Hello!
I bet you're all fed up with me by now :cer_eek:
But I got this idea and I really want to know what you people think about it. Oh, well, and I might need your help with this, too.
Here's the idea:
*No Title Yet*
Thursday evening: A 19-year-old girl, Vicki Bauer, is reported to have gone missing. Vicki lives with her parents and grandma but hasn't been seen since Tuesday. All newspapers have her picture on their front page and police starts looking for her.
Saturday noon: A shriek is heard in the city of Veilstone around noon. Townspeople presume the shriek came from the headquarters of Team Galactic, a company that is well known for the cheap and environment-friendly energy it sells. People rush to the building to find a young woman (this is Vicki, obviously) lying in the ground and bleeding next to the wall. Seeing how there isn't any glass in the ground and only the windows of 7th and 8th floors above her are open, they assume she has fallen from the window of the 7th floor and died. But she is, in fact, alive. When she gets in the hospital, the doctors recognise the uncoscious girl.
A week after: Vicki wakes up. She has only suffered minor damage to her brain and internal organs, but three of her ribs, her jaw, and her hip are broken. She learns that a young man called Jarus (a member of Team Galactic) is being accused of kidnapping and trying to kill her, because his office was just above the place where Vicki was found and his wondow was open at that time. Also, it seems that she was unnaturally relaxed while she fell, which could olny be because of drugs, alcohol or, well, being uncoscious. So, the police assume someone threw her out. Vici has a severe amnesia, and she remembers only one thing after turning 17: she jumped from that window herself. She can't remember why she did it, but she is sure she did it herself. Jarus is innocent, and Vicki tries to tell that to the police. Obviously, they don't believe her, as she doesn't have any recollection of anything else that happened. Moreover, as far as Vicki's family and the police know, she doesn't have a motive to kill herself.
Vicki can't let an innocent man go to jail (or could he get executed for a kidnapping and an attempted murder? We don't have a death penalty here in Finland, so I don't know a lot about it) for years because of her, so she has to find out why she jumped and present the evidence to the police before it's too late. She doesn't see herself as a person that would try to kill herself, but she is worried that remembering what happened might drive her to try suicide again.
Besides, how can she find out what happened when she can't walk or talk properly (remember, broken jaw and hip)?
Jarus, of course, isn't what he seems like. The official documents say that he is in charge of monitoring abnormalities in Team Galactic's power generators that are spread trough Sinnoh. That is, in fact, the truth, but he doesn't do it for the sake of the safety of Sinnoh citizens like he claims to the authorities. He does it to keep track of Dialga, the legendary time guardian.
After hearing this, Vicki gets an idea. What if she was to travel to the past to see what really happened to her..?
I can tell you more about the galactic generators if you want :cer_laugh:
What do you think?
Also, I have another question. There are two options:
1) Vicki was depressed and shocked and indeed jumped to kill herself (a good place to ruin the whole thing with unnecessary angst and such)
2) Vicki did jump herself, but she didn't mean to kill herself: something that she did not expect happened and made the situation lethal (might get a tad farfetched, don't you think?)
I've already decided on one of these, but I want to know which one seems better to you. A depressed, self-destructive Vicki or reckless, unlucky Vicki?
Also, if anyone has anything to say about death penalty, I'm all ears. I'm going to do some research on the subject anyway, but information from "real people" is always... well, it's... a lot more fun to read, for one.
I bet you're all fed up with me by now :cer_eek:
But I got this idea and I really want to know what you people think about it. Oh, well, and I might need your help with this, too.
Here's the idea:
*No Title Yet*
Thursday evening: A 19-year-old girl, Vicki Bauer, is reported to have gone missing. Vicki lives with her parents and grandma but hasn't been seen since Tuesday. All newspapers have her picture on their front page and police starts looking for her.
Saturday noon: A shriek is heard in the city of Veilstone around noon. Townspeople presume the shriek came from the headquarters of Team Galactic, a company that is well known for the cheap and environment-friendly energy it sells. People rush to the building to find a young woman (this is Vicki, obviously) lying in the ground and bleeding next to the wall. Seeing how there isn't any glass in the ground and only the windows of 7th and 8th floors above her are open, they assume she has fallen from the window of the 7th floor and died. But she is, in fact, alive. When she gets in the hospital, the doctors recognise the uncoscious girl.
A week after: Vicki wakes up. She has only suffered minor damage to her brain and internal organs, but three of her ribs, her jaw, and her hip are broken. She learns that a young man called Jarus (a member of Team Galactic) is being accused of kidnapping and trying to kill her, because his office was just above the place where Vicki was found and his wondow was open at that time. Also, it seems that she was unnaturally relaxed while she fell, which could olny be because of drugs, alcohol or, well, being uncoscious. So, the police assume someone threw her out. Vici has a severe amnesia, and she remembers only one thing after turning 17: she jumped from that window herself. She can't remember why she did it, but she is sure she did it herself. Jarus is innocent, and Vicki tries to tell that to the police. Obviously, they don't believe her, as she doesn't have any recollection of anything else that happened. Moreover, as far as Vicki's family and the police know, she doesn't have a motive to kill herself.
Vicki can't let an innocent man go to jail (or could he get executed for a kidnapping and an attempted murder? We don't have a death penalty here in Finland, so I don't know a lot about it) for years because of her, so she has to find out why she jumped and present the evidence to the police before it's too late. She doesn't see herself as a person that would try to kill herself, but she is worried that remembering what happened might drive her to try suicide again.
Besides, how can she find out what happened when she can't walk or talk properly (remember, broken jaw and hip)?
Jarus, of course, isn't what he seems like. The official documents say that he is in charge of monitoring abnormalities in Team Galactic's power generators that are spread trough Sinnoh. That is, in fact, the truth, but he doesn't do it for the sake of the safety of Sinnoh citizens like he claims to the authorities. He does it to keep track of Dialga, the legendary time guardian.
After hearing this, Vicki gets an idea. What if she was to travel to the past to see what really happened to her..?
I can tell you more about the galactic generators if you want :cer_laugh:
What do you think?
Also, I have another question. There are two options:
1) Vicki was depressed and shocked and indeed jumped to kill herself (a good place to ruin the whole thing with unnecessary angst and such)
2) Vicki did jump herself, but she didn't mean to kill herself: something that she did not expect happened and made the situation lethal (might get a tad farfetched, don't you think?)
I've already decided on one of these, but I want to know which one seems better to you. A depressed, self-destructive Vicki or reckless, unlucky Vicki?
Also, if anyone has anything to say about death penalty, I'm all ears. I'm going to do some research on the subject anyway, but information from "real people" is always... well, it's... a lot more fun to read, for one.