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~ACHA AND KAGEX'S SUPER AWESOME COMIC FACTORY OF TEH DOOMNESS~

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Well, i must say...yeah, Acha did better. i'm sorry, kage, but it is true. His is more developed and flows nicely. Not that your's is bad, but just not good :(.
Can't wait for the next ODD.

Oh, and i DO think Battelers is "spelled right," kwesi.
 
well achas should be better, this is like his 6th comic where battelers is my first, but thanks for the comment
 
I just read it. Although I thought that you guys stopped because I haven't seen this thread with new posts.
 
Nice comic! "Sex offenders, comic jokes, and still gay Weebo!" should have been the title :D!!! And, KageX, i wasn't aware it was your first and his sixth; it's good for your first attempt. Maybe you should include more bloody make-out deaths!!!

Keep it up guys, it looks good!
 
Hey, I've been meaning to check out this comic but I never found the thread till now...Or maybe I didn't try that hard? Anyways I like the comics. Keep up the good work guys!
 
*stops thread from dieing*

I don't think so.
because it's time for...

A NEW EPISODE!
okay guys, this one I don't recommend little children reading.
However, It's not up to the level that "My girlfriend who lives in Canada" was up to.
This one almosts hits the limit.
enjoy anyway.

28: Don't Complain About Censors
 
...well i have good news bad news and somthing random

good news im gonna start a new comic
bad news battelers is over

random news i have two random comic strips in g/s/c style if you guys like it i may continue but im not sure

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KageX, what I find problematic with your comics is that you go to fast. You need to delve into the characters, really show us the history of the town. How do Marina and Jimmy know Cody? What was everyone's reaction, why were Marina and Jimmy there?

Also, work up a bit on grammar and speech bubble placement.

It should go like this;

First comment
Response
Second comment
Response

It goes from highest to lowest, in chronological order. Work on your grammar, capitalization, punctuation, etc. Just a few mistakes, but they bug me. (well/We'll p.s./P.S. cody/Cody)
 
AHAHA 27 was awkawrd. But latios and latias thing was...intrsting. In a bad way. 28 now waseven better and that g/s comi kage was XD out loud/
 
Acha I would love to know were you get your PMD and PMD2 sprites please tell me. I know it says Spriters Resource but I cant find all(most) there?
 
*KAboom*

Hey, guess what? So this factory doesn't keep flipping from active to almost dead, here are these little numbers to keep you guys occupied:

TLT (For all you don't know, The Lengendary Trio).

Okay, it's not what it was before. we got a better layout, and.. just read T_T
(BTW, the characters are not going to be R/S/E heros in Kanto. It's good ol' R/B/G/Y/FR/LG
characters! ^^

So, Here's TLT #1:

1: Red <3 Katrina the Grown-up Hitch
 
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