Ah, good job with this one. And now that you're using a superior paint program I'll have to be more... strict in critiquing your cards.
I'll point out the top four biggest problems with your card:
- Its flat out broken, it can hurt the entire opponent's play field without even one drawback >__0. I think that needs to be greatly tweaked.
- Use a US adv blank, it looks a bit off using a japanese adv blank without with no japanese text, lol. I tend to use fangking's adv blanks since they are of good quality:
https://projectservo.sifen7.com/fangblanks/fangadv/
just be sure not remove his name from the blank as he did create it.
- This is probably your biggest error. Text aligntment for well... everything is off. Look at a real card carefully. You can even take one of my more recent fake cards and use it to compare, it worked for me.
- Who did the Illustration? Sometimes, its the first thing a person sees when looking at a cool looking card. To me its a very important detail that should never be overlooked.
I mean no offense in your abilities, I'm just trying to help you get better is all. Overall though, its a average fake card, that I will admit. But I know you will do much better than that in the future, right? =) Well, keep up the good work!