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Alright...this is a 'fic I've been working on for a few months now, an OT story set in Hoenn...I've slowed down quite considerably in the production of new chapters, much to the infuriation of my FFnet fans...ack...but that's school to blame, there. Anyway, I'll post one chapter a day--if people start responding, of course--and I've written fourteen so far...please review and tell me what you thought of them, and how I can improve. It's cool if it's just a "good chapter" or whatever, but it makes me feel more special if you can tell me what you liked...or what you didn't, of course. (That makes me feel less special but it can help me write better.) =]
Anyway...on to the story! It is rated PG-13 for mention of mature ideas, occasional swear words (none especially serious) and, later, violence. So nothing really hardcore or whatever, it might make you a bit uncomfortable if you're younger than thirteen, though. =]
Blackbird
Chapter One: A Wish or a Prayer?
The sun rose early in the eastern sky, burning with the fury of the coming summer. Wingulls took up their raucous calling, gliding on the breezes like scraps of cloth. The sun?s rays slowly crept up the sides of the ancient crater before spilling over its edge and making the white stone glow. Sootopolis City gradually came to life.
Noirsha Hunter awoke with a start as someone flung the light, summer sheets from her bed.
"Wakey wakey, Nori! First day of summer hols! Six AM, doesn?t do to waste the day! UPUPUPUP, LET?S GO LET?S GO!!"
Nori clutched at her pillow protectively, drawing her legs up against her chest. "No! Wanna? sleeeeeeeeeeeep?"
"Nonsense, sillypants!"
"Go AWAY, Mark!"
"You are SUCH a grouch in the morning."
"It?s not morning! It?s still bloody dark out?" whined Nori, covering her head with her pillow.
"Dark? It?s been light for half an hour! You?re wasting time."
"Shush, there?s no such time as six in the morning, only six in the too bloody early!"
"Do I have to bodily haul you into the lake? You know I will," said Mark, tapping his foot impatiently as Nori groaned into her pillow.
"Fiiiiiiine?"
"GREAT! I?ve got your shorts and a t-shirt and your b?"
"DAMMIT MARK I CAN GET MY OWN CLOTHES?"
"Rightoh, I?ll just skitter off into the hallway, shall I? O-kay."
Mark quickly vacated Nori?s room, closing the door behind him. Nori re-emerged a moment later, pulling on a pair of much-worn men?s khaki shorts over her boxers. She glared at him with bleary, dark green eyes.
"Who let you in, anyway?"
"Myself. I think your brothers are still asleep."
"They?d sleep through a three-alarm fire, the ba?"
"So, are we ready to go?" asked Mark brightly, beaming at Nori.
"Yeah, yeah," said Nori, straightening her black tank top and running a hand through her spiky, chestnut bangs, "Whatever you?URK!"
Mark had grabbed her hand and started running, while she helplessly stumbled along in his wake. They thundered down the stairs, through a hallway and the kitchen and paused briefly enough for Nori to grab her sandals before flying out the door.
Nori felt better after she pushed Mark off the dock.
~*~*~
Sootopolis Island was an old volcano crater, made of the white ash spewed out by the earth in days long past. The city was built on the inside of the crater, the rock terraced to create a flat surface. In the center of the crater, rainwater had collected over the ages, creating a treacherously deep freshwater lake. To the annoyance of most trainers, it contained mostly magikarp, but tales were told of things much older in the deeps?and especially of the Cave of Origin.
Growing up in Sootopolis, children learned to swim, run and climb very quickly. With daily practice running up and down sets of stairs most of the day, the local high school?s track and field team regularly dominated the other teams from Hoenn, and this year were poised for victory over Johto and Kanto in a tri-region meet. Swimming they were excellent at as well, but the real titans were the Pacifidlog and various Orange Island teams.
Mark and Nori were no exception to this rule, even going beyond what was normally seen. They lived outside, really, most of the summer, and most people had no idea why they hadn?t gone out on their trainer?s quests yet. Mark was eighteen and Nori seventeen, and by those ages most kids had been out training, won badges and come home already. Also perplexing to most gossips was their romantic status; many things were suggested, but there was no real evidence, and the pair refused to confirm anything. Mark had a talent for not hearing questions he didn?t want to answer, and Nori deserved a medal for changing the direction of a conversation.
Sootopolis was small, only a few thousand people, like most towns in Hoenn. It was dubbed a city not because of population, but due to Wallace?s position as a gym leader. The island was famous for one other thing: berries.
Berries, used by trainers as cheap alternatives to the artificially produced status-rectifying potions, or as ingredients in the mysterious candy called pok?blocks, were difficult to grow: they required a certain amount of water, sunlight, a certain type of soil?but if those requirements were fulfilled, the plants grew rapidly. Sootopolis, with its sub-tropical climate and volcanic soil, wasn?t quite ideal?but it worked. Berry trees of many different shades flourished on every slope, yielding a crop of berries every few days or weeks, depending on the berry. Every house had at least three old trees in their backyard, tended by successive generations of residents.
Nori was her house?s unofficial berry tender, and she was good at it, too. It was mostly because of her that her family was able to scratch out a living, although few people knew this?
"Hey! Wait, wait dammit!"
"Wouldja look at that sky? Beautiful!" Mark stood on a pinnacle of rock on the edge of the crater, the sea-salt breeze ruffling his extremely curly, unkempt light brown hair, while Nori scrabbled to gain a hold on the rock. He bent down and seized both of Nori?s forearms before hauling her easily up onto the rock.
"Urk! Thanks?"
"Don? mention it."
They formed an interesting pair; Mark was muscular and of average height, five foot ten or so, and Nori was as thin as a rail, five foot eight and her womanly curves rating depressingly low. What little flesh she did have on her bones was muscle gained from eleven years of tussling with Mark. Much to her annoyance, he still had her beat with everything they did except for school, swimming and berry growing. They were constantly in motion, save for when they were sleeping. With Mark it was obvious, but with Nori it wasn?t immediately apparent. She tended to be quiet and rather cynical, ranging on bitter. Mark was energetic and never let anything get him down for long.
Mark hopped off the rock onto another, arms outstretched and whistling. Nori clambered down, following on the ground. She was all right with most heights, but the dizzying sheer drop on the outside edge of the crater was too much for her.
They stopped to flop down in front of an ancient, weathered pecha berry tree, overlooking the ocean. The two sat in silence for a while, listening to the roar of the sea against the rock of the island. A few wingulls swooped and dove, their thin bodies supported by the gentle breeze. Fluffy, white clouds passed lazily overhead. The sea sparkled in the sun to the edge of the horizon, where you might fancy you saw Mossdeep Island.
"So?" said Mark, quietly, suddenly serious. "Your dad get a job yet?"
Nori was silent a long time before she sighed, and answered, "No?not yet."
"It?ll be all right. Something?ll turn up," said Mark, syrupy brown eyes concerned. Nori seemed to be staring very intently at a point in the air in front of her.
"No?it won?t," she said, quietly. "Ever since?ever since mom died, he?s?" Nori trailed off. Mark sneaked a glance at her; she was hastily rubbing her eyes. "Well?if it wasn?t for the berries, and for Andrew?s pair of delcatties? I don?t know if we?d be able to feed ourselves. I want to get away?go off pok?mon training?but I can?t. They?re all lazy bastards, every one of them. They don?t care?the only reason they haven?t kicked me out is because I pay the bills?"
Mark stared at the ground, biting his lower lip as if debating with himself. Finally he sighed, and put an arm around Nori?s shoulders, pulling her closer. "You?ve been dealt some pretty bad hands?this is the first time I?ve seen you really broken up about it. What happened?"
"We?re done high school, Mark. I realized that if I don?t do something?about my family, I?m never going to go anywhere. I?m going to be stuck on this island shipping berries and skitty kittens to Lilycove while my brothers and my father sit around all day alternately jacking off and eating, all the while talking about the jobs they?re sure they?re going to get. I can?t take it anymore."
Mark felt her twitch slightly, as if she wanted to fling herself onto his shoulder and sob hysterically, but instead Nori got to her feet and started running down the path back inside the town.
"Nori? Wait a m?" Mark trailed off. "Gods. Like a stantler, that one," he said to himself as he watched her run. He leaned back, sighing. "Women." He then rose to his feet and started running after her.
Anyway...on to the story! It is rated PG-13 for mention of mature ideas, occasional swear words (none especially serious) and, later, violence. So nothing really hardcore or whatever, it might make you a bit uncomfortable if you're younger than thirteen, though. =]
Blackbird
Chapter One: A Wish or a Prayer?
The sun rose early in the eastern sky, burning with the fury of the coming summer. Wingulls took up their raucous calling, gliding on the breezes like scraps of cloth. The sun?s rays slowly crept up the sides of the ancient crater before spilling over its edge and making the white stone glow. Sootopolis City gradually came to life.
Noirsha Hunter awoke with a start as someone flung the light, summer sheets from her bed.
"Wakey wakey, Nori! First day of summer hols! Six AM, doesn?t do to waste the day! UPUPUPUP, LET?S GO LET?S GO!!"
Nori clutched at her pillow protectively, drawing her legs up against her chest. "No! Wanna? sleeeeeeeeeeeep?"
"Nonsense, sillypants!"
"Go AWAY, Mark!"
"You are SUCH a grouch in the morning."
"It?s not morning! It?s still bloody dark out?" whined Nori, covering her head with her pillow.
"Dark? It?s been light for half an hour! You?re wasting time."
"Shush, there?s no such time as six in the morning, only six in the too bloody early!"
"Do I have to bodily haul you into the lake? You know I will," said Mark, tapping his foot impatiently as Nori groaned into her pillow.
"Fiiiiiiine?"
"GREAT! I?ve got your shorts and a t-shirt and your b?"
"DAMMIT MARK I CAN GET MY OWN CLOTHES?"
"Rightoh, I?ll just skitter off into the hallway, shall I? O-kay."
Mark quickly vacated Nori?s room, closing the door behind him. Nori re-emerged a moment later, pulling on a pair of much-worn men?s khaki shorts over her boxers. She glared at him with bleary, dark green eyes.
"Who let you in, anyway?"
"Myself. I think your brothers are still asleep."
"They?d sleep through a three-alarm fire, the ba?"
"So, are we ready to go?" asked Mark brightly, beaming at Nori.
"Yeah, yeah," said Nori, straightening her black tank top and running a hand through her spiky, chestnut bangs, "Whatever you?URK!"
Mark had grabbed her hand and started running, while she helplessly stumbled along in his wake. They thundered down the stairs, through a hallway and the kitchen and paused briefly enough for Nori to grab her sandals before flying out the door.
Nori felt better after she pushed Mark off the dock.
~*~*~
Sootopolis Island was an old volcano crater, made of the white ash spewed out by the earth in days long past. The city was built on the inside of the crater, the rock terraced to create a flat surface. In the center of the crater, rainwater had collected over the ages, creating a treacherously deep freshwater lake. To the annoyance of most trainers, it contained mostly magikarp, but tales were told of things much older in the deeps?and especially of the Cave of Origin.
Growing up in Sootopolis, children learned to swim, run and climb very quickly. With daily practice running up and down sets of stairs most of the day, the local high school?s track and field team regularly dominated the other teams from Hoenn, and this year were poised for victory over Johto and Kanto in a tri-region meet. Swimming they were excellent at as well, but the real titans were the Pacifidlog and various Orange Island teams.
Mark and Nori were no exception to this rule, even going beyond what was normally seen. They lived outside, really, most of the summer, and most people had no idea why they hadn?t gone out on their trainer?s quests yet. Mark was eighteen and Nori seventeen, and by those ages most kids had been out training, won badges and come home already. Also perplexing to most gossips was their romantic status; many things were suggested, but there was no real evidence, and the pair refused to confirm anything. Mark had a talent for not hearing questions he didn?t want to answer, and Nori deserved a medal for changing the direction of a conversation.
Sootopolis was small, only a few thousand people, like most towns in Hoenn. It was dubbed a city not because of population, but due to Wallace?s position as a gym leader. The island was famous for one other thing: berries.
Berries, used by trainers as cheap alternatives to the artificially produced status-rectifying potions, or as ingredients in the mysterious candy called pok?blocks, were difficult to grow: they required a certain amount of water, sunlight, a certain type of soil?but if those requirements were fulfilled, the plants grew rapidly. Sootopolis, with its sub-tropical climate and volcanic soil, wasn?t quite ideal?but it worked. Berry trees of many different shades flourished on every slope, yielding a crop of berries every few days or weeks, depending on the berry. Every house had at least three old trees in their backyard, tended by successive generations of residents.
Nori was her house?s unofficial berry tender, and she was good at it, too. It was mostly because of her that her family was able to scratch out a living, although few people knew this?
"Hey! Wait, wait dammit!"
"Wouldja look at that sky? Beautiful!" Mark stood on a pinnacle of rock on the edge of the crater, the sea-salt breeze ruffling his extremely curly, unkempt light brown hair, while Nori scrabbled to gain a hold on the rock. He bent down and seized both of Nori?s forearms before hauling her easily up onto the rock.
"Urk! Thanks?"
"Don? mention it."
They formed an interesting pair; Mark was muscular and of average height, five foot ten or so, and Nori was as thin as a rail, five foot eight and her womanly curves rating depressingly low. What little flesh she did have on her bones was muscle gained from eleven years of tussling with Mark. Much to her annoyance, he still had her beat with everything they did except for school, swimming and berry growing. They were constantly in motion, save for when they were sleeping. With Mark it was obvious, but with Nori it wasn?t immediately apparent. She tended to be quiet and rather cynical, ranging on bitter. Mark was energetic and never let anything get him down for long.
Mark hopped off the rock onto another, arms outstretched and whistling. Nori clambered down, following on the ground. She was all right with most heights, but the dizzying sheer drop on the outside edge of the crater was too much for her.
They stopped to flop down in front of an ancient, weathered pecha berry tree, overlooking the ocean. The two sat in silence for a while, listening to the roar of the sea against the rock of the island. A few wingulls swooped and dove, their thin bodies supported by the gentle breeze. Fluffy, white clouds passed lazily overhead. The sea sparkled in the sun to the edge of the horizon, where you might fancy you saw Mossdeep Island.
"So?" said Mark, quietly, suddenly serious. "Your dad get a job yet?"
Nori was silent a long time before she sighed, and answered, "No?not yet."
"It?ll be all right. Something?ll turn up," said Mark, syrupy brown eyes concerned. Nori seemed to be staring very intently at a point in the air in front of her.
"No?it won?t," she said, quietly. "Ever since?ever since mom died, he?s?" Nori trailed off. Mark sneaked a glance at her; she was hastily rubbing her eyes. "Well?if it wasn?t for the berries, and for Andrew?s pair of delcatties? I don?t know if we?d be able to feed ourselves. I want to get away?go off pok?mon training?but I can?t. They?re all lazy bastards, every one of them. They don?t care?the only reason they haven?t kicked me out is because I pay the bills?"
Mark stared at the ground, biting his lower lip as if debating with himself. Finally he sighed, and put an arm around Nori?s shoulders, pulling her closer. "You?ve been dealt some pretty bad hands?this is the first time I?ve seen you really broken up about it. What happened?"
"We?re done high school, Mark. I realized that if I don?t do something?about my family, I?m never going to go anywhere. I?m going to be stuck on this island shipping berries and skitty kittens to Lilycove while my brothers and my father sit around all day alternately jacking off and eating, all the while talking about the jobs they?re sure they?re going to get. I can?t take it anymore."
Mark felt her twitch slightly, as if she wanted to fling herself onto his shoulder and sob hysterically, but instead Nori got to her feet and started running down the path back inside the town.
"Nori? Wait a m?" Mark trailed off. "Gods. Like a stantler, that one," he said to himself as he watched her run. He leaned back, sighing. "Women." He then rose to his feet and started running after her.