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Omnipresent Authority Figure
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Damn it. It took ages before this thread appeared. :\ This is where all those lengthy discussions should have been.
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Yea, but what can you do?
Anyway, it appears that I don't have much competition. But I'm going to post an RP sample anyway.
Anyway, it appears that I don't have much competition. But I'm going to post an RP sample anyway.
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Hmm... I know my SU may not be as good as Sir Aaron's, but I really think it's more or less the RPing skills the person has. I can give you quite a few examples, if you'd like, and see what you have to say about them.
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That's sort of what I was implying in the main thread, so yes.
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From Mika's "Fragments of Alarayne":
https://www.pokecommunity.com/posts/4098971/
Took me quite a bit to get in, and was finished before the Mods and the GM herself
From Eletj's "Cineris Titan Academy":
https://www.pokecommunity.com/posts/4221391/
Not one of my better ones, I suppose
And lastly (for now; I have to get off), From FrozenSnowman's "Ophoore Region":
https://www.pokecommunity.com/posts/4319162/
No comment XD
https://www.pokecommunity.com/posts/4098971/
Took me quite a bit to get in, and was finished before the Mods and the GM herself
From Eletj's "Cineris Titan Academy":
https://www.pokecommunity.com/posts/4221391/
Not one of my better ones, I suppose
And lastly (for now; I have to get off), From FrozenSnowman's "Ophoore Region":
https://www.pokecommunity.com/posts/4319162/
No comment XD
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From ~|symphony's Rawltz & Rawltz Co.
It was a pretty basic day in Dom's life. He had already went through his usual morning routine and was currently enjoying the fresh Kanto air that surrounded him. He was sitting in an off-white wooden chair on the porch of his house. The beautiful melodies that resonated from his guitar mingled with the air.
A familiar faced passed by where Dom was playing. It was a young boy, about 7 years old, and he adored hearing Dom play.
"Hey mister Dom!" The boy shouted out with an ecstatic tone.
"Hello, Robby!" Dom said with a hearty grin covering his face.
"What are you playing today, mister Dom?" Robby said with curiosity filling his eyes.
"Just a little thing I'm working on." Dom replied while playing the chorus to his song.
Robby listened to the smooth tones in awe. He had never heard such amazing music before in his life.
"It's beautiful, mister Dom.." Robby said quietly, making sure his voice wasn't loud enough for him to miss part of the song.
Dom abruptly stopped playing when he saw the postal worker arrive. He got up out of the chair, which let out a terrible creak, and headed down the driveway towards the mailbox.
"Afternoon, Dom!" The postal worker said politely.
"Afternoon!" Dom replied with a wave.
He thumbed through the mail; not really expecting to see anything for him.
"Bills, Bills, Junk Mail. Ooh, Pokemon Magazine!" Dom said cheerily, rolling up the magazine and stuffing it in his back pocket.
"Wait a minute,..What is this?" Dom thought aloud while looking at the mysterious envelope adressed to him.
It was labeled "R&R/TT" and had no return adress. It seemed like your basic mail; White envelope, basic stamps, nothing fancy at all.
Dom curiously opened the letter and read its contents
'Dear Domonic Santino,
You have been invited to the lab of Professor Hann. She lives in Slateport City, Hoenn. She has recently moved from Johto, and has built a new laboratory in Slateport. But the laboratory isn't normal. It is located underwater. You will need to report the Oceanic Museum located in East Slateport. There will be no need to pay admission. We will immediately take you to your first destination. You must be there at strictly 7:00 PM. We do not appreciate or tolerate latecomers. Once there, we will all leave for the Laboratory of Professor Hann. There you will receive your first Pokemon, which has been carefully chosen by Hann. Then, Hann and I will explain to you everything that is happening and why. Then, just as quickly as you came, you will leave. You are not to tell anyone about your visit to Professor Hann and you are not to tell anyone about this letter. Leave every one of you Pokemon behind. You will receive your Pokemon once you come to Slateport.
Sincerely,'
The name was unreadable, sadly. Dom read the letter over a few times to make sure he was reading it right.
"I'm requested to go to Slateport?! That's all the way in another reigon!" Dom said, shocked at the contents of the letter.
"I'll have to get first thing tomorrow! I surely don't wan't to miss out on this opprotunity!" Dom said while running back inside.
He rushed into the kitchen, where the rest of his family was enjoying lunch.
"Mom! Dad! Look at this!" Dom shouted, practically shoving the paper in his parent's faces.
Dom's father grabbed the letter and read it over carefully.
"Well, this is obviouslysomething very important; Dom. Are you sure you're up to it?" His father said in a curious tone.
"Of course! Who knows what will go on there?! It could very well be my big break!" Dom shouted ecstatically.
"Who knows...That's exactly the problem..." Dom's mother said worridly.
"Now, honey, if Dom want's to go then it's his decision." His father interjected. "Now son, DO you want to go?"
Dom breathed a heavy sigh. "...Yes, I do!" He replied. "I'll make sure to keep in touch and everything!"
"Ok son. If that is what you want. I'll order you a ticket to board the S.S. Anne tomorrow. It will take you straight to Slateport." His father said.
"Thank you!" Dom shouted out. "Thank you so much!" It was then that he realized his mother was crying. He slowly walked over and gave her a hug.
"Don't worry mom, I'll be alright" He said reassuringly.
"Oh...I'll miss you so much!" She said with a sob.
"I promise I'll keep in touch." Dom said again as he let go of his mother. He then headed up to his room to pack and wait for nightfall. Also to wait for the start of a new day; and the start of a new chapter unfolding in his life.
From Old Lace's The Pokemon Adventure: Johto Region
Spoiler:
It was a pretty basic day in Dom's life. He had already went through his usual morning routine and was currently enjoying the fresh Kanto air that surrounded him. He was sitting in an off-white wooden chair on the porch of his house. The beautiful melodies that resonated from his guitar mingled with the air.
A familiar faced passed by where Dom was playing. It was a young boy, about 7 years old, and he adored hearing Dom play.
"Hey mister Dom!" The boy shouted out with an ecstatic tone.
"Hello, Robby!" Dom said with a hearty grin covering his face.
"What are you playing today, mister Dom?" Robby said with curiosity filling his eyes.
"Just a little thing I'm working on." Dom replied while playing the chorus to his song.
Robby listened to the smooth tones in awe. He had never heard such amazing music before in his life.
"It's beautiful, mister Dom.." Robby said quietly, making sure his voice wasn't loud enough for him to miss part of the song.
Dom abruptly stopped playing when he saw the postal worker arrive. He got up out of the chair, which let out a terrible creak, and headed down the driveway towards the mailbox.
"Afternoon, Dom!" The postal worker said politely.
"Afternoon!" Dom replied with a wave.
He thumbed through the mail; not really expecting to see anything for him.
"Bills, Bills, Junk Mail. Ooh, Pokemon Magazine!" Dom said cheerily, rolling up the magazine and stuffing it in his back pocket.
"Wait a minute,..What is this?" Dom thought aloud while looking at the mysterious envelope adressed to him.
It was labeled "R&R/TT" and had no return adress. It seemed like your basic mail; White envelope, basic stamps, nothing fancy at all.
Dom curiously opened the letter and read its contents
'Dear Domonic Santino,
You have been invited to the lab of Professor Hann. She lives in Slateport City, Hoenn. She has recently moved from Johto, and has built a new laboratory in Slateport. But the laboratory isn't normal. It is located underwater. You will need to report the Oceanic Museum located in East Slateport. There will be no need to pay admission. We will immediately take you to your first destination. You must be there at strictly 7:00 PM. We do not appreciate or tolerate latecomers. Once there, we will all leave for the Laboratory of Professor Hann. There you will receive your first Pokemon, which has been carefully chosen by Hann. Then, Hann and I will explain to you everything that is happening and why. Then, just as quickly as you came, you will leave. You are not to tell anyone about your visit to Professor Hann and you are not to tell anyone about this letter. Leave every one of you Pokemon behind. You will receive your Pokemon once you come to Slateport.
Sincerely,'
The name was unreadable, sadly. Dom read the letter over a few times to make sure he was reading it right.
"I'm requested to go to Slateport?! That's all the way in another reigon!" Dom said, shocked at the contents of the letter.
"I'll have to get first thing tomorrow! I surely don't wan't to miss out on this opprotunity!" Dom said while running back inside.
He rushed into the kitchen, where the rest of his family was enjoying lunch.
"Mom! Dad! Look at this!" Dom shouted, practically shoving the paper in his parent's faces.
Dom's father grabbed the letter and read it over carefully.
"Well, this is obviouslysomething very important; Dom. Are you sure you're up to it?" His father said in a curious tone.
"Of course! Who knows what will go on there?! It could very well be my big break!" Dom shouted ecstatically.
"Who knows...That's exactly the problem..." Dom's mother said worridly.
"Now, honey, if Dom want's to go then it's his decision." His father interjected. "Now son, DO you want to go?"
Dom breathed a heavy sigh. "...Yes, I do!" He replied. "I'll make sure to keep in touch and everything!"
"Ok son. If that is what you want. I'll order you a ticket to board the S.S. Anne tomorrow. It will take you straight to Slateport." His father said.
"Thank you!" Dom shouted out. "Thank you so much!" It was then that he realized his mother was crying. He slowly walked over and gave her a hug.
"Don't worry mom, I'll be alright" He said reassuringly.
"Oh...I'll miss you so much!" She said with a sob.
"I promise I'll keep in touch." Dom said again as he let go of his mother. He then headed up to his room to pack and wait for nightfall. Also to wait for the start of a new day; and the start of a new chapter unfolding in his life.
From Old Lace's The Pokemon Adventure: Johto Region
Spoiler:
(The following chapter is from Mala's point of view. This takes place right before Kalli's battle. Mala will think in English, to make things less confusing.)
Mala watched as Ashton called in Kalli for battle. She couldn't help but feel a bit jealous by the fact that she didn't get to battle. She stormed around in a circle for a few moments, swinging her stubby arms in the air.
I need training just as much as Kalli does! Mala thought to herself. She trudged over to a rock and watched the battle. Kalli was fighting a Teddiursa. The pitiful little bear could hardly even fight back. Mala felt sorry for the Teddiursa, but didn't want to interject on a battle.
Well..I have nothing better to do. I suppose I could explore the cave for a few moments, right? Mala thought as she waddled away from where Ashton was battling.
The cave somehow seemed to get darker and darker as Mala walked along. It wasn't to much later that Mala realized she was lost. She scrambled around in search of her trainer and Grey. She tried her hardest to locate the sounds of the battle, but their was no noise.
The battle must be over! Where is Ashton? What is he left me here?! ASHTON!!! The thoughts sped through Mala's mind a mile a minute. She couldn't shake the terrible thoughts of where her trainer was, and why she wasn't with him.
After many minutes of scrambling about, Mala came across some living beings. She still couldn't see, so she tried her hardest to figure out who, or what, it was.
"Gep..Gepi?" Mala said as she fumbled around in the darkness. A rough translation would be "Ashton? Grey?"
She soon came across a rocky surface. It didn't feel like the other rocks in the cave. This was much...warmer for some odd reason. It felt like it had a heartbeat too. Then it hit Mala like a ton of bricks.
GEODUDE! There has to be at least three of them here. Maybe I can try to reason with them.. Mala hadn't found exactly who she was looking for, but this might do.
"To, Togepi. Gepi Togepi!" Mala frantically said to the Geodude. "Have you guys seen a couple of boys come through here with a couple of Pokemon?" Would be the translation.
"Dude..Ge Geodude." One of the rock Pokemon said in a gruff reply. "No, no we havn't."
"Ge, Geodude?" Another one said with a mocking tone. "Aww, missing your poor wittle twainer?"
"Dude. Dude Geo!" The third one said with aggression in his voice. "It appears so. Let's rough her up a bit boys!"
The three rock Pokemon encircled the terrified Mala, who tried to protest with cries out to her master. She realized she had no choice but to fight. She waggled her fingers back and forth, releasing Metronome. In an instant, the cave was engulfed in a bright light.
Flash? What luck! Maybe I'll have a chance now! Mala thought to herself. Little did she know, she was dead wrong. The flash of light angered the Geodude gang; who, in retaliation, simultaneously used Rock Throw. The rocks pelted Mala, who cried out in pain. She had no choice but to unleash another Metronome as the Geodude encircled her again.
The aura from the Metronome flashed, and Mala felt a burning sensation in her chest. The sensation grew larger and larger, until she felt like she was going to explode.
Oh no! An expression of terror flashed onto the Togepi's face as she realized what attack had been chosen. EXPLOSION! And not a second after that thought entered her mind, the burning force inside her was let loose in a firey explosion. The three Geodude were sent skyward, and into another part of the cave. Mala was left there, lying defenseless and severely injured.
As...Ashton.. She thought as she slipped out of consciousness.
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(The following is from Ashton's point of view. This takes place roughly when the Geodude battle started)
Ashton had realized that Grey was no longer following him. But he really didn't care at the moment. He was in search of his missing Pokemon. He stumbled into walls and tripped over rocks as he fumbled through the pitch black cave, all the while calling out Mala's name in a desperate attempt for her to answer.
Suddenly, out of nowhere, the cave was lit by a bright light. Ashton payed little attention to the strange occurrence, but he used it to his advantage. He soared through the cave with ease now, sprinting through every twist and turn that the cave through at him.
"Dammit! Another dead end!" He cursed as he ran into another stone wall staring him down. He stopped for a moment to catch some much needed breath. In the time that he was catching his breath, a thundering explosion echoed throughout the cave followed by the tortured cry of a Togepi. Ashton jumped from the sudden noise, then realized what caused the explosion.
"MALA!!!" He screamed at the top of his lungs as he all-out sprinted to the source of the explosion. It didn't take him long to reach the site of the explosion. There, much to his dismay, lied an unconscious Togepi; covered in scratches and cuts.
"Mala! Oh God, no!" He cried as he picked up the injured Pokemon. "I..I have to get you to a Pokemon Center!" He said between sobs.
Ashton ran back out of the cave as tears flew down his cheeks.
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(Route 31 Post)
The sudden light made Ashton draw back and cover his eyes. He shook it off as he sprinted through the route. Pokemon and trainers alike stared in awe as the trainer sped past them. One trainer grabbed Ashton by the collar and began to speak.
"Hey, slow you roll there buddy! We're having a Pokemon battle!" The trainer said as he called out his Pokemon; a Poliwag, to be exact. Ashton slowly turned to face the trainer. Anger was filling his eyes as he glared at the trainer
"Pokemon battle?" Ashton tried his best to hold back his sudden anger. "No..Thank you."
"Oh come on, what are you; a wuss?" The trainer replied with an annoyed tone. "Poliwag, get ready for battle!"
This was the breaking point. Ashton couldn't waste anymore time. He punted the Poliwag into a nearby lake and grabbed the trainer by his shoulders. "I SAID I DIDN'T WANT TO BATTLE." Ashton then threw the trainer down onto the ground as he continued his sprint through the Route.
"Not too much more, Mala...Just a little longer. Hang in there!" Ashton said as tears started to flow again. He entered the building that connected Route 31 and Violet City and sped through, ignoring the greeting from the woman behind the counter.
Violet City was a beautiful place, but Ashton had no time for sight-seeing. He continued his sprint to the nearest Pokemon Center.
"Please hang on Mala..." Ashton said one last time.
Mala watched as Ashton called in Kalli for battle. She couldn't help but feel a bit jealous by the fact that she didn't get to battle. She stormed around in a circle for a few moments, swinging her stubby arms in the air.
I need training just as much as Kalli does! Mala thought to herself. She trudged over to a rock and watched the battle. Kalli was fighting a Teddiursa. The pitiful little bear could hardly even fight back. Mala felt sorry for the Teddiursa, but didn't want to interject on a battle.
Well..I have nothing better to do. I suppose I could explore the cave for a few moments, right? Mala thought as she waddled away from where Ashton was battling.
The cave somehow seemed to get darker and darker as Mala walked along. It wasn't to much later that Mala realized she was lost. She scrambled around in search of her trainer and Grey. She tried her hardest to locate the sounds of the battle, but their was no noise.
The battle must be over! Where is Ashton? What is he left me here?! ASHTON!!! The thoughts sped through Mala's mind a mile a minute. She couldn't shake the terrible thoughts of where her trainer was, and why she wasn't with him.
After many minutes of scrambling about, Mala came across some living beings. She still couldn't see, so she tried her hardest to figure out who, or what, it was.
"Gep..Gepi?" Mala said as she fumbled around in the darkness. A rough translation would be "Ashton? Grey?"
She soon came across a rocky surface. It didn't feel like the other rocks in the cave. This was much...warmer for some odd reason. It felt like it had a heartbeat too. Then it hit Mala like a ton of bricks.
GEODUDE! There has to be at least three of them here. Maybe I can try to reason with them.. Mala hadn't found exactly who she was looking for, but this might do.
"To, Togepi. Gepi Togepi!" Mala frantically said to the Geodude. "Have you guys seen a couple of boys come through here with a couple of Pokemon?" Would be the translation.
"Dude..Ge Geodude." One of the rock Pokemon said in a gruff reply. "No, no we havn't."
"Ge, Geodude?" Another one said with a mocking tone. "Aww, missing your poor wittle twainer?"
"Dude. Dude Geo!" The third one said with aggression in his voice. "It appears so. Let's rough her up a bit boys!"
The three rock Pokemon encircled the terrified Mala, who tried to protest with cries out to her master. She realized she had no choice but to fight. She waggled her fingers back and forth, releasing Metronome. In an instant, the cave was engulfed in a bright light.
Flash? What luck! Maybe I'll have a chance now! Mala thought to herself. Little did she know, she was dead wrong. The flash of light angered the Geodude gang; who, in retaliation, simultaneously used Rock Throw. The rocks pelted Mala, who cried out in pain. She had no choice but to unleash another Metronome as the Geodude encircled her again.
The aura from the Metronome flashed, and Mala felt a burning sensation in her chest. The sensation grew larger and larger, until she felt like she was going to explode.
Oh no! An expression of terror flashed onto the Togepi's face as she realized what attack had been chosen. EXPLOSION! And not a second after that thought entered her mind, the burning force inside her was let loose in a firey explosion. The three Geodude were sent skyward, and into another part of the cave. Mala was left there, lying defenseless and severely injured.
As...Ashton.. She thought as she slipped out of consciousness.
----
(The following is from Ashton's point of view. This takes place roughly when the Geodude battle started)
Ashton had realized that Grey was no longer following him. But he really didn't care at the moment. He was in search of his missing Pokemon. He stumbled into walls and tripped over rocks as he fumbled through the pitch black cave, all the while calling out Mala's name in a desperate attempt for her to answer.
Suddenly, out of nowhere, the cave was lit by a bright light. Ashton payed little attention to the strange occurrence, but he used it to his advantage. He soared through the cave with ease now, sprinting through every twist and turn that the cave through at him.
"Dammit! Another dead end!" He cursed as he ran into another stone wall staring him down. He stopped for a moment to catch some much needed breath. In the time that he was catching his breath, a thundering explosion echoed throughout the cave followed by the tortured cry of a Togepi. Ashton jumped from the sudden noise, then realized what caused the explosion.
"MALA!!!" He screamed at the top of his lungs as he all-out sprinted to the source of the explosion. It didn't take him long to reach the site of the explosion. There, much to his dismay, lied an unconscious Togepi; covered in scratches and cuts.
"Mala! Oh God, no!" He cried as he picked up the injured Pokemon. "I..I have to get you to a Pokemon Center!" He said between sobs.
Ashton ran back out of the cave as tears flew down his cheeks.
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(Route 31 Post)
The sudden light made Ashton draw back and cover his eyes. He shook it off as he sprinted through the route. Pokemon and trainers alike stared in awe as the trainer sped past them. One trainer grabbed Ashton by the collar and began to speak.
"Hey, slow you roll there buddy! We're having a Pokemon battle!" The trainer said as he called out his Pokemon; a Poliwag, to be exact. Ashton slowly turned to face the trainer. Anger was filling his eyes as he glared at the trainer
"Pokemon battle?" Ashton tried his best to hold back his sudden anger. "No..Thank you."
"Oh come on, what are you; a wuss?" The trainer replied with an annoyed tone. "Poliwag, get ready for battle!"
This was the breaking point. Ashton couldn't waste anymore time. He punted the Poliwag into a nearby lake and grabbed the trainer by his shoulders. "I SAID I DIDN'T WANT TO BATTLE." Ashton then threw the trainer down onto the ground as he continued his sprint through the Route.
"Not too much more, Mala...Just a little longer. Hang in there!" Ashton said as tears started to flow again. He entered the building that connected Route 31 and Violet City and sped through, ignoring the greeting from the woman behind the counter.
Violet City was a beautiful place, but Ashton had no time for sight-seeing. He continued his sprint to the nearest Pokemon Center.
"Please hang on Mala..." Ashton said one last time.
M@XWeru
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Hm.
Some minor, yet poignant spelling mistakes for both 'o you.
The overall style of this place is really bugging me. I really don't think it's necessary to insert a line break before every line in a conversation - I realize that the design of this forum is such that what might pass for a paragraph elsewhere turns into half a line here, but you could do with a lot less scrolling if you stuck to fewer line breaks. Also, while I do consider many of your posts to be fair-sized, a lot of them has oodles of interaction between several of your own characters, which is not going to be a large part of this role play - as such, they're pretty bad examples.
I'm not going to be more specific about what's good or bad about your applications or your examples now. With enough chances at editing, anyone can write a decent piece, and you're not going to get to edit your role playing posts much. I'll see about making final choices soon. It's getting to be time to get this one up.
Some minor, yet poignant spelling mistakes for both 'o you.
The overall style of this place is really bugging me. I really don't think it's necessary to insert a line break before every line in a conversation - I realize that the design of this forum is such that what might pass for a paragraph elsewhere turns into half a line here, but you could do with a lot less scrolling if you stuck to fewer line breaks. Also, while I do consider many of your posts to be fair-sized, a lot of them has oodles of interaction between several of your own characters, which is not going to be a large part of this role play - as such, they're pretty bad examples.
I'm not going to be more specific about what's good or bad about your applications or your examples now. With enough chances at editing, anyone can write a decent piece, and you're not going to get to edit your role playing posts much. I'll see about making final choices soon. It's getting to be time to get this one up.
Sir Aaron1017
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From Ninetales "Legendary Guardians";
https://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?p=3671059#poststop
https://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?p=3671059#poststop
https://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?p=3704063#poststop
https://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?p=3880279#poststop
From Kansas' "Team Havoc Fight Club (Revived)";
https://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?p=3381774&highlight=Team+Havoc+Fight+Club#post3381774
https://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?p=3314520#poststop
(this one was my sign-up for the RPG, and I included a short RP sample at the end)
From Raichu Master's "Pokemon Evolution: Re-Loaded";
https://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?p=3390062&highlight=Evolution:+Re-loaded#post3390062
https://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?p=3390062&highlight=Evolution:+Re-loaded#post3390062
(though not some of my finer work, it'll work I guess)
Also, I would like to note, that even though I haven't been very active in the past, I have alot of time on my hands now, due to the fact that I graduated last month.
https://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?p=3671059#poststop
https://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?p=3671059#poststop
https://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?p=3704063#poststop
https://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?p=3880279#poststop
From Kansas' "Team Havoc Fight Club (Revived)";
https://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?p=3381774&highlight=Team+Havoc+Fight+Club#post3381774
https://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?p=3314520#poststop
(this one was my sign-up for the RPG, and I included a short RP sample at the end)
From Raichu Master's "Pokemon Evolution: Re-Loaded";
https://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?p=3390062&highlight=Evolution:+Re-loaded#post3390062
https://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?p=3390062&highlight=Evolution:+Re-loaded#post3390062
(though not some of my finer work, it'll work I guess)
Also, I would like to note, that even though I haven't been very active in the past, I have alot of time on my hands now, due to the fact that I graduated last month.
M@XWeru
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Looks good, though all but the newest ones had an awful amount of sentences beginning with 'he'. Watch out for that.
New question: How would everyone feel about it if I were to add some new (home-made) pokémon later on? Of course, they'll be described at length and come with pictures. This is just a whim, and not something I had in mind from the beginning. So if anyone says no, there won't be any.
New question: How would everyone feel about it if I were to add some new (home-made) pokémon later on? Of course, they'll be described at length and come with pictures. This is just a whim, and not something I had in mind from the beginning. So if anyone says no, there won't be any.
Sublime
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Hm.
Some minor, yet poignant spelling mistakes for both 'o you.
The overall style of this place is really bugging me. I really don't think it's necessary to insert a line break before every line in a conversation - I realize that the design of this forum is such that what might pass for a paragraph elsewhere turns into half a line here, but you could do with a lot less scrolling if you stuck to fewer line breaks. Also, while I do consider many of your posts to be fair-sized, a lot of them has oodles of interaction between several of your own characters, which is not going to be a large part of this role play - as such, they're pretty bad examples.
I'm not going to be more specific about what's good or bad about your applications or your examples now. With enough chances at editing, anyone can write a decent piece, and you're not going to get to edit your role playing posts much. I'll see about making final choices soon. It's getting to be time to get this one up.
Well, I've always been taught to add a break after a scene change or when a new character speaks. I could find a better sample, If you like.
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Nah. No one's challenging your rich kid anyway. But do answer the question in the last post.
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Looks good, though all but the newest ones had an awful amount of sentences beginning with 'he'. Watch out for that.
New question: How would everyone feel about it if I were to add some new (home-made) pokémon later on? Of course, they'll be described at length and come with pictures. This is just a whim, and not something I had in mind from the beginning. So if anyone says no, there won't be any.
The bottom two were from the first RPG's I was in, but that was back at the beginning of last year, my writing has greatly improved since then, and since then I've learned how to write to peoples' expectations, so I'll keep what you want in mind if I get accepted.
As for you question, I am all for adding some of your home-made Pokemon, I love it when there's new species of pokemon introduced with every new game that comes out, so to me it would make this more exciting, but that's just my opinion, and I don't speak for everyone. So yeah, go for it!
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That's one in favour. I dislike the new pokémon, myself. I think the design dropped after the first 150, hit rock bottom in generation three and actually sank through the floor in the fourth game. Totally killed my interest - that's why I'm doing this. Still, the act of adding new pokémon is not fundamentally wrong unto itself (not *all* of them are horrible, either), and 150 is a little too few in my opinion, especially considering the prominence of grass/poison, rock/ground and ghost/poison.
Oh!
A few important parts I utterly forgot to mention in the introduction:
1. All moves from all pokémon generations are available, and you're not limited to four on each pokémon.
2. Stats is a very, very loose concept here (common sense; Gyarados will have more luck bashing people physically than using special attacks), and we're not taking IV or any of that junk into consideration. The games are fun and deep, but ya know. Role play.
3. Evolution stones will do exactly that - evolve your pokémon. If it's electric, an electric stone will evolve it. Yes, you can get a Bulbasaur at level 1 and evolve it to Venusaur. You won't get any stones before that sort of thing becomes irrelevant anyway.
There was probably something more. Oh, well. In any case, if we do end up having home made pokémon in the game, those will be sort of like hidden bonuses. Depending on where you go and what you do, they'll become available.
Oh!
A few important parts I utterly forgot to mention in the introduction:
1. All moves from all pokémon generations are available, and you're not limited to four on each pokémon.
2. Stats is a very, very loose concept here (common sense; Gyarados will have more luck bashing people physically than using special attacks), and we're not taking IV or any of that junk into consideration. The games are fun and deep, but ya know. Role play.
3. Evolution stones will do exactly that - evolve your pokémon. If it's electric, an electric stone will evolve it. Yes, you can get a Bulbasaur at level 1 and evolve it to Venusaur. You won't get any stones before that sort of thing becomes irrelevant anyway.
There was probably something more. Oh, well. In any case, if we do end up having home made pokémon in the game, those will be sort of like hidden bonuses. Depending on where you go and what you do, they'll become available.
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Hmm... All moves, eh? Question - which movesets are you gonna follow (e.g. the Diamond/Pearl or Platinum movesets)?That's one in favour. I dislike the new pokémon, myself. I think the design dropped after the first 150, hit rock bottom in generation three and actually sank through the floor in the fourth game. Totally killed my interest - that's why I'm doing this. Still, the act of adding new pokémon is not fundamentally wrong unto itself (not *all* of them are horrible, either), and 150 is a little too few in my opinion, especially considering the prominence of grass/poison, rock/ground and ghost/poison.
Oh!
A few important parts I utterly forgot to mention in the introduction:
1. All moves from all pokémon generations are available, and you're not limited to four on each pokémon.
2. Stats is a very, very loose concept here (common sense; Gyarados will have more luck bashing people physically than using special attacks), and we're not taking IV or any of that junk into consideration. The games are fun and deep, but ya know. Role play.
3. Evolution stones will do exactly that - evolve your pokémon. If it's electric, an electric stone will evolve it. Yes, you can get a Bulbasaur at level 1 and evolve it to Venusaur. You won't get any stones before that sort of thing becomes irrelevant anyway.
There was probably something more. Oh, well. In any case, if we do end up having home made pokémon in the game, those will be sort of like hidden bonuses. Depending on where you go and what you do, they'll become available.
Oh, and I like the idea of homemade Pokemon, plus the whole evolution process. Pretty nifty, if you ask me :3
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Hmm... All moves, eh? Question - which movesets are you gonna follow (e.g. the Diamond/Pearl or Platinum movesets)?
Both. Or rather - whichever you feel like at any given time. I'll be arbitrarily deciding when you get a move or not anyway, so the use you'll have of that is probably pretty limited.
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That's one in favour. I dislike the new pokémon, myself. I think the design dropped after the first 150, hit rock bottom in generation three and actually sank through the floor in the fourth game. Totally killed my interest - that's why I'm doing this. Still, the act of adding new pokémon is not fundamentally wrong unto itself (not *all* of them are horrible, either), and 150 is a little too few in my opinion, especially considering the prominence of grass/poison, rock/ground and ghost/poison.
Oh!
A few important parts I utterly forgot to mention in the introduction:
1. All moves from all pokémon generations are available, and you're not limited to four on each pokémon.
2. Stats is a very, very loose concept here (common sense; Gyarados will have more luck bashing people physically than using special attacks), and we're not taking IV or any of that junk into consideration. The games are fun and deep, but ya know. Role play.
3. Evolution stones will do exactly that - evolve your pokémon. If it's electric, an electric stone will evolve it. Yes, you can get a Bulbasaur at level 1 and evolve it to Venusaur. You won't get any stones before that sort of thing becomes irrelevant anyway.
There was probably something more. Oh, well. In any case, if we do end up having home made pokémon in the game, those will be sort of like hidden bonuses. Depending on where you go and what you do, they'll become available.
I say no to Fakemon.
I'm not one for them, unless they're absurdly good.
And will trade evolutions stay the same?
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I say no to Fakemon.
I'm not one for them, unless they're absurdly good.
And will trade evolutions stay the same?
I don't know what 'absurdly good' entails. To me, that would be something way better than the real deal. ;P
Trade evolutions will not exist either. I always hated those. Your Haunters and Kadabras will evolve on their own.
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I don't know what 'absurdly good' entails. To me, that would be something way better than the real deal. ;P
Trade evolutions will not exist either. I always hated those. Your Haunters and Kadabras will evolve on their own.
Absurdly good like..They look like they could be real Pokemon
About the trade evos. GOOD! xD
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