 169 Def / 98 Spd / 159 SAtk
    Modest Nature (+SAtk, -Atk)
    - Giga Drain
    - Ice Beam
    - Rain Dance
    - Surf

    Tyranitar (M) @ Chesto Berry ** Doom
    Trait: Sand Stream
    EVs: 85 HP / 191 Atk / 85 Def / 39 Spd / 110 SDef
    Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
    - Dragon Dance
    - Earthquake
    - Rock Slide
    - Substitute

    Breloom (M) @ Miracle Seed ** Shroomer
    Trait: Effect Spore
    EVs: 255 Atk / 255 Spd
    Jolly Nature (+Spd, -SAtk)
    - Focus Punch
    - Giga Drain
    - Spore
    - Swords Dance

    Jolteon (M) @ Choice Band ** Sparky
    Trait: Volt Absorb
    EVs: 84 HP / 108 Def / 126 Spd / 192 SAtk
    Modest Nature (+SAtk, -Atk)
    - Hidden Power [Water]
    - Rain Dance
    - Sleep Talk
    - Thunder


    There you go, straight from the NetBattle Team Builder. Tell me some stuff that I could use to do better, and ask about my common strats if you so desire. Thanks a bunch!
     
    Fixes in bold.

    Grant said:
    Okay, I've got a team that seems to have an even record of wins and losses. I want to make the wins higher, and so I decided to have you guys check out what I could be doing wrong... Here's my team.

    Swampert (M) @ Leftovers ** OMG Cursepert
    Trait: Torrent
    EVs: 240 HP / 16 Atk / 120 Def / 56 SAtk / 76 SDef
    Relaxed Nature (+Def, -Spd)
    - Curse
    - Earthquake
    - Rock Slide/Ice Beam
    - Surf

    What was the point of Chesto Berry on your set? It's not worth it unless your using Rest, and even then it sucks. Use this.

    Heracross (M) @ Choice Band ** Horny
    Trait: Guts
    EVs: 4 HP/252 Attack/252 Speed
    Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
    - Megahorn
    - Focus Punch/HP [Ghost]
    - Sleep Talk
    - Rock Slide

    You stole my name for Hera by the way.

    Ludicolo (F) @ Miracle Seed ** Lilly
    Trait: Swift Swim
    EVs: 84 HP / 169 Def / 98 Spd / 159 SAtk
    Bold
    - Leech Seed
    - Ice Beam
    - Rain Dance
    - Surf

    Don't know about EVs for Ludicolo.

    Tyranitar (M) @ Leftovers
    Trait: Sand Stream
    EVs: 252 HP / 54 Atk / 16 Def / 172 Spd / 16 SDef
    Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
    - Dragon Dance
    - Earthquake
    - Rock Slide
    - Substitute/Taunt

    If you use Taunt, then he only needs 401 HP

    Breloom (M) @ Lefties ** Shroomer
    Trait: Effect Spore
    EVs: 252 Attack/252 Speed/4 HP
    Jolly Nature (+Spd, -SAtk)
    - Focus Punch
    - HP [Ghost]
    - Spore
    - Swords Dance/Sludge Bomb

    You wasted 4 EVs.

    Jolteon (M) @ Lefties ** Sparky
    Trait: Volt Absorb
    EVs: 252 Sp.atk/252 Speed/4 HP
    Timid
    - Hidden Power [Grass/Ice]
    - T-bolt
    - Sub
    - T-Wave

    Use that. Again you wasted 4 EVs.

    There you go, straight from the NetBattle Team Builder. Tell me some stuff that I could use to do better, and ask about my common strats if you so desire. Thanks a bunch!
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    Remember EVs have to be divisible by 4. Hope this helps.    :D
     
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    jolteon should have learned shockwave
     
    Mullet said:
    That's funny, *points to signature*.:\
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    you again?:nervous: anyway get shockwave its a great move
     
    dude shock wave's the best:\
     
    T bolt misses allot shock wave never misses
    it helped me beat FR/LG:paranoid:
     
    trust me t-bolt does miss allot it took me 30 tries in yellow to beat starmie
    with t-bolt:\
     
    *coughs*ever heard of max*coughs*Ether
     
    Thanks for the input, Mullet. And thanks for the comment on Shockwave (though I doubt I'll use it), Recknin.

    Now stop arguing and let other people comment on my team! :D
     
    Grant said:
    Okay, I've got a team that seems to have an even record of wins and losses. I want to make the wins higher, and so I decided to have you guys check out what I could be doing wrong... Here's my team.

    Swampert (M) @ Chesto Berry ** Neptune
    Trait: Torrent
    EVs: 85 Atk / 208 Spd / 85 SAtk / 132 SDef
    Mild Nature (+SAtk, -Def)
    - Earthquake
    - Ice Beam
    - Surf
    - Toxic

    curse over toxic, alot more defense, and only 4 evs in speed, you only need 230 SpAtk.........you also need 401 HP and alot less SpDef

    Heracross (M) @ Salac Berry ** Horny
    Trait: Guts
    EVs: 85 HP / 85 Atk / 85 Def / 255 Spd
    Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
    - Megahorn
    - Reversal
    - Substitute
    - Swords Dance

    You only need 252 evs to max out a stat, max out attack aswell

    Ludicolo (F) @ Miracle Seed ** Lilly
    Trait: Swift Swim
    EVs: 84 HP / 169 Def / 98 Spd / 159 SAtk
    Modest Nature (+SAtk, -Atk)
    - Giga Drain
    - Ice Beam
    - Rain Dance
    - Surf

    hopefully thats 198 speed, leech seed over giga drain.....for special walls

    Tyranitar (M) @ Chesto Berry ** Doom
    Trait: Sand Stream
    EVs: 85 HP / 191 Atk / 85 Def / 39 Spd / 110 SDef
    Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
    - Dragon Dance
    - Earthquake
    - Rock Slide
    - Substitute

    you need 404 HP, and 200 Speed, and alot of attack

    Breloom (M) @ Miracle Seed ** Shroomer
    Trait: Effect Spore
    EVs: 255 Atk / 255 Spd
    Jolly Nature (+Spd, -SAtk)
    - Focus Punch
    - Giga Drain
    - Spore
    - Swords Dance

    hidden power ghost or rock instead of giga drain........swords dance doesn't really work since you are very fragile

    Jolteon (M) @ Choice Band ** Sparky
    Trait: Volt Absorb
    EVs: 84 HP / 108 Def / 126 Spd / 192 SAtk
    Modest Nature (+SAtk, -Atk)
    - Hidden Power [Water]
    - Rain Dance
    - Sleep Talk
    - Thunder

    sub, thunderbolt, hidden power grass or ice, thunder wave or baton pass

    252 Speed, 252 SpAtk and timid
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    this team doesn't really have a go to guy for special attacks so things with calm mind screw you over
     
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