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/Kusagaki. The Grass Kid./
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    Just wanted to show you guys some of my stuff...


    Heres' my buddy Kurachu...
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    Some follow pics I was working on...
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    My Trainer Card...
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    Please check out my Animated Comic, FBH over at DeviantArt...
    https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/18942794/*

    *Download it, right-click and view in quicktime... for best results.

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    (FBH = Flat Broke in Hoenn, which is set in a Hoenn where everything isn't free...)

    PLEASE DON'T STEAL.
     
    that was the greatest comic i've seen so far
    plaease pm me if you want to be friend and tell me more
    if your going to make another comic
     
    The outline on Kurachu's tail and ears could be improved. The black outline on the lighter areas look really bad. The follow pics look good for the most part, the only complaint there is on the first Bulbasaur pic it looks like you missed the teal on the head. The head being colored the same as the bulb looks off. As far as the trainer card goes, I'm not a big fan of the bigger version but there is some cool stuff in there. When I get more time I'll be checking out the comic, but from the little preview there it looks really good. :P
     
    megafuz said:
    The outline on Kurachu's tail and ears could be improved. The black outline on the lighter areas look really bad. The follow pics look good for the most part, the only complaint there is on the first Bulbasaur pic it looks like you missed the teal on the head. The head being colored the same as the bulb looks off. As far as the trainer card goes, I'm not a big fan of the bigger version but there is some cool stuff in there. When I get more time I'll be checking out the comic, but from the little preview there it looks really good. :P
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    Thanks for the constructive critisism. ;)

    I see what you mean with Kurachu, The bulbasaur's head isn't really the same colour as the bulb :P , and thanks for the Trainer-card compliment. (Even though it's not your thing.)
     
    yeah,that is the greatest animated comic:DPlease tell me when you make another episode too^_^
     
    Hah, that animated comic was a neat idea, I thought. Definitely more unique than a lot of other comics.

    Since sprite comics and trainer cards aren't a commenting specialty of mine, I'll stay on your regular sprites. The Kurachu looks interesting, though I'm not sure if that gray-brown outline color on the tan(?) areas works too well...

    Got nothing to say about the "follow" sprites, really, except that I think they look good. Keep up the good work. ^_^
     
    You should open a shop for edited pokemon like Kurachu. Kinda like what Dawnstar did(might want to get her permission then).
     
    Thanks for all the awesome responses everyone, I really do appreciate it!

    P.S. I dunno about a sprite shop... Kurachu took a while to come up with, so far I've only ever "invented" 3 pokemon... *One of which is at my deviantart, if you wanna go look.
     
    where did you get the pinball sprites for your t card, i've been looking for them but i haven't found them yet.
     
    thankyou ADJUST *gives rep for helping me*and the first one is interesting.
     
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