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Well Sorry to burst your bubble ,but this is my first thread and I'm haveing trouble!!!!
 
Sabrina said:
Well Sorry to burst your bubble ,but this is my first thread and I'm haveing trouble!!!!
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...Well...sorry to burst YOUR bubble...but you are breaking the rules...

And I don't exactly like to be spoken to like that...I was trying to help, trying to give you a bit of advice on how to better your RPGing...without advice you will get no where...you didn't learn how to speak English without help, did you? The same goes for RPGing.

This may be your first RPG, but rules still apply and it wasn't as if I was being nasty to you now was it? All you need to do is lengthen your posts...nothing more...I understand completely that this is your first RPG, but there was no reason for you to snap at me when all I was trying to do was help...that?s what Moderators DO.
 
Sorry

Please Help Me Out!!!!!!!!! :'(
 
hey! give her a break! she just needs a little help. i'll help you! what kind of a friend would i be if i didn't. leave her alone!
 
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hey! give her a break! she just needs a little help. i'll help you! what kind of a friend would i be if i didn't. leave her alone!
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You both need to calm down and stop acting like babies. All strider was trying to do is help. She's a mod, it's her job to make sure everyone is following the rules, otherwise what good of a mod is she?

All she said was just make better rp post. Is that hard dude? Just rp better. If you guys need help I'm sure either of us will be glad to help out.

And for the record, she was helping out. She said the minimum was four sentences. She told you what quality of sentences they had to be, they have to include description and feelings of your character, and the reactions the character has to others. Which can turn into 4 paragraphs.

So just chill the next time, she tries to give advice. Yelling a mod is a very bad idea. If you have a dispute with a mod, it shouldn't be held in a public facility such as a thread. *hint* PM *hint*

I'm just keepin' it real, peeps. Best of luck to this RP, and if you heed the advice given, it should turn out fine and there should be no more problems.

(Also for the record, I helped out by clarifying her advice)
 
i know she was trying to help.i didn't mean to sound like i was upset.sorry strider!
 
Name- Naoto (Nay-oh-toh, not pronounced like Naota in FLCL nor spelled the same.)
Age- 15
Color of hair- black
Endangerd animal- Bengal Tiger
Additude- can be shy at first but once you get to know him, he can be courageous to fight for what he believes in.
(currently doesn't know his powers)
Weapon: claws and staff

No offense, but is this going to be an rp? I think we should actually start a story soon before the rp die before it started, just from a Mod helping out. PLus, I think that all natural forms of tiger are picked ^^ (funfact: Bengal Tiger is my favorite animal and has been since as long as I can remember, I always have my rp characters have something to do with them. Like my tiger demon in an InuYasha one and ect.)
 
can i use a dragon if not ill rewrite everyhing

name:piers
attitude:cool calm but ready to fight
age:12
color of hair:bluegreen
animal:black dragon
weapons:dragon fangs (two swords) unleashes eclipse
outfits: in mew mew black and gold koga's outfit looking thing gains claws
out of mew mew jeans green shirt white sneakers glasses
 
Yeah

Sure you can be a dragon. :classic:
 
i want to join :D (adn yea, im a boy)

Name-naruto
Age- 13
Color of hair-brown
Endangerd animal-lion monkey
Additude-calm and collected, but if angered, a force to be reconded with
Weapon-key staff (think keyblade, only longer, adn has no hand gaurd)
Clothes-
normal:red shirt and blue jeans, red hat and fire symbol necklace
mew mew:red clolor, tail(just like kiki) ears, and loose red shorts, with a black t-shirt with pendant symbol on it, i go bare foot when in this form, i can walk on glass and it dosnt hurt though :)

(that good? cuz i accctually like TMM/MMP :D)
 
Don't worry about it! There have been lots of guys who jioned.
 
(ok, now, how do we start this? im kinda bored.......)
 
((*yawn* this has been around for years.... and it hasn't even started... has it?))
 
Start

Okay then lets start. Where all in a foggy forest mysteriously sent there by monsters from another world. All of a sudden out of the fog there are 25 monsters starting to attack us. Watch out!!!! Silver Circle BLAST!!!!! Okay one down 24 to go. Lets go!!!!
 
(ok, this is going to get boring......you wexpect us to just HAVE our powers? ive only posted my des for cying out loud!!!!!!)

i heard fighting coming from an allyway (i think thats where you are....), so, i desided to investigate

when i got there i saw, predicites! they were suposed to have died off years ago!, well i guess im lucky i had my pendant

"mewtamophosis!" i said holding it in front of me

there was a bright flash of light and i changed, enfuzed with the spirit of the lion monkey

"you need help?" i asked the girl

"only if you can!" she sid without looking at me

"stand back" i said thinking of my old weapon

"keystaff crash!" i yelled slamming it on the ground

the blast from the attack obliterated 10 monsters, leaving 14 left

"how did you do-" she said finnally looking at me

(im going to say lavender, mainly because thats teh color of your hair, and you never told your eye color)

she had beautiful dancing lavender eyes, what teh, that wasnt me thinking that, i want into girls yet, was i?

"behind you!" she yelled

while i was still thinking i swung my keystaff behind me and clobbered it on the head

"poof" it dissapeared leaving a small dog and a jellyfish like thing

"ill take that" i isad grabbing teh jellyfish

"hey, mini" i siad holding out the predicite "got a snack for you"

minimew flew up and swallowed the predicite

"theres more wehre that came from" i siad to it

it was true, there were still 13 more monsters left, and they were all trying to attack that other girl!

"get away from her, dont you know its not poite to hit a lady?" i yelled

she seemed shocked to be called this

i started defeeating them left and right, hitting htis one in the face, smacking that one in the neck, you get the idea

after taht there was only one left, the big one

"double team it?" i asked

"you bet" she siad smiling

"keyblade crash!" "silver circle blast!"

the creature was obliterated, all that was left was, RATS! the girl saw this and imediatly jumped in my arms to get away from them

"mini, meal time" i said

she went over and ate teh last predicite

after all the rats were gone there was a flash of light, we had changed back

i set her down so seh wasnt in my arms anymore

"im stanlex" i said holding out my hand
 
Nice start!


"Aw man! You guys all ready started wihtout me!" said Ember as she was getting her breathe,after running all that way for nothing.

"Oh well! At least you deafeated them. My name's Ember. Nice to meet ya guys!"
 
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