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Adam_148

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    Whatever! Industries are proud to present...
    Adam's Pokemon Adventure, and any other divisions of the name.
    Saga One
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    Movie One
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    Saga Two
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    Movie Two
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    Saga Three
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    Fan comics
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    Behind The Scenes
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    Fanart
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    Rules
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    Comic Service Announcements
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    After all the advice people gave you, it;s not really changed at all over gd knows how many issues, it still gets a D/E in my eyes. Well a D as the visuals have gone up.
     
    Man, don't you just quit? You have no plot, well, you do have one, but it changes every 3 episodes. It is always repitition, and you have waaaaay too many characters. We've seen this all 4 times before, I think you might want to stop.
     
    So much text under pannels 0_O Seriously, TUP is crap, use speech bubbles. You don;t see TUP in the amazing Spiderman do you?
     
    And Adam, becareful with the images you've put in your first post. If they're a little too big enough to be stretching the post, then you ought to reduce them to just URLs. There are some users on the forum with screen resolutions smaller than what you may have, and I'm sure they wouldn't like knowing that the page is stretched.
     
    Uh...what the heck is going on here?

    Besides having the text under the pannels, there's huge ammounts of text. With that much text, you could have atleast 7 comics from one of your comics. With the text under pannels like that, Its really hard to understand what's going on, as well Since I got no idea who's who in these comics. Also, never mix styles. You got Mysterious Dungeon clashing with Ruby/Saphire and Fire Red/Leaf Green. HUGE ammounts of clash too.
     
    I've made my post smaller by grouping up the sections into Spoilers. So, I won't be making any comics today because I'm nowhere near my computer with all my comic making stuff so sorry, maybe tomorrow. I have also fixed the link in my sig, and I'm collecting and creating ideas for my comic, see ya soon.
    Edit: Got it Shiharu, it's just my post was a little cluttered anyway.
    Edit2: I'm adding a new section to that as well, A Comic Service Announcement section here is the first comic below:
    https://img164.imageshack.us/img164/4377/extracomicle8.png
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    It's good to be back in life in PC.

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    Now an advice for your cast: I see very much space in, so why you just made some characters that actually can fit in an specific area and just.... put them in somewhere else? Fix that, or is it that you want to make your text somewhat "longer"? Also, in the saga 2 Cast, the lines are bad, fix that too. Is not that hard.
     
    please, not again, your comics are bad.

    AND HOW DOES A COMIC HAVE A MOVIE? If the movie was in flash, it'd be understandable, but its not.
    Move on from this stupid comic, make a new one with better stuff.
    I know its your choice, but its the right thing to do.
     
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    please, not again, your comics are bad.

    AND HOW DOES A COMIC HAVE A MOVIE? If the movie was in flash, it'd be understandable, but its not.
    Move on from this stupid comic, make a new one with better stuff.
    I know its your choice, but its the right thing to do.
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    Yer you should really start a new comc, this one is really getting boring now, try something new.
    SG
     
    Ok, it gets pretty pointless when you guys repeat the same thing over and over again. I'm sure Adam would get the point by now. If you've nothing to post besides bluntly degrading the comic then perhaps it'd be best if you don't really reply. We don't want to have to cause any arguments.
     
    Shiharu said:
    Ok, it gets pretty pointless when you guys repeat the same thing over and over again. I'm sure Adam would get the point by now. If you've nothing to post besides bluntly degrading the comic then perhaps it'd be best if you don't really reply. We don't want to have to cause any arguments.
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    I'm barely starting posting here.

    And also, i'm just giving an advice in some parts of his cast that he could improve.
     
    I like the comics. Even though I had left for a while, I came back to see a lot of new episodes to read. I`m all like "Yeah!" But it did get confusing when it went from a kingdom hearts like thing to a pokemon mystery dungeon thing and back to normal ._.;
     
    Shiharu said:
    Ok, it gets pretty pointless when you guys repeat the same thing over and over again. I'm sure Adam would get the point by now. If you've nothing to post besides bluntly degrading the comic then perhaps it'd be best if you don't really reply. We don't want to have to cause any arguments.
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    You know full well people ahve being telling him this for a while, and he never gets the point. Besides, it;s not as if anyone's breaking the rules by posting what they are.
     
    Come on guys I say just leave Adam to it tbh i like the comics and it's his choice weather he wants to continue making them.
     
    Adam dont complain but im going to be leaving your il make a death eppy for myself as a goodbye
     
    oh god I rember these comics, why is it still alive? Every one used to like these but now I see why no one does now, its boring. I got angry when you didnt let me join the comic but now im just glad. Really, do something interesting with your life -,-
     
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