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A days work(funny)

Shinji_

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    I was working for money becuase im poor
    So poor I couldnt buy salt and water for my cancer soar
    There was some people coming to my town and they wanted a tour

    Yes I know I dont make money
    One day I will have my honey
    And I can lick it off my cheek when its runny

    I was working in the farm yard
    And then I saw this retard
    He wanted me to give him some lard
    And he took it away in his car

    I KNOW IM LAME LOL xD
     
    Hilarious!!! Its really funny!!!
     
    I dont know whats so funny.
    Its kinda sad, though. Its as if insulting a poor person.Instead you should help them.The poem...it would have been better if you choose a better topic.As for the poetry itself.Your good.You spell good, you also have some good rhyming.I know you can do way better if your not bored and do your best. ^_^
    Good luck.
    ~ pink-tiger
     
    Shiniji_ said:
    Yea I know I could actually make you guys hear some real poems that I got 89%+ In school I'll post em later and thanks for the compliment :)
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    Hehee, cant wait. ^_^
    I just hope its soon.......

    ~ pink-tiger
     
    Winter is here the shivering cold
    workers outside selling hot cider for gold
    the poor ones finding bread crumbs under the snow
    while the people in there house on the fire warming there toes

    February brings the thaw
    Waters gushing from its maw
    Days are misty cold and raw
    life begins to awake
    winter sleepers get up and shake
    winter bonds begin to break

    :D They're
     
    Shinji_ said:
    Winter is here the shivering cold
    workers outside selling hot cider for gold
    the poor ones finding bread crumbs under the snow
    while the people in there house on the fire warming there toes

    February brings the thaw
    Waters gushing from its maw
    Days are misty cold and raw
    life begins to awake
    winter sleepers get up and shake
    winter bonds begin to break

    :D They're
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    Wow, your talking about seasons.A much better topic. ^_^
    Good words.. You can tell that you notice how seasons change and things move on and become something more. Its great..I must also say..Way better than the one before. This one's not funny though. Im sure you can make great funny poems as well.Jst not about homeless. Teehehee well good job. ^_^
    ~pink-tiger
     
    Oh it is good.I may have not said it.Its good.
    Then I would be waiting for more.Thoug it could not hurt to do more long ones. ^_^
    Teeehee..
    ~ pink-tiger
     
    Hehehe thank you. I could be your pc mother.but that'll make me feel old. Still.Thats cause I myself write poems. ^_^
     
    Yesh yesh I'll do that mommmiie xD

    Listen to this other quick poem o.o I'll make some big ones tommmorow I guess

    Its a hot summers day today
    And my destination seems a mile away
    No water around no voices being heard
    The sand is boiling as if it was on the stove
    Boy do I wish there was some snow
    The cactus shimmering a grassy green
    The vultures hunting looking mean
    will i be trapped in this permnant sauna

    TILL NEXT TIME XD
     
    Hehehe its a random topic.Its good words once again.Just a bit funny about the topic.Good job though. ^_^
    Really good...
     
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