A Whole New Feeling (Contestshipping)

The story's good, but there are some things that can be fixed to make the thing perfect:
1. Sometimes, after the diolouge, you forget to add the period.
2. It's supposed to be quality over quantity, but adding a little more description into the settings might be better.
3. A tiny bit of editing won't hurt.

I'm a big fan of this thing, overall. Can I be in your friends list? PM me for the next chapter.
 
Time to review!! XD

Chap. 1- couple of mistakes, don't feel like pointing them out... XD

Chap. 2- OMG!!! How could Drew not like May??? Bad Drew!

Chap. 3- no mistakes that I could find, very good, very well written!!

Now I've reviewed the fic so far. Peace out!

~Kitteh
 
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