Nothing wrong with yours, it's just a bit plain-looking. But I know- you can't find the images needed, and whatnot. I like the logo, though, I can never get mine looking official like that- hence the untouched Fire Red logo.
Yeah, do upload the other one. I'LL BE BACK...Lulz...
heres a good tut for how to do the text like the Fire Red logo
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and yea ill upload it soon =P, i just get bored of making tilemaps and stuff