Heheh I wouldint be to harsh guys =D We've all had are moments now ^^.
However you really should have started this as just a post ^^ In order to do a poll I think it would be more nicer to see at least 5 pixel arts so that they can get a overall rating, but the two you have are mainly inverts.
In more then one way, You need alot of practice and it would help you quite abit to know the true meening of pixel art, for though making it useing squares is one way, making it detailed and high in viberents and tones will also exsell in posts and the pleasentness of the piece, I'm glad to see you trying though and maybe after a little time it would be good to post this again ^^ but give your art skills time to mature before posting excelent as the defult.
in example.
O-o I waited a year before even posting my artwork here in october, that way I was already very well interactive with the programs and the meening of such things ^^. And if someone said something like the lines that is mensioned here, and shading and no defult colorings O-o I would know what they where talking about X3 as for right now I'm only having size issues, but once advanced threw it's best to practice =D
This is a very good try ^^ but practice will only advance your own stages as well.
And Vaat will you please stop being a Report Poucher X3 I like ya and all but many of these are very honest! =D I'm sure this wasint ment to be spam, I can tell from the work he did and how he is reacting this was mearly a cerios issue =3