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Ash's Kanto Adventures

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Newten5 said:
Oh, that's ashame, I wanted to see mooooore! XD This comic has loads of eppys, it's silly to waste it -_- Well make sure you have all the comics saved on your computer, maybe you can continue this one day -_^

~Newten5

Thanks for the tip. maybe one day I will.
 
I wanted to see more eppys but meh its ok.
 
*sighs* well let me just say that I am gonna still do my comics but I'll only post them on saturdays and on sudays. I can't do them on school days cause they give me so much homework. This doesn't mean I'll be giving up, this means that meh gots to much homework. No new eppys today nor tomorrow. I got a halloween party, ta ta.
 
Yay, he didn't quit XD Thanks for letting us know and have a nice halloween party ^_^

~Newten5
 
I'm getting....really tired of the text-under-the-panels in overworld comics. Use character-related colors for speech. And it would be nice if overworld comics had a plot other than a Pokémon journey, which is awfully cliché, but yours is copying the anime. Show some imagination other than plot twists...the special effects are ok, though.
 
Dragon-Chan said:
I'm getting....really tired of the text-under-the-panels in overworld comics. Use character-related colors for speech. And it would be nice if overworld comics had a plot other than a Pok?mon journey, which is awfully clich?, but yours is copying the anime. Show some imagination other than plot twists...the special effects are ok, though.

Well then if your tired don't post here. Post if and only if you like it. I'm getting tired of people who are just bored and post their crap.>.<

The comic Pwns.Better than the anime. a 10/10:D
 
Constructive criticism = improvement as long as it ISN'T TOO HARSH and the comic creator listens.
 
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What I don't understand is, why people don't like text under panels. What's wrong with it? It's way more organised and you can understand what is going on because of the depth in detail. And it looks a whole lot better, I can only remember one comic where the speech bubbles actually looked good. Most of the time they're horrible, scribbly circles that cover half the comic so you can't see any of the background. Why do people prefer speech bubbles, I just don't see what makes them better.

If you're gonna tell me what makes speech bubbles better, don't flame at me, I'm open minded enough to listen ^_^ I just want to understand.

Anyway, MT, I love your comics because I liked the anime, but why not also include your own episodes? You could still make all the episodes in the anime, but include your own episodes too. Just a suggestion ^_^

~Newten5
 
I won't flame at you. I think speech bubbles look more organized AND if the panels are big enough, the covering-up thing won't be so much of a problem. Most text-under-panels users make it look free-floating and don't box it in.
There, you've heard my opinion. :P I'm not referring to this comic specifically in saying that, i'm simply explaining why I don't like text-under-panels. Don't flame me. :P
 
Hmm, OK so you think speech bubbles are more organised, I think they can be, but sometimes they aren't. I was reading a comic with speech bubbles and I couldn't tell which bubble to read first, I did the logical thing and read from the top to the bottom, but then it still didn't make sense. I think speech bubbles are good when they are in time-order, meaning when you read the top one, the next one down is the thing said after the top one. If the one below the top one was supposed to be said before the top bubble, it gets confusing and unorganised.
So I suppose it depends on the comic maker....

The other thing is, when you want to have lots of talking in a comic, you have to make 10 times as many panels because there is so much text and if there was only for example 2 panels, the text would cover the panels completely. If you use text under panels, you can fit lots of text to one panel without wrecking the comic. You see what I mean?

I think it all depends on the comic - if its a comic with lots of writing, use text under panels. If there is less writing, use speech bubbles.

In both mine and MT's comics, there is too much text to use speech bubles, so we use text under panels. I think that settles it, if people thought of it that way, we wouldn't get all the flaming and arguments, don't you think? ^_^
 
Newten5 said:
Hmm, OK so you think speech bubbles are more organised, I think they can be, but sometimes they aren't. I was reading a comic with speech bubbles and I couldn't tell which bubble to read first, I did the logical thing and read from the top to the bottom, but then it still didn't make sense. I think speech bubbles are good when they are in time-order, meaning when you read the top one, the next one down is the thing said after the top one. If the one below the top one was supposed to be said before the top bubble, it gets confusing and unorganised.
So I suppose it depends on the comic maker....

The other thing is, when you want to have lots of talking in a comic, you have to make 10 times as many panels because there is so much text and if there was only for example 2 panels, the text would cover the panels completely. If you use text under panels, you can fit lots of text to one panel without wrecking the comic. You see what I mean?

I think it all depends on the comic - if its a comic with lots of writing, use text under panels. If there is less writing, use speech bubbles.

In both mine and MT's comics, there is too much text to use speech bubles, so we use text under panels. I think that settles it, if people thought of it that way, we wouldn't get all the flaming and arguments, don't you think? ^_^

Yes thats problem with speech bubbles. They cover the entire panel, which means you wion't get to see the action.:P
 
See, Harrison knows what I'm talkin about ^_^
 
Newten5 said:
What I don't understand is, why people don't like text under panels. What's wrong with it? It's way more organised and you can understand what is going on because of the depth in detail. And it looks a whole lot better, I can only remember one comic where the speech bubbles actually looked good. Most of the time they're horrible, scribbly circles that cover half the comic so you can't see any of the background. Why do people prefer speech bubbles, I just don't see what makes them better.

If you're gonna tell me what makes speech bubbles better, don't flame at me, I'm open minded enough to listen ^_^ I just want to understand.

Anyway, MT, I love your comics because I liked the anime, but why not also include your own episodes? You could still make all the episodes in the anime, but include your own episodes too. Just a suggestion ^_^

~Newten5
No, text under pannels makes you have to read the bottom. The text has to go into the picture to make it an effective comic. Text under pannels is better off saying, a fic with pics.
 
Daviku said:
No, text under pannels makes you have to read the bottom. The text has to go into the picture to make it an effective comic. Text under pannels is better off saying, a fic with pics.

Fine then Daviku, I'll post a comic I made and show you how crappy speech bubbles are^___^
 
......Okay. Anyway I updated and putted three new episodes. And I have been making the Dash Saga as we speak and I tell you its coming out good. I'll post two more tomorrow. Enjoy!^^
 
Yay he updated! *runs off to read eppys* ^_^
 
Lol thanks. Ask me anything you want. Except for "Why don't you put speech bubbles?" I've already told you guys.
 
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