JX Valentine
Your aquatic overlord
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Warning: This fic is rated PG-13 to R (and labeled R to be on the safe side). Why? Because we're dealing with violence, body horror, mind rape, and other bits of trope-abusing fun. If you're easily squicked, you may want to hit the back button. Thanks!
Author's Note: This fic is a rewrite of this fic. The plot has been reworked from the first chapter onward, plot holes have been filled in, and it's generally a less unwieldy piece of... fanfic. If any of you are returning readers, I'd like to welcome you back, and to all you new readers out there, I hope you enjoy the story.
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Spirit Albarn♫
Anima Ex Machina: Zero
I'll bring down the stars for you.
Twilight broke into night over Hoenn in waves: blue swallowed by red, red swallowed by black. One by one, taillow retreated to the trees for sleep, giving way to zubat fluttering across the black sky in search of prey. Street lamps and fluorescent lights flickered on in the cities, and above them, white dots began to appear one by one in the night sky.
One of these dots moved.
The meteor in question sported the size and approximate mass of a small car. That, along with the fact that its path crossed neatly with Earth's, had kept astronomers' eyes on it for several months prior to its destined approach. For the past twenty-four hours, the city closest to the estimated point of impact, Fortree City, remained completely deserted save for some of the area's wild pokémon. The flying-types had been gone, of course, as were the linoone and the mightyena packs. As for the rest? The water-types kept to the lake, knowing they couldn't wander much further than that without risking territory wars with wailmer, and the grass-types and kecleon, neither of whom were particularly known for their mobility, didn't have much further to go than sticking to the surrounding forests and hope for the best.
What was strange was the fact that most of the absol stayed behind. Absol had the capability of relocating. They knew they could move and feed off of whatever they found along the way. It was just that only a handful of them actually left the area. All of them looked towards the sky for months, as if knowing already that no matter where they went, it wouldn't matter.
Standing atop a hill, within a circle of rocks countless years old, was one of these absol. He shifted on his paws as the cold but familiar feeling of dread sank into his bones. The minutes ticked away, but he could do nothing during that time except watch. He didn't bother to warn anyone, in part because he couldn't tell where the meteor was going to land and in part because of that feeling of inevitability that was plaguing his pack for all that time. It wasn't just the meteor, he felt. There was something else, but for the life of him, he couldn't pinpoint what.
Above him, the meteor punched through a cloud and streaked closer in a brilliant ball of red and white. Looking up, the absol hesitated. He certainly didn't expect the meteor to arrive so soon. Jolting into action, he burst into a run down the face of the hill, his claws scraping against dirt and rock. To his side, the meteor fell rapidly, descending hundreds of feet in seconds towards the soft earth.
He barely reached the edge of the lake some distance from the base of the hill when the meteorite landed. The ground beneath his paws shook violently as a cloud of red dust spewed towards the heavens and quickly engulfed the area. In the distance, a great crack and subsequent crash signaled the literal fall of Fortree City, shaken free from its perch in the trees of the forest. Unable to ground himself, the absol flew through the air and landed awkwardly on a paw. His mouth opened to release a loud cry, but it was drowned by the rumbling of aftershocks and the screams of dying pokémon farther north.
The absol lay on the earth for what felt like hours as he watched the red cloud of dust above him fade. Eventually, he tried to move, but his body ached. One of his paws was definitely injured -- the back one that was already beginning to swell. He whimpered as he limped north, back towards the remains of his home.
Not far away, a hole stood in his path. It was mostly concealed by the dust still in the air, but he could just make out the shadow of its edge. Gingerly, he limped on his twisted paw towards it. He whined, partly from to the pain shooting up his leg and partly from the familiar, cold feeling in his bones. The ground beneath his feet grew hotter until it was almost unbearable, but it wasn't the pain that made him hesitate a few yards away from the crater. It was fear. He stood, leaning more on his good paws as he stared directly at the red glow. At first, he thought it was simply from the intense heat emanating from the earth, but something was wrong about it. He could feel it.
Abruptly, the glow shifted. Instantly, the absol realized that it wasn't coming from the nearly molten rocks around the crater but instead from something inside it. A loud crack -- like the sound of rock being smashed with a sledgehammer -- filled the air, followed by a chorus of scratches. The absol tried to scramble backwards, but his weight came down on his bad paw. As soon as it did, he collapsed on his knees with a high-pitched whine. He closed his eyes tightly until the pain faded, but when he opened them, he found that it was too late to escape.
A massive, red wave had risen from the inside of the crater and lingered on the edge. Then, it rushed like a tsunami at the dark-type creature. With a whimper, Absol struggled to stand, but the small, red beads that flowed towards him were already washing against his legs. Small mouths tore into his flesh.
Instantly, his eyes widened. He threw back his head, and his high-pitched howl filled the air.
Then, shortly after the howl began, it ended abruptly. The pokémon surrounding Fortree City would have no other warning.
Neither would the rest of Hoenn.
Author's Note: This fic is a rewrite of this fic. The plot has been reworked from the first chapter onward, plot holes have been filled in, and it's generally a less unwieldy piece of... fanfic. If any of you are returning readers, I'd like to welcome you back, and to all you new readers out there, I hope you enjoy the story.
Chapter List:
Spoiler:
Zero: I'll bring down the stars for you.
One: It's a pleasure to meet you.
Two: Helter-skelter, birds flew off with the fallout shelter.
Three: If you come across Pandora's Box, don't open it.
Four: Reality is merely an illusion, albeit a very persistent one.
Five: Gregor Samsa awoke one morning from uneasy dreams.
Six: What are you doing?
Seven: Never make a deal with the devil.
Eight: Greater than situation is implication.
Nine: What are fears but voices airy?
Ten: Violence is a last resort.
Eleven: In life, unlike chess, the game continues after checkmate.
Twelve: We're all in this together.
Thirteen: Fire and gunpowder do not sleep together.
Fourteen: I know your face.
Fifteen: A storm is coming.
Sixteen: Keep your friends close and your enemies closer.
Seventeen: In the first act, there is a pistol on the wall.
Eighteen: The power is yet unknown.
Nineteen: In the third act, the pistol is shot.
Twenty: So the word of fire burns today.
Twenty-one: Coming soon.
One: It's a pleasure to meet you.
Two: Helter-skelter, birds flew off with the fallout shelter.
Three: If you come across Pandora's Box, don't open it.
Four: Reality is merely an illusion, albeit a very persistent one.
Five: Gregor Samsa awoke one morning from uneasy dreams.
Six: What are you doing?
Seven: Never make a deal with the devil.
Eight: Greater than situation is implication.
Nine: What are fears but voices airy?
Ten: Violence is a last resort.
Eleven: In life, unlike chess, the game continues after checkmate.
Twelve: We're all in this together.
Thirteen: Fire and gunpowder do not sleep together.
Fourteen: I know your face.
Fifteen: A storm is coming.
Sixteen: Keep your friends close and your enemies closer.
Seventeen: In the first act, there is a pistol on the wall.
Eighteen: The power is yet unknown.
Nineteen: In the third act, the pistol is shot.
Twenty: So the word of fire burns today.
Twenty-one: Coming soon.
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Spirit Albarn♫
Anima Ex Machina: Zero
I'll bring down the stars for you.
Twilight broke into night over Hoenn in waves: blue swallowed by red, red swallowed by black. One by one, taillow retreated to the trees for sleep, giving way to zubat fluttering across the black sky in search of prey. Street lamps and fluorescent lights flickered on in the cities, and above them, white dots began to appear one by one in the night sky.
One of these dots moved.
The meteor in question sported the size and approximate mass of a small car. That, along with the fact that its path crossed neatly with Earth's, had kept astronomers' eyes on it for several months prior to its destined approach. For the past twenty-four hours, the city closest to the estimated point of impact, Fortree City, remained completely deserted save for some of the area's wild pokémon. The flying-types had been gone, of course, as were the linoone and the mightyena packs. As for the rest? The water-types kept to the lake, knowing they couldn't wander much further than that without risking territory wars with wailmer, and the grass-types and kecleon, neither of whom were particularly known for their mobility, didn't have much further to go than sticking to the surrounding forests and hope for the best.
What was strange was the fact that most of the absol stayed behind. Absol had the capability of relocating. They knew they could move and feed off of whatever they found along the way. It was just that only a handful of them actually left the area. All of them looked towards the sky for months, as if knowing already that no matter where they went, it wouldn't matter.
Standing atop a hill, within a circle of rocks countless years old, was one of these absol. He shifted on his paws as the cold but familiar feeling of dread sank into his bones. The minutes ticked away, but he could do nothing during that time except watch. He didn't bother to warn anyone, in part because he couldn't tell where the meteor was going to land and in part because of that feeling of inevitability that was plaguing his pack for all that time. It wasn't just the meteor, he felt. There was something else, but for the life of him, he couldn't pinpoint what.
Above him, the meteor punched through a cloud and streaked closer in a brilliant ball of red and white. Looking up, the absol hesitated. He certainly didn't expect the meteor to arrive so soon. Jolting into action, he burst into a run down the face of the hill, his claws scraping against dirt and rock. To his side, the meteor fell rapidly, descending hundreds of feet in seconds towards the soft earth.
He barely reached the edge of the lake some distance from the base of the hill when the meteorite landed. The ground beneath his paws shook violently as a cloud of red dust spewed towards the heavens and quickly engulfed the area. In the distance, a great crack and subsequent crash signaled the literal fall of Fortree City, shaken free from its perch in the trees of the forest. Unable to ground himself, the absol flew through the air and landed awkwardly on a paw. His mouth opened to release a loud cry, but it was drowned by the rumbling of aftershocks and the screams of dying pokémon farther north.
The absol lay on the earth for what felt like hours as he watched the red cloud of dust above him fade. Eventually, he tried to move, but his body ached. One of his paws was definitely injured -- the back one that was already beginning to swell. He whimpered as he limped north, back towards the remains of his home.
Not far away, a hole stood in his path. It was mostly concealed by the dust still in the air, but he could just make out the shadow of its edge. Gingerly, he limped on his twisted paw towards it. He whined, partly from to the pain shooting up his leg and partly from the familiar, cold feeling in his bones. The ground beneath his feet grew hotter until it was almost unbearable, but it wasn't the pain that made him hesitate a few yards away from the crater. It was fear. He stood, leaning more on his good paws as he stared directly at the red glow. At first, he thought it was simply from the intense heat emanating from the earth, but something was wrong about it. He could feel it.
Abruptly, the glow shifted. Instantly, the absol realized that it wasn't coming from the nearly molten rocks around the crater but instead from something inside it. A loud crack -- like the sound of rock being smashed with a sledgehammer -- filled the air, followed by a chorus of scratches. The absol tried to scramble backwards, but his weight came down on his bad paw. As soon as it did, he collapsed on his knees with a high-pitched whine. He closed his eyes tightly until the pain faded, but when he opened them, he found that it was too late to escape.
A massive, red wave had risen from the inside of the crater and lingered on the edge. Then, it rushed like a tsunami at the dark-type creature. With a whimper, Absol struggled to stand, but the small, red beads that flowed towards him were already washing against his legs. Small mouths tore into his flesh.
Instantly, his eyes widened. He threw back his head, and his high-pitched howl filled the air.
Then, shortly after the howl began, it ended abruptly. The pokémon surrounding Fortree City would have no other warning.
Neither would the rest of Hoenn.
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